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Messed up 'Morals'. MC is fine with indulging in adultery and harem which is wrong, evil and crime according to 'Morals' and 'Laws' of majority of countries. Yet, when it comes to killing or some other 'grey' area like abandoning someone, then, he behaves like he is some Monk or Saint. What kind of f*cked up morals are these. He even shows hesitation in harming and fighting someone to defend himself when he has got second chance at life. Shouldn't he hold his second chance at life with both hands and fight for it. He shows repulsion towards training and gaining strength. How is he gonna defend himself when he has no will to get strong knowing there are godly forces who order him. I have read at most 50 chapters, and came to conclusion that MC is sus, and might prefer being SPOON FED by system his whole life while he indulged in adultery and his harem conquest. If MC is fine with 'dark' side of the 'Morality' like 'adultery' and 'harem' then he should be fine with 'killing' or atleast 'harming'. Being selective in 'morals' is HYPOCRISY!
I have read some of the fanfic Every Hole is a Goal, but even so I still found myself with a headache while reading the first five chapters. I hate it when a story begin mysteriously with no explanation about things, I tried to understand and even gave this story a chance and read to chapter 5 try and understand what's going on and still failed. That's when I knew I need to drop this and give this fanfic a 1 star review.
When is this book go be done it look good also who the love interest or is it a harem
everything before chapter 17 somehow, I managed to read it, but it's the worst experience consider I thought this was avatar fanfic and got little disappointed bro these 17 useless chapters.
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First of all, this novel become from one that I read whenever I remember it to one that I'm hoping to see a new ch every time I look at it, the first ch of the original world didn't seem that important but it's just a few chapters so it's not really a problem to read them; the Avatar world is really interesting for someone who didn't see avatar and because the author changed some things from the original, at least I think so but the best part for me is that it makes me smile almost all the chapters with the amount of jokes that there are.
Will this comic continue, will there be more chapters? Apart from that, I like everything about this story!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This version is pretty mild compare to EHG for the most part since iirc EHG got ra-e in the og h-world with the daughter of store owner (forgot the name) and azula tied up her friend so yeah better for the most part and also the most important is that ray is back
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I'm disappointed with the story. It has a system, apparently worth nothing. The MC is a transmigrator that doesn't know the plot, which makes the whole transmigration useless. Sokka is so annoying that it isn't worth waiting for character development. Just kill him or something. The MC has no drive to get stronger, not even to learn bending, I'm considering the doesn't know the plot, anyone would jump at the opportunity to control the elements. I came here because I wanted lemons in avatar. But now I don't know if it's worth all the frustration from continuing to read. Once I calm down, I will try again. Not too hopeful though.
I was wondering if you could make an auxiliary chapter to highlight the harem and his current powerbase .I am asking because I stopped reading to build up chapters ,now I don't know who is in the harem snd what characters won't be .
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Those who read 'Goddess Collector' can perfectly say this fic is far better than that.. Great world arc for Avatar TLA(1st world), loved the way you brought the characters into the scenes as well as power up for MC.. Good writing quality along with the storylines ... Just needed a bit more updates but it's still good since you're also updating your other works...
I have read the chapter 50 so far and I liked it and I pray to Author sama that there's no traps in the heram other than that keep up the good work and I'm going to go check out your other books cuz I heard that there was good🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜
Tedious read. It's so unbelievably boring that I would rather read a no-effort fanfic of Avatar than this snooze-fest of a novel. The plots are overly complex, but not in a way that's meant to entertain. The author adds unto the original plot by mixing elements and characters that would be introduced in the future. The result? A cesspool of combined plots that's not only annoying to read, because it's stretched beyond belief, but also fails to add something new to the table. The Mc? Boring. He has no personality and his internal conflicts so unrelatable and foreign that I believe 90% of the could literally not care. Not to mention the characters making decisions and having dilemnas that didn't exist in the original with the author failing to provide a compelling argument as to why the decisions were made or why the character feels and think differently from the original. I don't think the author understand why fanfics exist. And looking at the author's mcs, it seems like he's struggling with making mcs with personality, which is ironic because he for some reason, with his mc's interactions, sells his characters as charismatic. There's a disconnect from how utterly boring his MCs and how the characters percieve them. It's just sad seeing this much effort go to waste because the author ignores the fundamentals to create his ideal fantasy SI. Fantasy being he has no idea how to make an attractive character because he most likely isn't attractive himself nor does he have a lot of experience with women, making his written interactions stale, inorganic and mostly relies on the character's reactive display to add on his MCs foundation.
