see, someone has a loot filter for legendaries only lol
"What else should I take now? Oh, that gem..." Whatever he was about to say got stuck in his throat, for he felt an immense attraction to a helm resting atop a mound of gold. Up high lay a helm, with golden bands and a dragon engraved on the crest that caught his attention. With small, nimble steps, he moved through the pile of gold. "This helm..." a fleeting thought crossed his mind as he held it. "Yes, I'm sure Aldril would like this. I'll save it for him."
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Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
the only problem with this ff at this point is how often you're repeating the same lines. I'll keep reading after a few chapters build up because I'm hoping you actually have a plot here eventually, but I'm starting to doubt it...
I know the pokemon... I was just saying that in the ff it said madonna.. it was my way of pointing it out..
Because there were other people present, Ash wasn't suitable to speak too clearly, but Misty and Brock understood what it meant. Thinking of MaDonna's power, which even the giant Dragonite feared, they felt relieved, but they still wanted to contribute.
Pokemon : Rewind
Anime & Comics · Denzil_Beast
anytime you want to start your story, well be here... waiting... since all that's happened is recap of the movies and repeating lines over and over again....
you mean raven, not Octavia.
But then again it wouldn't be fair to do that seeing as my interests had slowly mimicked the camps, with Clarke and Octavia betraying me in varying amounts it wasn't that hard to choose.
The Gamer Files: The 100's Gamer.
TV · God_Of_DepravityX
the anticipation is building! I can't wait to read more!
I have 2 things about your request for feedback in the first bit; 1) many readers wait for a lot of chps to build up before continuing, so that might be one thing. 2) im really enjoying this story, so even if i let a few build up, ill be coming back to read. 3) my only real critique would be that it seems a lot of this story is involving other characters instead of mc or the crew/family, even though a lot of it is valuable and useful it just seems a little too often -- like the 5 elders, since they say a lot of the same things whenever it involves rosinante and doffy. and a bit too long on explaining the slv hunt bit... though beside the 5 elders, i'm just waiting for payoff with everything else in that regard, really interested in the new warlords and the mystery with rox. I hope this helped - good luck with the rest
Coby smirked, his eyes narrowing as he focused on the largest concentrations of enemy forces. "Let's go with a BOOM! Art is explosion after all," he muttered.
One Piece: Coby with Skill Weaver System
Anime & Comics · PinkIsJustice
no krumpin? da humies call dat aresy, dey do
Filthy orcs! Tonight there will be no fight, there will be no war, we must give him a day of rest as a gift in honor of that dwarf.
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Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
🙏 I've really been enjoying this story. I hope it all works out!
Pokemon : Rewind
Anime & Comics · Denzil_Beast