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2022-06-09 Beigetreten Indonesia
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1 months ago
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Well..... you write it in chinese webnovel styles so short minded person that never into detail will think its translation. If you want your work to be called original you need to change your style to other like naruto outsider resolve that pay great attention to detail

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5 months ago
Replied to CreedFollower

what is blood gu armor look like? can you give us more detailed describtion? isnt Gu poisoned insect? i cant imagine anything fit that describtion except origal body get more harder from poison just like manhwa nano machine

Thus, after failing once due to bad luck, he manages to refine the Blood Armor gu.

Reverend Insanity-Blood Venerable Ascension

Reverend Insanity-Blood Venerable Ascension

Book&Literature · CreedFollower

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6 months ago
Replied to FableWeaver

hah..... it started great but you ruined it. but why you add unecesary plot like that? and why you respond like that? its better to be silent than asked someone to leave directly. at last read mushoku tensei study how author made clince plot bearable to read, with enough accumulation it will be great novel itself

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6 months ago
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okay...... mature man in child body trying balet dance......who stupid idea is it? when trying to write smart character but doing some low EQ thing like moron already made me want to stop reading.

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6 months ago
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why you write with AI style? and why MC is so stupid? i know that you want MC to face hardship but killing someone without preparation like hidding his identity when claimed MC is smart is to much to me plus your poor excuse is stupid move.

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6 months ago
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But Jiang Cheng was an exception. Not only had he rejected her, but he also deeply humiliated her.

Why are the Talismans I Drawn Banned Again?!

Why are the Talismans I Drawn Banned Again?!

Urban · Quiet Support

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6 months ago
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your writing look good when people started using AI for their novel

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7 months ago
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this just nonsense like plastic rice stuff

Watching Yueyue enjoy the barbecue, Jada frowned and looked at Ren, "I heard that eating barbecue can cause cancer. Is it really okay to let Yueyue eat this?"

Dad's Comic Life

Dad's Comic Life

Anime & Comics · michaeI

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9 months ago
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its better 1 a day in continue for 3 days if you realease all 3 chapter in same day you will lose power stone ranking because somepeople is busy and forgot to add power stone. Anyway..... thanks for the chapter! thats realy good one on this arc and its keep getting better![img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]

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  • One Piece : Dark Flame Devil original

    One Piece : Dark Flame Devil

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY HAREM SLICEOFLIFE TRAGEDY ISEKAI ONEPIECE

    A young man tranmigrated to 9 year old boy in one piece world. will he survive in this cruel world when strong eat the weak? will he find happyness in the vast sea?  "I will become strong to protect what i have" "I will find happyness in this cruel sea" "No matter how big chalenge come to me, i will face it even if it from world governor if they tried to take away family i have in this world!" English is not my mother tongue so bear with it and tell me if there grammar error and i will try to fix it.

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