DHillion

DHillion

LV 15
2020-03-02 Beigetreten Global
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DHillion
DHillion
9 hours ago
Commented

Author there needs to be distinction between conversations and inner thoughts.

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DHillion
5 days ago
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Depends on your country of origin.

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DHillion
9 days ago
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how can I help

DHillion
DHillion
11 days ago
Posted

An excellent start to what I think is a very promising story and look forward to more updates to come.

DHillion
DHillion
13 days ago
Commented

This is a repeat of an earlier chapter.

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DHillion
DHillion
21 days ago
Posted

the story of particular has a good deal of potential but it's being held back with all the excessive background information of characters who haven't played any major role in the story as of yet. it would be better to avoid all the sexual insinuations tells time for the situation to happen the plot is solid and I believe it could be a really good story I've got to back off all of the info drops until it's necessary for them to happen.

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DHillion
DHillion
1 months ago
Commented

I like it so far. Would like to see Levi use his knowledge to elevate his standing by making some of his knowledge available.