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you know.... not many FF of this PJ.... if have the MC are demigod of Zeus or twin of Percy... and this is good FF... update more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I read a bit into the story, and first of all fix your sypnosis and second fix your grammar in your chapters, they are just small chapters but there are many if then and they are pretty annoying, with good grammar your novel would be much better. World is Percy Jackson, update stability seems a bit slow and yeah just give it a try if you dont mind many mistakes(small ones), much better then mtl
there is not much Percy jackson novels on here so 5stars off top [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I’m excited to see what you doo going forward and how you will develop the character so please dont drop it 😂 and can you at least have him pretend to care but other than that it’s already a good read
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you know.... not many FF of this PJ.... if have the MC are demigod of Zeus or twin of Percy... and this is good FF... update more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I read a bit into the story, and first of all fix your sypnosis and second fix your grammar in your chapters, they are just small chapters but there are many if then and they are pretty annoying, with good grammar your novel would be much better. World is Percy Jackson, update stability seems a bit slow and yeah just give it a try if you dont mind many mistakes(small ones), much better then mtl
there is not much Percy jackson novels on here so 5stars off top [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I’m excited to see what you doo going forward and how you will develop the character so please dont drop it 😂 and can you at least have him pretend to care but other than that it’s already a good read
The grammar errors and the cringe is to much! .