Primordial Villain with a Slave Harem

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NecroBin

Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.

LV 15

Hijak

What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.

LV 11

Celestial_Pages

I really enjoyed this novel overall. Although the beginning was slow and a bit hard to get through, it’s clear how much the author has grown as a writer since then. Once the action started, the pacing improved significantly, and I had an absolute blast reading it. The R-18 scenes were well-executed and contributed to the story's appeal. To the author: I’m really looking forward to future chapters! I’m especially excited to see more of the world you’ve built—different continents, and maybe even other worlds, if you have that in mind for future chapters. It’s amazing to see your growth as a writer, and I’m excited to follow your journey as an author. I hope you continue to enjoy the process. Please take care not to overdo it and risk burning yourself out—we all want to see this story continue at its best. Thank you for your hard work and for giving us such an enjoyable read!

LV 13

LightYagami2000

A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.

LV 13

1_EyedKing

Ok so for the people looking to see if you should red this, I’m going to be very honest…the starting is kinda off coz the author just behave writing and he takes a while to get into his flow, but once he does the novel quality improves greatly…the main character is relatable, and the BEST part is that none of the Harem members are forgotten and each get equal screen time and interactions with the main character and the story in general. Every character is really well done, there have even been characters who first came off as obnoxious and arrogant, but they go through great character development and grow on you. So please do give it a try. It’s a great slice of life harem story, the main character is a villain who does what’s needed for himself, but he has morals he doesn’t go after innocent people and just slaughter cities for fun he is willing to rob and kill if they help him reach his goals, he mostly kills bad guys but he’s not one to be a hero for no reason especially when him and his loved ones could be in danger.

LV 11

MalonElris

I didn't like this story at first. I enjoy faster power ups etc. but I won't lie I toughed it out, the main character grows on you. is self aware, and actually knows he is hypocritical sometimes. his harem are all unique personalities. smut was creative and not generic. my only only complaint and it's very light. is it took so long for a significant power up/relationship with main lady. frustrating but that's the point I guess making you invested. if you like villain stories and harem, absolutely no reason to skip this.

This is some real good stuff….do give it a read for sure. The characters are interesting, there is a good storyline. The author loves making us readers happy…especially with those cliffhangers 👀

LV 12

Entomodachi

Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.

LV 3

Daoist913668

Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D

LV 15

Synge64

Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.

LV 4

Micke1

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DarkR1vers_Leander

great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..

LV 1

Schmelkenboy

I only read the "free to read" part(about 45 chapters, but I do think that the story and the development is quite well written. Also, can we talk about the fact how NecroBin postes 14 Chapters a Week?! I recommend this novel.

LV 3

BlueberyTempest

Nice! A harem story with system! Exactly what I've been looking for! Writing is nice and pacing is great with good grammar. Will there be yuri in this?

LV 13

1_EyedKing

Hmmmmmmmmm this is interesting…..I can post another review? 🗿

LV 13

1_EyedKing

Hold up I can review this again? Did my previous one get taken down? Coz I checked another new WebNovel and couldn’t post another review

LV 10

YanderesHunter

Amazing story with a more "realistic" transmigration, which escapes the most well-known clichés. I see the potential for it to have thousands of chapters, something I honestly hope for, since we are still on just one continent and there is the possibility of expanding to different worlds... maybe? Note: I hope they add a yandere to the harem...

LV 12

BloddWedd

It is not the best piece of literature I have ever seen, but as far as this site goes, it's a 5/5 rare to see such writing quality and development of both story and characters.

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Arcane_Milf_Poker

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Laurent_Jerry

This is worth reading, its enjoyable, the world background is well built and the story is good develops at a good pace, fights have about the right presence and its not a simple leveling slugfest like most novels here. The characters are interresting, although their speach might be a bit akward and too lengthy a tad cringy at times, especially in the first chapters, but the author clearly improves fast chapter after chapter. The MC is a bit shaky with the 'submit to me stuff' being a bit out of place, but overall its interresting and the type of villain angle imagined by the author is a good choice