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Hello, Reader I am giving myself a shameless 5-star review, because that seems to be a tradition here. Before reading this novel, there is a brutal scene with one of the female-lead characters at the beginning of the story. (Also, I am not a native English speaker, so please expect some errors. If you could tell me what mistakes I made, I will do my best to correct them)
I am loving this book! I keep having flashbacks to playing MTG and trying to picture how the spells and effects would look. All in all, 10/10 would recomend to a friend.
Author! One question, will the MC hide his identity and powers? From the chapters I read, that's the impression I got. I would also like to know if you have a group on Discord?
So you get destroyed professionally , get ghosted by everyone, tortured physically and mentally, your girlfriend who betrayed you for whatever reason and still gets humiliated in front of you, you have your body practically ripped apart and at last die of pain and suffering... Then you get the gift of ressurection and the first thing you do is go to a government body to announce you are alive full of optimism and vigor in a society where the guy who started your nightmare is about to ascent to the throne as the emperor on the very same day? Yeah! I read enough and am out of here, the entry setting is a character break in itself, no logical or even broken individual will even act like the MC did here... This world which has the ability of ressurection, with a cruel royal family somehow doesnt has the ability to sound the alarm when a flagged person especially a guy personally Offed by the royal family comes and announces that he is alive... Cool
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Amazing novel................................ 👌👏 ................. ................ ............... .............. ............. ............ ...........
I really like the premise of the story, but the characters are just really bad. ALL the girls are just potential members of mcs half-hearted harem. The guys are a lot more interesting, except the mc. Daniel (the mc) is really indecisive and has no actual goal except a vague promise he gave to michaela of "building a sanctuary for the oppressed" which isn't the focus of the story at all. The story essentially just revolves around Daniel getting harassed by the hightower, Daniel fights the high tower off with absolutely no problem but doesn't really retaliate for whatever reasons (indecisive) and emboldened by Daniels inaction the hightower comes back for more. Rinse and repeat. Daniel is also pretty stupid. The author tries to make him look like he's smart, but he really just isn't. A lot of his decisions are just... weak. I guess he has to act this way because the author made the mc just too strong, so the only way to create some tension is to have Daniel just not use his power against the hightower. (the big bad organisation) And what is his explanation for not unleashing his overwhelming might against this objectively evil genocidal organisation? Because he SIMPS for an incompetent woman who is against violence. EVEN THOUGH this organisation has tried and succeeded in causing significant harm to his loved ones MULTIPLE TIMES and he STILL doesn't fight back. Btw, he also has no problems flirting with a woman who openly supports slavery. Its infuriating, really.
Really an amazing story. The writing is more than correct without discrepancy and not much typos(I have seen two but I am not an English native ) the power system is pretty good, the characters are interesting and attaching and the plot advance at a good pace without too much fan-Service(as much as I like it too much can alter negatively the story) . All-in-all it's one of the most interesting novel I've read (top ten) and is the best in the magical-realism tag (modern with fantasy or eastern fantasy) Please continue writing with peace of mind[img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=recommend][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]
It’s kinda annoying that you introduce this card system and barely even tell us what cards he gets. I know it’s alot but still it would be nice if we had a just a general idea like like out of this pack we got a artifact or out of this pack we got a summon ect and not just we got some random stuff so you can just make up things on the fly as you think of them also you havent actualized vlad which is tilting yet you actualized the other lengendary as soon as you got it and tried another but the system went on cool down. Tbh I’m reading for the gacha system and kingdom building alone but it feels like both of those things kinda just get brushed aside and we don’t get to see the progress of said things just the result. And this whole hearm thing you are trying to do feels really japan and vanilla asf where we don’t see anything and it gets left up to our imaginations at that point why even add it at all. Also the mc is kinda a sImp reminds me of normal isekai wimp protags
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AI writing is to heavy.can you use AI just as assistan not tools?it made reader sick when reading.If you write books like that you will banned you know?
