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Warning: This is a rewrite of my previous fanfic— Every Hole is a Goal.
Current World: Avatar: The Last Airbender
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Executed for escaping his owners, Nik met a relieving fate of beheading with the circumstances of his corpse unknown yet having an honorable end of his corpse is not his greatest concern for he is given a chance at life again. Of course, this meant Nik now worked for an organization that sent individuals like him throughout the omniverse for some reason unknown to him.
As they say, if for the penny, in for the pounding.
Nik: Wait... I'm not a prost... ehm, rental 'helper' anymore. Do I still charge?
An adventure of a lifetime, they say. One that never ends.
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Note:
1) I don't own any original lore.
2) This is the most standard 'collection' type harem novel you will ever see, so, if this is not your taste... well, give it a shot still and see if whether the other aspects of fanfic can cover them or not.
3) All the characters I write smut about will be 18+. I will make sure to tweak the fanfic a bit in that way to make sure that the story itself adapts to these circumstances.
4) If tags like an orgy and incestuous relationship are not your cup of tea, then... this may not be the 'one' fanfic for you.
5) If men and women of sexual 'socialness' more commonly termed as floozy and even more degenerative terms most likely known to you all is not your cup of tea, then I apologize once again, this fanfic may not be the 'one.'
6) There is no ntr, but there may be netori.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionTedious read. It's so unbelievably boring that I would rather read a no-effort fanfic of Avatar than this snooze-fest of a novel. The plots are overly complex, but not in a way that's meant to entertain. The author adds unto the original plot by mixing elements and characters that would be introduced in the future. The result? A cesspool of combined plots that's not only annoying to read, because it's stretched beyond belief, but also fails to add something new to the table. The Mc? Boring. He has no personality and his internal conflicts so unrelatable and foreign that I believe 90% of the could literally not care. Not to mention the characters making decisions and having dilemnas that didn't exist in the original with the author failing to provide a compelling argument as to why the decisions were made or why the character feels and think differently from the original. I don't think the author understand why fanfics exist. And looking at the author's mcs, it seems like he's struggling with making mcs with personality, which is ironic because he for some reason, with his mc's interactions, sells his characters as charismatic. There's a disconnect from how utterly boring his MCs and how the characters percieve them. It's just sad seeing this much effort go to waste because the author ignores the fundamentals to create his ideal fantasy SI. Fantasy being he has no idea how to make an attractive character because he most likely isn't attractive himself nor does he have a lot of experience with women, making his written interactions stale, inorganic and mostly relies on the character's reactive display to add on his MCs foundation.
I'm sure I'll love this book as it's a rewrite of my most favorite fanfic as it's a rewrite it's even better so let's see how it goes ........
This is a modified, better version of GC:EHG. Its awesome, and is a must read for anyone. I loved it and believe me you will too. Well it unfortunate that previous version got banned but now rewrite is going to be even better. Thank you author-san!
This version starts way to slow with a useless prolog world that will be forgotten because the worlds he will go will take hundreds of chapters. just skip until he goes to avatar. Nothing useful until then. After the first 2 chapters.
Seeing how this a rewrite, i just hope the other charcter that he pick up on his travel will have more a interactive role after they leave their original world.
I'm disappointed with the story. It has a system, apparently worth nothing. The MC is a transmigrator that doesn't know the plot, which makes the whole transmigration useless. Sokka is so annoying that it isn't worth waiting for character development. Just kill him or something. The MC has no drive to get stronger, not even to learn bending, I'm considering the doesn't know the plot, anyone would jump at the opportunity to control the elements. I came here because I wanted lemons in avatar. But now I don't know if it's worth all the frustration from continuing to read. Once I calm down, I will try again. Not too hopeful though.
The best harem FF I have ever read. The interaction of the characters is so real that it makes me admire your work. Stick with this amazing FF.
5 stars from me, because it is the improved version of one of my favorite fanfic tops, as the MC, the FMC, the background plot, the worlds, is really well thought out, of course there may be small improvements, but still I feel really happy to read this work and also improved!
Shameless reviw here, going for the 5 stars because I love the way FanHarem writes and I really appreciate the effort he is making in rewriting the story, hope the original girls stay with him again.
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ok listen im gonna be honest this is a amazing read BUT its not for me its really good but i just coudltn get into it but author you have talent so keep it up
So you decided to restart the story? For some reason I remember staying in chapter 300 and want to see if it changed too much to read. PS: I delete review when you reply.
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I have read some of the fanfic Every Hole is a Goal, but even so I still found myself with a headache while reading the first five chapters. I hate it when a story begin mysteriously with no explanation about things, I tried to understand and even gave this story a chance and read to chapter 5 try and understand what's going on and still failed. That's when I knew I need to drop this and give this fanfic a 1 star review.
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The Best, I love this FF. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
I have only 1 question, the cover photo is azula, but in the story azula never appeared, I wonder if she will appear in the future, will she have a love affair with mc?
Autor FanHarem
I've honestly been meaning to leave a review for this story, but something always seemed to come up, but here goes. [Writing Quality: 5/5] Spelling, grammar, punctuation, & text spacing are all near perfect with very few mistakes or areas to nitpick making reading very pleasant. [Story Development: 5/5] The plot is steady without feeling slow and each chapter offers some form of progression. Whether that progression is plot sided, character growth, or relationship advancement between characters. [Character Design: 5/5] Author tastefully increased the ages of the ATLA cast by pushing back Aangs reappearance a few years. The characters aren't 1 dimensional and have logical reasons for their actions. [Update Stability: 5/5] Author sticks to their stated release time frame & even releases an extra chapter on occasion. [World Background: 5/5] Author made the MC's 'homeworld' a combination of the reality mixed with various romance & H-manga that im more interested in for reasons of culture. Author also does a good job with handling the world building of ATLA in a timeline where Aang woke up late so im also eager for the plot to advance to see how its handled. Anyway, thats all from. This story is definitely worth your time and highly suggest giving it a try.