(has spoiler) I thought it was good, I didn't feel like reading it because I thought it was going to be getting a girl and we're going to proceed without development, I thought it was a good read I didn't think it was forced I liked the approach that the first world is being made as a basis for procimos, the fights are good I like that the world may not be the same as the original so I don't like that the gender of the characters changes like a boy becomes a girl, I would also like to be like avartar kyoshi reviver, I think that in the world of avartar all that's left is to pergar Ty Lee and maybe her sisters manage nik's inner world, finish off ozai and go back to home world. (I found it better than Quest Maker of Soul Land I think this one is much more interesting since being able to go to any world with different dynamics the character of this novelist changes over the course of the story, I would prefer that more emphasis was given to fights too and bequeathed to interaction of the girls they are maturing I really liked this story) I think it's cool to be the next world outside (tsugumomo) a more or less normal world with tools that will come from girls and cool fights and even join fights and train girls, to get better the girls can even be his clothes, and I didn't see any fans -fiction of this anime. (Google translator)
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This fanfic is really worth to read and this is the best Avatar fanfic u can get 1000% really amazing 😍. And i suggest for u to read from chapter 18. "Warning u will get addicted 😂"
Thanks for this amazing story and keep up the good work.📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖
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Excelente FanFiction uma das melhores que vi na minha vida,só espero que o MC continue neutro e não vire um pervertido que só pensa em rabo de saia.
This is a modified, better version of GC:EHG. Its awesome, and is a must read for anyone. I loved it and believe me you will too. Well it unfortunate that previous version got banned but now rewrite is going to be even better. Thank you author-san!
I'm excited to read this book! And the best part is it has already 100+ chapters and still going! I have to ask, do you have any plans to send Nik to Akame ga Kill in the future? It would be interesting to see him join the dark side with Esdeath and "punish" her for all her sins. UwU
I'm sure I'll love this book as it's a rewrite of my most favorite fanfic as it's a rewrite it's even better so let's see how it goes ........
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With everything I've read... I must say that it's a well-developed and inversive story... It's a bit slow at first but it's worth reading and seeing what the next chapters hold.
I've honestly been meaning to leave a review for this story, but something always seemed to come up, but here goes. [Writing Quality: 5/5] Spelling, grammar, punctuation, & text spacing are all near perfect with very few mistakes or areas to nitpick making reading very pleasant. [Story Development: 5/5] The plot is steady without feeling slow and each chapter offers some form of progression. Whether that progression is plot sided, character growth, or relationship advancement between characters. [Character Design: 5/5] Author tastefully increased the ages of the ATLA cast by pushing back Aangs reappearance a few years. The characters aren't 1 dimensional and have logical reasons for their actions. [Update Stability: 5/5] Author sticks to their stated release time frame & even releases an extra chapter on occasion. [World Background: 5/5] Author made the MC's 'homeworld' a combination of the reality mixed with various romance & H-manga that im more interested in for reasons of culture. Author also does a good job with handling the world building of ATLA in a timeline where Aang woke up late so im also eager for the plot to advance to see how its handled. Anyway, thats all from. This story is definitely worth your time and highly suggest giving it a try.
Messed up 'Morals'. MC is fine with indulging in adultery and harem which is wrong, evil and crime according to 'Morals' and 'Laws' of majority of countries. Yet, when it comes to killing or some other 'grey' area like abandoning someone, then, he behaves like he is some Monk or Saint. What kind of f*cked up morals are these. He even shows hesitation in harming and fighting someone to defend himself when he has got second chance at life. Shouldn't he hold his second chance at life with both hands and fight for it. He shows repulsion towards training and gaining strength. How is he gonna defend himself when he has no will to get strong knowing there are godly forces who order him. I have read at most 50 chapters, and came to conclusion that MC is sus, and might prefer being SPOON FED by system his whole life while he indulged in adultery and his harem conquest. If MC is fine with 'dark' side of the 'Morality' like 'adultery' and 'harem' then he should be fine with 'killing' or atleast 'harming'. Being selective in 'morals' is HYPOCRISY!
I have read some of the fanfic Every Hole is a Goal, but even so I still found myself with a headache while reading the first five chapters. I hate it when a story begin mysteriously with no explanation about things, I tried to understand and even gave this story a chance and read to chapter 5 try and understand what's going on and still failed. That's when I knew I need to drop this and give this fanfic a 1 star review.
When is this book go be done it look good also who the love interest or is it a harem
everything before chapter 17 somehow, I managed to read it, but it's the worst experience consider I thought this was avatar fanfic and got little disappointed bro these 17 useless chapters.
Дуже нудно написано, а головне нормалізована путанська поведінка 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
First of all, this novel become from one that I read whenever I remember it to one that I'm hoping to see a new ch every time I look at it, the first ch of the original world didn't seem that important but it's just a few chapters so it's not really a problem to read them; the Avatar world is really interesting for someone who didn't see avatar and because the author changed some things from the original, at least I think so but the best part for me is that it makes me smile almost all the chapters with the amount of jokes that there are.
Will this comic continue, will there be more chapters? Apart from that, I like everything about this story!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This version is pretty mild compare to EHG for the most part since iirc EHG got ra-e in the og h-world with the daughter of store owner (forgot the name) and azula tied up her friend so yeah better for the most part and also the most important is that ray is back
Spoiler enthüllen I'm disappointed with the story. It has a system, apparently worth nothing. The MC is a transmigrator that doesn't know the plot, which makes the whole transmigration useless. Sokka is so annoying that it isn't worth waiting for character development. Just kill him or something. The MC has no drive to get stronger, not even to learn bending, I'm considering the doesn't know the plot, anyone would jump at the opportunity to control the elements. I came here because I wanted lemons in avatar. But now I don't know if it's worth all the frustration from continuing to read. Once I calm down, I will try again. Not too hopeful though.