Too much info dump , it gets so much annoying later on, also it gets so much more boring I can't even seem to cope so I'ma drop this and move on to another novel
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
A worthwhile read. The story progresses rather well, the world building is slowly introduced thru the chapters, and tbr character development is solid for the main characters but leave something to desire for the minor ones at this point.
This is novel has a unique concept that I have never seen (using Cards for Classes, Artifacts, Characters etc) and the novel is very well written. Hope for the story to continues with same intensity 🔥🔥🔥.
monkey 🐒 . great book, not giving it 5 stars on stability because it currently has some issues with the update stability but other than that it's great and unique(for now)
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I highly enjoy the story and would love to read more. Unfortunately, I'm poor as dirt so I can't do so but I'm caught up to before prevledged wish there were more wavent read in 3 days now.
Had great potential, this novel gave me the same feeling when I first read Lord of Mysteries. I have no problem with harem, but to me it ruins the storytelling and due to that I’m dropping this novel, which is such a waste because this could have become something great.
amazing story and extremely well written until a certain point. the world building is great, but author made a few mistakes which led to more and more.spoilers ahead So, if you wanted to give him profession card, make it so he can only have one profession at a time or something to reduce the OPness. make the world larger by adding realms so even if hes's overpowered it can be enjoyed.you see the problem starts at the time when Card shop just closes and for another 50 something chapters that I've read it doesn't open. while closing it is a short term solution it takes away the most valuable part of the story that is the Card System. It gets extremely boring after he loses access to Card Shop as after that it's just him having ancient knowledge and stuff and creating things. also adding the daughter was just .. nah. like I do not hate it just it's too early and on tip of that continuously writing Slice of Life and Business novel... that's just wasted potential. The battles also become boring because he no longer needs cards and can just fight experts beyond top level easily and he doesn't even use the legendary card summons like the Amazon Queen or Michaela. But the worst part is all the business talk which is so boring that at this point i just skip it.
I love how his story actually has depth and most of the key character don't fell like there forgotten about. plus I mean it's based of MTG so of course it's getting my seal fo approval.
All in all I'm trying to figure out why these always read like wish fulfillment works.The MC always winds up becoming an absolute nightmare and as far from thier original self as possible. All while failing to realise they're far worse than those they hated in the first place.Truly it would be nice if for once the old addage of When seeking revenge be sure to dig two graves would happen.
weird dialogue and surprise world background without explanation. the main charecter is stupid and naive.
the world is interesting. mc cheat is neat though sometimes unclear as to its limitations/effects.the characters are pretty forced. the main love interest is a moronic bimbo. the 'daughter' is completely forced and just there for show and to add words all the time. the other characters are less bad however. I will say after 20 times of not knowing anything its getting old. he is dancing around the rules effectively but somehow never knows anything about the magic world.outside of the complaints its an interesting world with an op mc trying to fix the problems between the hidden magic world and the muggle i mean normal world. think harry potter with technology and a random op card summoner.
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This novel is awesome! I like the card mechanic, there is some influence and flavor from MtG, but it's still good. The writting is sublime, and apparently MC try to build toward to Artificer build, which is totally cool. Everyone and their mother nowadays using sword and sling some spell, not making cool magic stuff anymore.
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Great story so far, it's a good twist to "come back from the dead" not too far in the future at the same spot instead of in the past or in another world
Im currently at chapter 10 and before I continue I‘d like to ask something. Can anyone tell me what‘s going on with his GF and wrath? The connection etc. Thanks
I review this as I finished reading chapter 12. For me, it's a good novel but I'm dropping this cause I don't know about card games and it's confused me about the usage of cards. Like the mana usage. I think the author should explain more about this card game and its rules. Or maybe he did in the upcoming chapters after chapter 12. It's a nice story, author. Good luck with your work.
