Not the Last Airbender

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Binge_Reader69

the story is pretty boring so far, the prologue was very interesting and i thought the story would be around that time but so far its just been a very boring childhood with a bunch of filler that idgaf about, im probably gonna wait till the story gets somewhere near where the prologue was and skip to there

LV 13

Rizz_god

I just started reading this fan fiction and I like it so far. I haven't read much yet, only four chapters, but I think it's going to be good because Vandalizer is one of the co-authors. I hope the ending of this story turns out better than 'Not the Avatar'. The text has fewer grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors than Not the Avatar's fanfic. I hope it will continue to improve.

LV 5

Randomguyno1

It's an ok fic, it's neither good nor bad. I read until chapter 10, it's kind of boring because of the same old cliche powerless protag in a fantasy world. Dialogues are very monotone and make you sleepy.

LV 4

True_Vanity

I’m praying the author succeeds in making a realistic and sweet relationship between Aki and Azula. Rarely is an azula ship done well but I believe the author might be able to pull it off!

LV 14

NiDaMaDa

It's very good. It feels original unlike most fanfics. The conversations are good, but everytime he calls mei 'little one', I die of cringe. Please no more.

LV 4

Imperial_Fox

Oh how frustrating the MC is. He literally spends more than half of the time just complaining about bs instead of doing anything about it. Firstly, what's the point in even making him a reincarnator if he doesn't remember things properly, and even when he does, he hasn't done anything using those memories to benefit himself. next, MC has ADHD, doesn't focus on things, phases out randomly, most of the time is spent on inner monologues. till now, there hasn't been any major development to plot. This fanfic just feels like a waste of time. sure you might like it, but it doesn't have 'quality' in it.

LV 4

nightsking18

Came from the Not Avatar book from Vandalizer since I enjoyed reading it. And this one until chapter 4 is also not disappointing. The prologue is written great. It immediatly grapped my attention to the story and let me want to know more about the main character. How the MC is build untill know is also great(I once had an idea of doing something similar not exactly the same but simalar also insteas as a brother between azula and zuko), but this book definetly did it better than my attempt.

LV 14

Mead_Me

Very well written. Chapters are well thought out. I don't think it needed to be an isekai based on the plot so far, but it doesn't use it as a crutch either. Anyway, it's good. Just read it.

LV 4

BloodAngel_San

fantastic start. I hope it remains a romantic book. Romantic fics with Azula are rare... Also please please don't make him op af

LV 1

GodOfLight

It's an ok fic, it's neither good nor bad. I read until chapter 10, it's kind of boring because of the same old cliche powerless protag in a fantasy world. Dialogues are very monotone and make you sleepy.

LV 11

SalveYing

I enjoy how the story unfolds, but I have a question: is this a translation? If it is, could you give me the name? And if it's not, keep up the good work.

LV 5

Baneofthedragon

Okay!! Here's my review! 1. In the beginning we see a glimpse of what mc will become loved it. Then it goes back to how it all began, loving it.2. The grammar is good and story building is very interesting.3. A new take on the isekai trope love it!

LV 14

My_Evil_God

Amazing point of view and unique concept.

LV 10

Word7

It's good. Writing is smooth and spelling/punctuation is nice. I just find it boring. Like really boring. A big factor is probably due to the prologue. Why add it? That's like so far off into the book. It leaves me bored.

LV 14

KenkaShori

I need moar

It's really awesome, I would like to say that it's brilliant. It's not just a fan fiction, it's another world with realistic characters and interesting story.

LV 4

lawrence_

I like this, just don't stop writing . . . .

LV 4

The_man_The_myth

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LV 4

Zaroca

This is an amazing avatar ff, without an brainless mc and with some development to the point of training and the isekai conduces some parts but is not the main