I was wondering if you could make an auxiliary chapter to highlight the harem and his current powerbase .I am asking because I stopped reading to build up chapters ,now I don't know who is in the harem snd what characters won't be .
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Those who read 'Goddess Collector' can perfectly say this fic is far better than that.. Great world arc for Avatar TLA(1st world), loved the way you brought the characters into the scenes as well as power up for MC.. Good writing quality along with the storylines ... Just needed a bit more updates but it's still good since you're also updating your other works...
I have read the chapter 50 so far and I liked it and I pray to Author sama that there's no traps in the heram other than that keep up the good work and I'm going to go check out your other books cuz I heard that there was good🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜
Tedious read. It's so unbelievably boring that I would rather read a no-effort fanfic of Avatar than this snooze-fest of a novel. The plots are overly complex, but not in a way that's meant to entertain. The author adds unto the original plot by mixing elements and characters that would be introduced in the future. The result? A cesspool of combined plots that's not only annoying to read, because it's stretched beyond belief, but also fails to add something new to the table. The Mc? Boring. He has no personality and his internal conflicts so unrelatable and foreign that I believe 90% of the could literally not care. Not to mention the characters making decisions and having dilemnas that didn't exist in the original with the author failing to provide a compelling argument as to why the decisions were made or why the character feels and think differently from the original. I don't think the author understand why fanfics exist. And looking at the author's mcs, it seems like he's struggling with making mcs with personality, which is ironic because he for some reason, with his mc's interactions, sells his characters as charismatic. There's a disconnect from how utterly boring his MCs and how the characters percieve them. It's just sad seeing this much effort go to waste because the author ignores the fundamentals to create his ideal fantasy SI. Fantasy being he has no idea how to make an attractive character because he most likely isn't attractive himself nor does he have a lot of experience with women, making his written interactions stale, inorganic and mostly relies on the character's reactive display to add on his MCs foundation.
(has spoiler) I thought it was good, I didn't feel like reading it because I thought it was going to be getting a girl and we're going to proceed without development, I thought it was a good read I didn't think it was forced I liked the approach that the first world is being made as a basis for procimos, the fights are good I like that the world may not be the same as the original so I don't like that the gender of the characters changes like a boy becomes a girl, I would also like to be like avartar kyoshi reviver, I think that in the world of avartar all that's left is to pergar Ty Lee and maybe her sisters manage nik's inner world, finish off ozai and go back to home world. (I found it better than Quest Maker of Soul Land I think this one is much more interesting since being able to go to any world with different dynamics the character of this novelist changes over the course of the story, I would prefer that more emphasis was given to fights too and bequeathed to interaction of the girls they are maturing I really liked this story) I think it's cool to be the next world outside (tsugumomo) a more or less normal world with tools that will come from girls and cool fights and even join fights and train girls, to get better the girls can even be his clothes, and I didn't see any fans -fiction of this anime. (Google translator)
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This fanfic is really worth to read and this is the best Avatar fanfic u can get 1000% really amazing 😍. And i suggest for u to read from chapter 18. "Warning u will get addicted 😂"
Thanks for this amazing story and keep up the good work.📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖
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Excelente FanFiction uma das melhores que vi na minha vida,só espero que o MC continue neutro e não vire um pervertido que só pensa em rabo de saia.
This is a modified, better version of GC:EHG. Its awesome, and is a must read for anyone. I loved it and believe me you will too. Well it unfortunate that previous version got banned but now rewrite is going to be even better. Thank you author-san!
I'm excited to read this book! And the best part is it has already 100+ chapters and still going! I have to ask, do you have any plans to send Nik to Akame ga Kill in the future? It would be interesting to see him join the dark side with Esdeath and "punish" her for all her sins. UwU
I'm sure I'll love this book as it's a rewrite of my most favorite fanfic as it's a rewrite it's even better so let's see how it goes ........
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With everything I've read... I must say that it's a well-developed and inversive story... It's a bit slow at first but it's worth reading and seeing what the next chapters hold.
I've honestly been meaning to leave a review for this story, but something always seemed to come up, but here goes. [Writing Quality: 5/5] Spelling, grammar, punctuation, & text spacing are all near perfect with very few mistakes or areas to nitpick making reading very pleasant. [Story Development: 5/5] The plot is steady without feeling slow and each chapter offers some form of progression. Whether that progression is plot sided, character growth, or relationship advancement between characters. [Character Design: 5/5] Author tastefully increased the ages of the ATLA cast by pushing back Aangs reappearance a few years. The characters aren't 1 dimensional and have logical reasons for their actions. [Update Stability: 5/5] Author sticks to their stated release time frame & even releases an extra chapter on occasion. [World Background: 5/5] Author made the MC's 'homeworld' a combination of the reality mixed with various romance & H-manga that im more interested in for reasons of culture. Author also does a good job with handling the world building of ATLA in a timeline where Aang woke up late so im also eager for the plot to advance to see how its handled. Anyway, thats all from. This story is definitely worth your time and highly suggest giving it a try.