Some ideas to throw out there (not that you will need them as the story is really good untill know). Colonization of some island parts above of sothoryos plus the exploration. Bit more of preparations for white walkers in the north (But do not make them to powerfull unlike most people I actually liked the white walkers from the show and how powerfull they were). Exploration of valyria (Not fully perse, but more like initial investigation of why it is inaccessible. Prohibition of magic in the kingdom, like that from Melisandre, nightsking and dragons and such are destruction weapons I think the prussians wouldn't want anyone to have acces to.
I remind you to leave your ideas or what you would like to see.
Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
The other story is also really good! I don't know if you played the mod yourself or watched it on youtube, but I got to know it from pravus who has quite a few playthroughs with it. Only thing I would want extra from that story's is like a map to see until where the conquest is as I do recognize the names, but cant really place with how big it is.
In case anyone is interested, I decided to write a story to distract me from the research I do for some chapters of this fanfic, it's called Industrial Baron in Caesar's Legion, it's more violent because there is no need to keep up appearances.
Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
First of great idea for a story. But it feels written by AI lot of repeated elements about grand destiny's, purposes and such without making much sense. I once tried using AI to write a story and these same elements popped out. I recommend to lessen them to an extend and maybe only use it as an guideline to then change to what you want or refining sentence structures.
One hand is supposed to be a claw right?
He glanced down at his hands, still trying to get used to the sight of them. They were rough and scarred, the skin darkened and toughened like the hide of some deep-sea creature. His fingers twitched slightly, the joints stiff, but when he willed them to move, they obeyed, gripping the wheel with a strength that felt unfamiliar yet instinctive.
The Devil of the Sea
Anime & Comics · LT_Ryuu_X
+1
So, for people who want to choose 1 option you know the drill comment here.
Last True Remnant of Old Valyria
Book&Literature · Daeranyx_Drakonar
To break a curse he could go to pirates where the trident of Poseidon would break all curses of the sea. (Just a potential idea)
Jurassic World
Lord of the Seas (rewrite)
Video Games · Some_creative_name
+1
Jurassic World
Lord of the Seas (rewrite)
Video Games · Some_creative_name
+1
personally I would have chosen the ghost path next to the illusionist one (ghost path may help with souls and maybe gives intangibility which would help against physical opponents) and the illusionist path as how you described it sounds cool. What you chose ofcourse is also fun(just a bit tired of MCs and darkness affinity) but like liches so that is a plus
Great story! for me in the middle saga at the middle an part of ending of hoenn I fell a bit off(most likely personal taste), but after that it started to get great again like the arc of this region more and can't wait to see how MC and his pokemon continue to grow and solve mysterys around the world! P.S. did like the buffs he got during those arcs just liked the development less bit to pessimistic for my taste. P.S.S. maybe for the future more development of other characters/pokemon could make the story even better
A random pokemon journey
Video Games · loskro