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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionIt is the best novel I have ever read. There are a lot of grammar mistakes which is the reason I have not given it a 5 star, But if you're able to ignore that, it is simply the best. And the way it ends is so relaxing, And unexpected, besides being completely free to read.
si bien en un inicio no estaba seguro de leer esto por que no tiene intro me alegro mucho de leerlo y de acabarlo mu gusto el desarrollo y el final me parece muy lindo :)
So like I loved the story I only have like 20-ish chapters left but I agree that the he/she pronouns are a bit funky, and the mc’s name changes back and forth but I’v enjoyede how it’s progressed
A fanfic without any description gets a one-star review for me automatically. What decent translator takes out his time to translate the whole fanfiction but can't translate the description and explanation about the fanfiction?? And if the original author didn't write one, then you as the translator should have!
very enjoyable. only issue was mc name swtching every other paragragh but other than that it was good
the pronouns are all over the place, the name changes sometimes from Ivan to Yvonne or harls to hulse. the Mc is a male character for those who are concerned. but the story narrative is quite good, I'd assume is was originally in a different language. all in all a good hp fan fic
Cuck MC. Behaves like a lost puppy. I heard this was translated from Chinese, makes sense why it sucks.F the Chinese.
the translation is pretty messed up. and the spells, oh God, they r so funny. But the story is super good that despite all these restrictions. I finished it in 3 days.Idk Ivan on Yvonne, he / she was a great character.[img=recommend]
I want to ask about a novel for those who know it? It's about someone reincarnated as a brother to Harry Potter. And he must not change canon.
One of the few fan-fics that were finished in a good manner. I don't like too extreme of ups and downs so this one fits perfectly. Also I appreciate the part with Grindelwald, because it didn't stretch for too long, though it wasn't rushed. A little longer of an epilogue would be nice btw. I'd rate it 6/10 because of this gender swapping and constant change of names etc.. otherwise solid 7/10 maybe even 8/10.
It's an overall decent story, author clearly thought out what he wanted to do and went on with his particular concepts and ideas.Only issue is translation ends up confusing people's gender a lot
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a nice complete Harry Potter novel worth reading loved it while enjoying the story [img=coins][img=recommend]
apart from the occasional gender swap and naming issues, it's an amazing fanfiction story based around the idea of someone who's read the books being injected into the actual story. it incorporates the idea of blood fusions to boost magical properties and touches upon things that were basically skipped over in the book (for instance Nicolas Flamel and the philosopher's stone). while not directly cannon to the story it shows more details about significant objects, different ways to use items such as the pensieve and more.all in all an amazing story that just needs to be polished a bit more (after the first 100c chapters you get used to the gender swaps and you'll usually be able to recognize the other names for each character)
Aside from the gender change in the translation, it's a very nice and smooth story . absolutely fantastic. Thankyou very much for this story👍👍👌👌😞👋
شكرا روايه حلوه وعجبتني اتمنى تكون روايات اكثر مثل هذه روايه وما اعرف شكول بعد بس لازم صير مراجعه امثر من ١٤٠ حرف لهذا السببب راح احط حروف عشوائيه
Absolutely loved it ♥️♥️🖖 It's not the best fanfiction out there but it's definitely top 5 for me.. the story follows the same cannon albeit a few tweaks here and there..😇 It can be a bit dull at the beginning but defo read it... give it a chance.. ✌️
dont know how anyone could stomach 2 chapters let alone 900.. id honestly be impressed if someone managed to make it to 900. ................
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For the low rating of this fanfic I thought it would be very bad, but after reading more than 820 chapters I concluded that it deserves a much higher rating, the story is good, there are no big holes in the plot, the interaction of the characters are good, the MC is not it gets strong very quickly but it's not weak either, there are many disagreements between the characters and that makes it a little tiring, but it didn't spoil my reading. I've seen fanfics much worse than this one with a high rating, so I recommend you read it
the source story is good. this editing is the worst ive seen. at some points, it feels like I'm just reading from lnmtl or something.... at least the errors there are sensible and expected. so many simple unnecessary errors with the writing in this you might as well say this is just placed in a Google translator and then copy pasted here for easy clicks. there's no way any self-respecting novice writer let alone author actually posts a piece with so many errors otherwise.
the MC s tender has some serious translation issues but otherwise it's very good . Word limit.... The MC was me a message for the same as the last date is on a few days back I am in a month which barely is not going on the heels for men with its own tropes and I have a huge gap in my house at 6 30 am not going on the
The main problem with the translation was the incorrect names of characters (especially MC and is mom) and spells, otherwise, it was pretty good.