It's refreshingly new... kinda. We seen the card thing before but this improves on that. The MC is the one of two that knows of the cards. This also has fleshed out the rules the cards go by. The world is also different as it shows that the MC isn't the only strong person/group around. Long story short: You can tell there is effort here. Thought-out effort
Spoiler enthüllen Hello, Reader I am giving myself a shameless 5-star review, because that seems to be a tradition here. Before reading this novel, there is a brutal scene with one of the female-lead characters at the beginning of the story. (Also, I am not a native English speaker, so please expect some errors. If you could tell me what mistakes I made, I will do my best to correct them)
I am loving this book! I keep having flashbacks to playing MTG and trying to picture how the spells and effects would look. All in all, 10/10 would recomend to a friend.
Author! One question, will the MC hide his identity and powers? From the chapters I read, that's the impression I got. I would also like to know if you have a group on Discord?
So you get destroyed professionally , get ghosted by everyone, tortured physically and mentally, your girlfriend who betrayed you for whatever reason and still gets humiliated in front of you, you have your body practically ripped apart and at last die of pain and suffering... Then you get the gift of ressurection and the first thing you do is go to a government body to announce you are alive full of optimism and vigor in a society where the guy who started your nightmare is about to ascent to the throne as the emperor on the very same day? Yeah! I read enough and am out of here, the entry setting is a character break in itself, no logical or even broken individual will even act like the MC did here... This world which has the ability of ressurection, with a cruel royal family somehow doesnt has the ability to sound the alarm when a flagged person especially a guy personally Offed by the royal family comes and announces that he is alive... Cool
Spoiler enthüllen Amazing novel................................ 👌👏 ................. ................ ............... .............. ............. ............ ...........
I really like the premise of the story, but the characters are just really bad. ALL the girls are just potential members of mcs half-hearted harem. The guys are a lot more interesting, except the mc. Daniel (the mc) is really indecisive and has no actual goal except a vague promise he gave to michaela of "building a sanctuary for the oppressed" which isn't the focus of the story at all. The story essentially just revolves around Daniel getting harassed by the hightower, Daniel fights the high tower off with absolutely no problem but doesn't really retaliate for whatever reasons (indecisive) and emboldened by Daniels inaction the hightower comes back for more. Rinse and repeat. Daniel is also pretty stupid. The author tries to make him look like he's smart, but he really just isn't. A lot of his decisions are just... weak. I guess he has to act this way because the author made the mc just too strong, so the only way to create some tension is to have Daniel just not use his power against the hightower. (the big bad organisation) And what is his explanation for not unleashing his overwhelming might against this objectively evil genocidal organisation? Because he SIMPS for an incompetent woman who is against violence. EVEN THOUGH this organisation has tried and succeeded in causing significant harm to his loved ones MULTIPLE TIMES and he STILL doesn't fight back. Btw, he also has no problems flirting with a woman who openly supports slavery. Its infuriating, really.
Really an amazing story. The writing is more than correct without discrepancy and not much typos(I have seen two but I am not an English native ) the power system is pretty good, the characters are interesting and attaching and the plot advance at a good pace without too much fan-Service(as much as I like it too much can alter negatively the story) . All-in-all it's one of the most interesting novel I've read (top ten) and is the best in the magical-realism tag (modern with fantasy or eastern fantasy) Please continue writing with peace of mind[img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=recommend][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]
It’s kinda annoying that you introduce this card system and barely even tell us what cards he gets. I know it’s alot but still it would be nice if we had a just a general idea like like out of this pack we got a artifact or out of this pack we got a summon ect and not just we got some random stuff so you can just make up things on the fly as you think of them also you havent actualized vlad which is tilting yet you actualized the other lengendary as soon as you got it and tried another but the system went on cool down. Tbh I’m reading for the gacha system and kingdom building alone but it feels like both of those things kinda just get brushed aside and we don’t get to see the progress of said things just the result. And this whole hearm thing you are trying to do feels really japan and vanilla asf where we don’t see anything and it gets left up to our imaginations at that point why even add it at all. Also the mc is kinda a sImp reminds me of normal isekai wimp protags
Spoiler enthüllen AI writing is to heavy.can you use AI just as assistan not tools?it made reader sick when reading.If you write books like that you will banned you know?
