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One Piece: The Demon of Fire

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Autor: GodaSensei

4.31 (16 Bewertungen)

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Zusammenfassung

Our MC dies and is transmigrate in the world of One Piece, in the body of an old man with the appearance of Yamamoto from Bleach, and receives his template, the bad thing is that he appears at the time of the Ohara Incident surrounded by 10 marine ships about to destroy the island. How can he survive in the face of this catastrophe?

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I_Only_Love_milfs

Author i like the premise of your story but a few things can be improved. Like you tend to drag the scene everytime and make it unnecessarily over dramatic. Moreover you can use an app to correct the spelling and grammatical mistakes. Do it write now otherwise....

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shin_rae_miu

its a autobiography(template) system story. needs proof reader and editor. if this is not a translation (which seems like it) then the author should change the system of the template system. just ask your self this, what is the point of a template system? is it to emulate the strength of one character or is it to emulate the life of one character? cause frankly as it is currently it seems like its the latter. great potential and great concept whether its original or not its great nonetheless but no matter how great a potential or the concept of a fic is, if the delivery is bad then the story is bad in general, so its better to make sure every chapter to have as little mistakes as possible.

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Ryuu23

The idea is interesting, but nothing more. The author is not friendly with logic. The system is too complicated for him, because it involves elementary mathematics. The hero is also not pleasant to associate with. Named characters also live, simply “because”.

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stuff0069

I'm enjoying it greatly so far. Takes inspiration from the novel "My disciples are all villains". if you've read that and enjoyed it, you'll most likely enjoy this too.

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Upcoming_Region

Honestly, most people will say how it's bad from the two reviews I've seen but all in all it's not too bad. The grammar is fine not the best but understandable. The main character is below average in my opinion. The background is pretty good and I like it though personally I like darker type of main characters and worlds. It's all in all just an average time killer novel that's not too good nor bad.

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Love_4_you

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tegar007

Great story keep you posted on little bit on the slow side but fine[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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VonBritannia

one of the most unique fanfics out there. the power itself is not unique as a lot of fanfics have gone the yamoto route but this way does it in a way better then anyone else.

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Tigercat129

Yes, so awesome, keep it up. Hope I see the next chapter keep on doing the good work.

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AERIC35

it is good ...it is refreshing to have MC who is in old body in one piece...your story development is very good so far ...and it is good that MC is not OP from the start...keep it up

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Arjav_Jain_3271

It's really nice. There are very few novels in which character turns old after reincarnating. Looking forward for new chapters.

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Rio_Bladimir

Hay bastantes incoherencias y el desarrollo es algo complicado el tipo parece olvidarse que le dió el poder de un almirante al principio al proto y la recompensa fue baja además de que al parecer no hay marines fuertes buscándolo para matarlo y se agrega el punto de que no ven nada raro en la disminucion de fuerza del viejo

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Ryan_42
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It's nothing revolutionary, but it's an interesting story you should check out if you have the time. I find the weakest point of the story is the characters. I personally can not find one side character I want to see more of in the story. They are all boring and low-key annoy me

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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Haidarah

you won't regret reading this, the Author is so professional .

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Volumen 1

  1. 1
    “Awakening in Ohara” 1 years ago
  2. 2
    "Burn" 1 years ago
  3. 3
    "Hell" 1 years ago
  4. 4
    "Lesson to future admirals" 1 years ago
  5. 5
    "Store" 1 years ago
  6. 6
    "New Mission" 1 years ago
  7. 7
    "Leaving Ohara" 1 years ago
  8. 8
    "Olvia's request" 1 years ago
  9. 9
    "Yamamoto vs Zephyr" 1 years ago
  10. 10
    "Negotiate" 1 years ago
  11. 11
    "System operation" 1 years ago
  12. 12
    "First Reward" 1 years ago
  13. 13
    "Unknown girl" 1 years ago
  14. 14
    “Arrival at Battleship Island” 1 years ago
  15. 15
    "Millennial Dragon" 1 years ago
  16. 16
    “Secondary Mission” 1 years ago
  17. 17
    “Boxing Bags” 1 years ago
  18. 18
    “Opportunity” 1 years ago
  19. 19
    “Search” 1 years ago
  20. 20
    “Lost Island” 1 years ago
  21. 21
    “Windfall” 1 years ago
  22. 22
    “Error” 1 years ago
  23. 23
    “New strength” 1 years ago
  24. 24
    “Training” 1 years ago
  25. 25
    “Training 2” 1 years ago
  26. 26
    “Training 3” 1 years ago
  27. 27
    "Teaching" 1 years ago
  28. 28
    “Genius” 1 years ago
  29. 29
    “First week” 1 years ago
  30. 30
    “Elixir” 1 years ago
  31. 31
    “Absent leader” 1 years ago
  32. 32
    “Strategy” 1 years ago
  33. 33
    “A method not so effective” 1 years ago
  34. 34
    “End of training” 1 years ago
  35. 35
    “New destiny” 1 years ago
  36. 36
    "Leaving" 1 years ago
  37. 37
    “Interrogation” 1 years ago
  38. 38
    “Gild Tesoro” 1 years ago
  39. 39
    “Celestial Dragon” 1 years ago
  40. 40
    “Arriving at the Kingdom of Ilisia” 1 years ago
  41. 41
    “Uncovered” 1 years ago
  42. 42
    “Testing the new strength” 1 years ago
  43. 43
    “Target: Celestial Dragon” 1 years ago
  44. 44
    “Save” 1 years ago
  45. 45
    “Two birds with one Stone” 1 years ago
  46. 46
    “Sacrifice” 1 years ago
  47. 47
    “Okama King” 1 years ago
  48. 48
    “Death blow” 1 years ago
  49. 49
    “Escape” 1 years ago
  50. 50
    “City in chaos” 1 years ago
  51. 51
    “Small talk” 1 years ago
  52. 52
    “Barrier” 1 years ago
  53. 53
    “Shinigami Academy” 1 years ago
  54. 54
    “New Reward” 1 years ago
  55. 55
    “Critical condition” 1 years ago
  56. 56
    “Main mission” 1 years ago
  57. 57
    “Meeting” 1 years ago
  58. 58
    “Founding Members” 1 years ago
  59. 59
    “Gotei 13” 1 years ago
  60. 60
    “New captains” 1 years ago
  61. 61
    “Short trip” 1 years ago
  62. 62
    “Strange girl” 1 years ago
  63. 63
    “Payday and healing” 1 years ago
  64. 64
    “Upcoming events” 1 years ago
  65. 65
    “Future plans” 1 years ago
  66. 66
    “Moving” 1 years ago
  67. 67
    “Evacuate” 1 years ago
  68. 68
    “Admirals” 1 years ago
  69. 69
    “Yamamoto vs Sengoku” 1 years ago
  70. 70
    “Defensive Fire Wall” 1 years ago
  71. 71
    “Hadō #96” 1 years ago
  72. 72
    “Great reward” 1 years ago
  73. 73
    “Funeral” 1 years ago
  74. 74
    “Reverse Mountain” 1 years ago
  75. 75
    “Grand Line” 1 years ago
  76. 76
    “Aurora Island” 1 years ago
  77. 77
    “Democratic Council” 1 years ago
  78. 78
    “First mission” 1 years ago
  79. 79
    “Destiny: Elbaf” 1 years ago
  80. 80
    “Escape Impel Down” 1 years ago
  81. 81
    “Saving slaves” 1 years ago
  82. 82
    “Auction House” 1 years ago
  83. 83
    “New system functionality” 1 years ago
  84. 84
    “Capture Red Dragon” 1 years ago
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