It is the best novel I have ever read. There are a lot of grammar mistakes which is the reason I have not given it a 5 star, But if you're able to ignore that, it is simply the best. And the way it ends is so relaxing, And unexpected, besides being completely free to read.
si bien en un inicio no estaba seguro de leer esto por que no tiene intro me alegro mucho de leerlo y de acabarlo mu gusto el desarrollo y el final me parece muy lindo :)
So like I loved the story I only have like 20-ish chapters left but I agree that the he/she pronouns are a bit funky, and the mc’s name changes back and forth but I’v enjoyede how it’s progressed
A fanfic without any description gets a one-star review for me automatically. What decent translator takes out his time to translate the whole fanfiction but can't translate the description and explanation about the fanfiction?? And if the original author didn't write one, then you as the translator should have!
very enjoyable. only issue was mc name swtching every other paragragh but other than that it was good
the pronouns are all over the place, the name changes sometimes from Ivan to Yvonne or harls to hulse. the Mc is a male character for those who are concerned. but the story narrative is quite good, I'd assume is was originally in a different language. all in all a good hp fan fic
Cuck MC. Behaves like a lost puppy. I heard this was translated from Chinese, makes sense why it sucks.F the Chinese.
the translation is pretty messed up. and the spells, oh God, they r so funny. But the story is super good that despite all these restrictions. I finished it in 3 days.Idk Ivan on Yvonne, he / she was a great character.[img=recommend]
I want to ask about a novel for those who know it? It's about someone reincarnated as a brother to Harry Potter. And he must not change canon.
One of the few fan-fics that were finished in a good manner. I don't like too extreme of ups and downs so this one fits perfectly. Also I appreciate the part with Grindelwald, because it didn't stretch for too long, though it wasn't rushed. A little longer of an epilogue would be nice btw. I'd rate it 6/10 because of this gender swapping and constant change of names etc.. otherwise solid 7/10 maybe even 8/10.
It's an overall decent story, author clearly thought out what he wanted to do and went on with his particular concepts and ideas.Only issue is translation ends up confusing people's gender a lot
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a nice complete Harry Potter novel worth reading loved it while enjoying the story [img=coins][img=recommend]
apart from the occasional gender swap and naming issues, it's an amazing fanfiction story based around the idea of someone who's read the books being injected into the actual story. it incorporates the idea of blood fusions to boost magical properties and touches upon things that were basically skipped over in the book (for instance Nicolas Flamel and the philosopher's stone). while not directly cannon to the story it shows more details about significant objects, different ways to use items such as the pensieve and more.all in all an amazing story that just needs to be polished a bit more (after the first 100c chapters you get used to the gender swaps and you'll usually be able to recognize the other names for each character)
Aside from the gender change in the translation, it's a very nice and smooth story . absolutely fantastic. Thankyou very much for this story👍👍👌👌😞👋
شكرا روايه حلوه وعجبتني اتمنى تكون روايات اكثر مثل هذه روايه وما اعرف شكول بعد بس لازم صير مراجعه امثر من ١٤٠ حرف لهذا السببب راح احط حروف عشوائيه
Absolutely loved it ♥️♥️🖖 It's not the best fanfiction out there but it's definitely top 5 for me.. the story follows the same cannon albeit a few tweaks here and there..😇 It can be a bit dull at the beginning but defo read it... give it a chance.. ✌️
dont know how anyone could stomach 2 chapters let alone 900.. id honestly be impressed if someone managed to make it to 900. ................
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For the low rating of this fanfic I thought it would be very bad, but after reading more than 820 chapters I concluded that it deserves a much higher rating, the story is good, there are no big holes in the plot, the interaction of the characters are good, the MC is not it gets strong very quickly but it's not weak either, there are many disagreements between the characters and that makes it a little tiring, but it didn't spoil my reading. I've seen fanfics much worse than this one with a high rating, so I recommend you read it
the source story is good. this editing is the worst ive seen. at some points, it feels like I'm just reading from lnmtl or something.... at least the errors there are sensible and expected. so many simple unnecessary errors with the writing in this you might as well say this is just placed in a Google translator and then copy pasted here for easy clicks. there's no way any self-respecting novice writer let alone author actually posts a piece with so many errors otherwise.
the MC s tender has some serious translation issues but otherwise it's very good . Word limit.... The MC was me a message for the same as the last date is on a few days back I am in a month which barely is not going on the heels for men with its own tropes and I have a huge gap in my house at 6 30 am not going on the
The main problem with the translation was the incorrect names of characters (especially MC and is mom) and spells, otherwise, it was pretty good.