Too much info dump , it gets so much annoying later on, also it gets so much more boring I can't even seem to cope so I'ma drop this and move on to another novel
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
A worthwhile read. The story progresses rather well, the world building is slowly introduced thru the chapters, and tbr character development is solid for the main characters but leave something to desire for the minor ones at this point.
This is novel has a unique concept that I have never seen (using Cards for Classes, Artifacts, Characters etc) and the novel is very well written. Hope for the story to continues with same intensity 🔥🔥🔥.
monkey 🐒 . great book, not giving it 5 stars on stability because it currently has some issues with the update stability but other than that it's great and unique(for now)
Spoiler enthüllen I highly enjoy the story and would love to read more. Unfortunately, I'm poor as dirt so I can't do so but I'm caught up to before prevledged wish there were more wavent read in 3 days now.
Had great potential, this novel gave me the same feeling when I first read Lord of Mysteries. I have no problem with harem, but to me it ruins the storytelling and due to that I’m dropping this novel, which is such a waste because this could have become something great.
amazing story and extremely well written until a certain point. the world building is great, but author made a few mistakes which led to more and more.spoilers ahead So, if you wanted to give him profession card, make it so he can only have one profession at a time or something to reduce the OPness. make the world larger by adding realms so even if hes's overpowered it can be enjoyed.you see the problem starts at the time when Card shop just closes and for another 50 something chapters that I've read it doesn't open. while closing it is a short term solution it takes away the most valuable part of the story that is the Card System. It gets extremely boring after he loses access to Card Shop as after that it's just him having ancient knowledge and stuff and creating things. also adding the daughter was just .. nah. like I do not hate it just it's too early and on tip of that continuously writing Slice of Life and Business novel... that's just wasted potential. The battles also become boring because he no longer needs cards and can just fight experts beyond top level easily and he doesn't even use the legendary card summons like the Amazon Queen or Michaela. But the worst part is all the business talk which is so boring that at this point i just skip it.
I love how his story actually has depth and most of the key character don't fell like there forgotten about. plus I mean it's based of MTG so of course it's getting my seal fo approval.
All in all I'm trying to figure out why these always read like wish fulfillment works.The MC always winds up becoming an absolute nightmare and as far from thier original self as possible. All while failing to realise they're far worse than those they hated in the first place.Truly it would be nice if for once the old addage of When seeking revenge be sure to dig two graves would happen.
weird dialogue and surprise world background without explanation. the main charecter is stupid and naive.
the world is interesting. mc cheat is neat though sometimes unclear as to its limitations/effects.the characters are pretty forced. the main love interest is a moronic bimbo. the 'daughter' is completely forced and just there for show and to add words all the time. the other characters are less bad however. I will say after 20 times of not knowing anything its getting old. he is dancing around the rules effectively but somehow never knows anything about the magic world.outside of the complaints its an interesting world with an op mc trying to fix the problems between the hidden magic world and the muggle i mean normal world. think harry potter with technology and a random op card summoner.
Spoiler enthüllen This novel is awesome! I like the card mechanic, there is some influence and flavor from MtG, but it's still good. The writting is sublime, and apparently MC try to build toward to Artificer build, which is totally cool. Everyone and their mother nowadays using sword and sling some spell, not making cool magic stuff anymore.
Spoiler enthüllen Great story so far, it's a good twist to "come back from the dead" not too far in the future at the same spot instead of in the past or in another world
Im currently at chapter 10 and before I continue I‘d like to ask something. Can anyone tell me what‘s going on with his GF and wrath? The connection etc. Thanks
I review this as I finished reading chapter 12. For me, it's a good novel but I'm dropping this cause I don't know about card games and it's confused me about the usage of cards. Like the mana usage. I think the author should explain more about this card game and its rules. Or maybe he did in the upcoming chapters after chapter 12. It's a nice story, author. Good luck with your work.
It's refreshingly new... kinda. We seen the card thing before but this improves on that. The MC is the one of two that knows of the cards. This also has fleshed out the rules the cards go by. The world is also different as it shows that the MC isn't the only strong person/group around. Long story short: You can tell there is effort here. Thought-out effort
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