Manaless Mage

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Gladstone_

This novel is about a boy called Harry who was born without the ability to draw mana in a world of magic He got a system and started his journey as a manaless mage It’s a really intersting novel Try out this novel,you won’t regret reading it Let’s keep rating ⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️😎😎😎😎😎

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Night_Crawler619

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

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Thee_AngryBird

this looks like a novel I'll definitely follow.. from the few chapters I've already read I can tell it's gonna be a BANGER🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Mickaelle09

I read till chapter 72, and i think i can't go further . When i started reading this , i had high hopes. The reasons were : - The pretty good writing( nothing revolutionary but definitly better than most books out there.) - The many possibilities of developement for the plot - The fact that the transition from a cowardly character to a confident one for the Mc was well done. - Although this novel takes some elements of another( bloodline system, which is not so great either) , it slowly finds its own way. - The other voice of the system which added a layer of mystery . But that was all. And some point, as time goes by, one find himself/ herself unable to continue because some problems are too obvious to be ignored : - The pace is horribly slow. It is not a bad thing per se . However when NOTHING substential happens to the Mc , it just makes the book boring. - What is even the Mc 's motivation? So far i don't see one. Him not having any clear ambition makes it so he doesn't go beyond the " i'm an author's good idea " to become a " i'm an author's good idea who works because I FEEL REAL " . Harry is an Mc because the author made him so. If he was a side character in some other book , People wouldn’t even care about him , because he is not interesting. This applies to other characters as well. So far , none of them seems a little bit interesting or real. - The story doesn't progress and it feels like there are no dangers or difficulties for the Mc(A competition is approaching but there's no tension at all ). The world building isn't doing much better , as it is nothing new and we don't even know that much about the world yet. - The author's writing is also a problem. Although the grammar and the vocabulary are good( it's nothing extraordinary but it's better than most of the novels on this app), the author has a serious issue with emotions. The tension, the fear , the sadeness... it's like the author has troubles showing emotions. It is not so evident in the earlier chapters. But as one goes further , it is more and more glaring. That's why every interactions feels so inconsistent and not relatable at all. Besides , i myself do not like it when the Mc dwells on sadness and regrets. But the author could have shown at least that Harry( even though he said the contrary) deep down, cares for his family. It should have been shown( or told ) a bit that it hurts him that they didn’t even searched for him when he moved out . What i mean is that the author could have add some complexity to the characters' emotions which would help making them appear real and human-like. Moreover, the chapters aren't that long . 72 chapters appears to be a lot but it isn't ( for that book). Overall, this novel isn't bad but just average . I'm so disappointed because so much more could have been done .

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Lee_Caldwell_5091

Another generic system novel. Moronic MC that hides his abilities and plot only moves to faceslap bullies. Writing quality is merely ok. With chapters locking in the 30s, it’s better to just move on.

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BigNerdNasty

chapters are a bit too short and the main character is a little bit dumb. hopefully all that extra words and descriptions at the end can be removed so each chapter coin cost isn't inflated. high potential novel so it's worth sticking around to see improvement

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Zurbluris

its nice to see another author from Nigeria here, keep up the good work

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dndeath

It is unfortunatly very bland. after mc initially fights back against bullies after getting stronger he just doesn't do anything... based on his background he should be filled with anger and thoughts of revenge.. but nope. nothing. everyone who bullied him, teachers who ignored it, parents who underfed and completely ignored him, brother who despised him. nothing. no mention of his emotions/plans. Additionally, there is no drive to grow stronger quicker by seeking out opportunities to absorb mana from people (bullies would be the prime targets, and he could do it outside of school avoiding the excuse of a teacher detecting it) or by getting his hands on beast cores. mc is content with living a normal school life and working a normal part time job to pay the rent. thus we just get normal school arc, taking classes, small duels and stuff. all this while an actual tournament arc is looming in the distance, which I cant imagine will be any better. Bland is the best word I can think of to describe it. With that said, the premise and writing quality is good and the story is by no means irredeemable if author better explores the emotional side of the mc. Either by having him use his newfound powers to get revenge (I feel like it would be reasonable for a kid in his situation to let the power get a little bit to his head and walk down a darker path) or by clearly motivating to the reader why this isn't happening, maybe he is struggling with such feelings but is able to hold the back.

I decided to try this novel and I was wowed I normally read FL novels and this is one of the few ML novels that managed to capture my focus and attention update regularly author, we need more chapters

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Mary_Onaduja

Oh my God, this story is so interesting and I am definitely adding it to my library. I'd advise you all to read it as well. This is a good work done by the author . .

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Tridev3

Common plot but good execution. The strory flows smoothly. generic MC yes. but I'm hooked to these type of stories so no complaints there. peace;

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Empzze

Well, interesting start and intriguing plot but you just made me give my pet a look that said “you are not going to turn on me, are you?"😁😁 Great work author, I love the story pacing and the scene setting too I can definitely see a lot of potentials so I'm wishing good luck.

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Rusted_Jade

This novel is wonderful, I just wish the author would do a mass release or something The update rate is quite stable but I need more chapters!

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CRONZ_2437

Simple words I like the story and you should try you will love

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YavuzTC61

Nice novel bir Türk olarak okumaktan zevk alıyorum.Daha fazla güncelleme iyi olur olayları yaşıyormuşum gibi hissediyorum harika. umarım hak ettiği popülerliği kazanır

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SIENDONIA

Why not change the title to Manaless Magician? Manaless Mage sounds a bit not suitable imo ‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎ ‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎

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Patricia_Levy

I like this story! I love how it begins. I love the direction it’s going, I love the characters. Everything is well put together and I will keep reading it.

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uglyshiva

What can i say other than superb? This book is a masterpiece in the making. If you want a system novel with fresh ideas and unique takes on things then this is the book for you. 👌🏼