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I need more updates please its been ages since i found a story that's actually interesting towards my exasperatedly bored mind.
good story more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
This is a great book and is a great concept. It’s also a generaly good read but it has now started to suffer from the legendary infinit hiatus’s. Will gladly give a 5 star view once this book is getting updates again.
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I absolutely love Percy Jackson stories though the grammar is a little rough I feel that it gets the point across and does not truly harm the story because it is good.
Hi hi hi loving this book so far gotta say can't wait to see how you continue to progress & if you need to take personal time off or any other reason that stops you from writing while it's nice to know why you stopped you're not obligated to have to tell readers if you don't wish. I've tried to write a book on here before but never really could because i suck at writhing & descriptions so compared to me as well as other stories I've read that have bad grammar it's pretty good. Just ignore what all those other harsh critics are saying because while I know grammar & things like that are important to make a book easier to be read & understood as long as the story seems interesting even if a bit slow in the beginning or middle as long as it has my interest i always read a book no matter the cringe or cliches. Those people are all nitpickers & spoiled from reading lots of books with little to no mistakes a lot & while yes feedback does help improve those who don't try to help either cause they don't know how or cause they simply wish to be rude they could easily just silently leave no one is forcing the to stay. So all in all do your best for as long as you wish & want you get all the stars~💜
Everyone is talking about the grammar which is a big issue but missing the part where the author messes up the PJO stuff. Misspelling names, different personalities from the source, and mechanics that would invalidate many of the issues demigods face in the source (ability to hide their scent).
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This is an awesome read and great time killer, so I don't know why it has such bad ratings. It might not be perfect, but it's also not that bad to get lower than 4.
Good story good developments, good characters development, terrible writing quality, I know English may not be his/her first launguage but when I see that said person spelling the some words correctly then spelling them incorrectly the next time you know it’s not about not understanding English it’s them being lazy to not correct their work before posting it.
The english isn't all that great but its bearable. Other then that the story is dark but interesting and the main character is realistic for what he's been through. My only hope is this doesn't get dropped and more people can get past the grammar issues.
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the Grammer was just good enough that I could ignore the mistakes at first but it just got progressively worse please use something like Grammerly and re read your chaps before posting also don't use abbreviations it just feels lazy and informal
This story wants to make this elder hurl himself of a bridge. What is this. This elder can not take this cringe cliche.
an amazing story with a few grammar mistakes I don't understand why people want to give it a bad rating because it is amazing keep up the good work
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again what's up with the "dints" its a good story but pls check your grammar when you're writing. ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄
The grammar is not that good but I guess the story is ok. But the grammar just ruined the story for me it was like watching a child write. It was horrible
Again one of the rare fanfictions which make people excited to read it and get their hopes down again. The Grammar is the worst of all, MTL is looking better in front of it. Lot of cringy stuff is inserted in the story. And for the love of God stop using dint instead of didn't.
From the comments, it seems that for native English speakers, the grammar is bad. But I, I use Google translator to read, so I don't feel this problem, the story is good.
One of the most cringiest stuff I've ever witnessed. The MC is a typical loser who says he doesn't care about anything anymore and than cares and than losses the cared person and goes through his loser life in that way. This is the one of the most unfortunate reads of my life. Grammar left the chat in this book. Bye
this is actually really well-thought-out in my opinion keep it up and thanks for the story mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
The grammar and spelling are so bad. It takes away from the story. This needs to be corrected because it is such a hard read otherwise. Please fix it.
I need more updates please its been ages since i found a story that's actually interesting towards my exasperatedly bored mind.
good story more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
This is a great book and is a great concept. It’s also a generaly good read but it has now started to suffer from the legendary infinit hiatus’s. Will gladly give a 5 star view once this book is getting updates again.
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I absolutely love Percy Jackson stories though the grammar is a little rough I feel that it gets the point across and does not truly harm the story because it is good.
Hi hi hi loving this book so far gotta say can't wait to see how you continue to progress & if you need to take personal time off or any other reason that stops you from writing while it's nice to know why you stopped you're not obligated to have to tell readers if you don't wish. I've tried to write a book on here before but never really could because i suck at writhing & descriptions so compared to me as well as other stories I've read that have bad grammar it's pretty good. Just ignore what all those other harsh critics are saying because while I know grammar & things like that are important to make a book easier to be read & understood as long as the story seems interesting even if a bit slow in the beginning or middle as long as it has my interest i always read a book no matter the cringe or cliches. Those people are all nitpickers & spoiled from reading lots of books with little to no mistakes a lot & while yes feedback does help improve those who don't try to help either cause they don't know how or cause they simply wish to be rude they could easily just silently leave no one is forcing the to stay. So all in all do your best for as long as you wish & want you get all the stars~💜
Everyone is talking about the grammar which is a big issue but missing the part where the author messes up the PJO stuff. Misspelling names, different personalities from the source, and mechanics that would invalidate many of the issues demigods face in the source (ability to hide their scent).
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Spoiler enthüllen This is an awesome read and great time killer, so I don't know why it has such bad ratings. It might not be perfect, but it's also not that bad to get lower than 4.
Good story good developments, good characters development, terrible writing quality, I know English may not be his/her first launguage but when I see that said person spelling the some words correctly then spelling them incorrectly the next time you know it’s not about not understanding English it’s them being lazy to not correct their work before posting it.
The english isn't all that great but its bearable. Other then that the story is dark but interesting and the main character is realistic for what he's been through. My only hope is this doesn't get dropped and more people can get past the grammar issues.
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the Grammer was just good enough that I could ignore the mistakes at first but it just got progressively worse please use something like Grammerly and re read your chaps before posting also don't use abbreviations it just feels lazy and informal
This story wants to make this elder hurl himself of a bridge. What is this. This elder can not take this cringe cliche.
an amazing story with a few grammar mistakes I don't understand why people want to give it a bad rating because it is amazing keep up the good work
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again what's up with the "dints" its a good story but pls check your grammar when you're writing. ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄
The grammar is not that good but I guess the story is ok. But the grammar just ruined the story for me it was like watching a child write. It was horrible
Again one of the rare fanfictions which make people excited to read it and get their hopes down again. The Grammar is the worst of all, MTL is looking better in front of it. Lot of cringy stuff is inserted in the story. And for the love of God stop using dint instead of didn't.
From the comments, it seems that for native English speakers, the grammar is bad. But I, I use Google translator to read, so I don't feel this problem, the story is good.
One of the most cringiest stuff I've ever witnessed. The MC is a typical loser who says he doesn't care about anything anymore and than cares and than losses the cared person and goes through his loser life in that way. This is the one of the most unfortunate reads of my life. Grammar left the chat in this book. Bye
this is actually really well-thought-out in my opinion keep it up and thanks for the story mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
The grammar and spelling are so bad. It takes away from the story. This needs to be corrected because it is such a hard read otherwise. Please fix it.
Um desastre gramatical de proporções épicas