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The best harem FF I have ever read. The interaction of the characters is so real that it makes me admire your work. Stick with this amazing FF.
The Best, I love this FF. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
ok listen im gonna be honest this is a amazing read BUT its not for me its really good but i just coudltn get into it but author you have talent so keep it up
I have only 1 question, the cover photo is azula, but in the story azula never appeared, I wonder if she will appear in the future, will she have a love affair with mc?
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Simply amazing. It’s a rewrite of one of the author’s previous novels. You could just see the improvements the author has undergone, from grammar, plot, and character design, you could really see that the author has put so much time and effort to improve their writing.
it's a deep story with no plot holes (atleast i didn't find any) very fun to read grammar mistake nonexistance doesn't require any loose of brain cells to read so yeah one of the best fanfic out there
i looked up for the Goddess Collector and then i remembered there reason why i didn't continue to read this, just for the fact that you rewrite this and erased the Amano Megumi arc i will give you a casual 5 star, well i hope.... so much that the MC in this novel won't do much NTR and mostly target popular side female charcter
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very good! ...................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very good .....................................................................................................................................
3.6* Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
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i just got to chapter 3 but i'm very confused, what is the initial universe? what is the power of the MC? the MC good or bad? does he have a system? if you have what it is? I believe the story is good but I can't go on as lost as Zoro reading a map. I: English is not my mother tongue. II: I don't care about spoils.
New one beginning is better, and more descriptive. Also no r*pe for first harem member(if i remember correctly).Its good.Keep it up. I caught up GC's latest chapters and left it there to pile up more chapters. And later when i came back i saw the notice about rewrite version. Just caught up latest chapters again. And I hope not to see rewrite notice again lol.
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bro who is the one on the cover...tell me the sauce...shes just so... :O or did you draw her yourself? she seems like azula though if m not wrong
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Spaghet Ingredients 1 CUP EDEN ORGINAL CHEESE 1KG SPAGHETTI NOODLES 1 BOTTLE BANANA KETCHUP 560G SPAGHETTI SAUCE 1TSP GARLIC, MINCED ¾ KG GROUND BEEF 5 HOTDOGS, SLICED 2 BOUILLON BEEF CUBES, DISSOLVED IN WATER 1 MEDIUM ONION, CHOPPED 7 TBSP BUTTER 2 TBSP SALT 4 TBSP COOKING OIL Method Cook pasta according to instructions on the packaging. Drain and set aside. Saute garlic & onion in butter until onions turn translucent. Add ground beef and cook for 5 mins. Add hotdog and cook for 2 mins. Add the sauce, cubes, ketchup, and water. Simmer for 20 mins. Stir occasionally. Pour spaghetti sauce over pasta. Top with grated Eden Cheese and serve.
This version starts way to slow with a useless prolog world that will be forgotten because the worlds he will go will take hundreds of chapters. just skip until he goes to avatar. Nothing useful until then. After the first 2 chapters.
The best harem FF I have ever read. The interaction of the characters is so real that it makes me admire your work. Stick with this amazing FF.
The Best, I love this FF. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
ok listen im gonna be honest this is a amazing read BUT its not for me its really good but i just coudltn get into it but author you have talent so keep it up
I have only 1 question, the cover photo is azula, but in the story azula never appeared, I wonder if she will appear in the future, will she have a love affair with mc?
anti 5star bot spamm .......................................................................................
I love this book. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Just Perfect , read it ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Simply amazing. It’s a rewrite of one of the author’s previous novels. You could just see the improvements the author has undergone, from grammar, plot, and character design, you could really see that the author has put so much time and effort to improve their writing.
it's a deep story with no plot holes (atleast i didn't find any) very fun to read grammar mistake nonexistance doesn't require any loose of brain cells to read so yeah one of the best fanfic out there
i looked up for the Goddess Collector and then i remembered there reason why i didn't continue to read this, just for the fact that you rewrite this and erased the Amano Megumi arc i will give you a casual 5 star, well i hope.... so much that the MC in this novel won't do much NTR and mostly target popular side female charcter
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esta muy bien espero qe salga mas capitulos rapido xddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffddddd
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Spoiler enthüllen who's in the harem and how big is it? who's in the harem and how big is it? who's in the harem and how big is it? who's in the harem and how big is it? who's in the harem and how big is it?
very good! ...................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very good .....................................................................................................................................
3.6* Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
Spoiler enthüllen i just got to chapter 3 but i'm very confused, what is the initial universe? what is the power of the MC? the MC good or bad? does he have a system? if you have what it is? I believe the story is good but I can't go on as lost as Zoro reading a map. I: English is not my mother tongue. II: I don't care about spoils.
New one beginning is better, and more descriptive. Also no r*pe for first harem member(if i remember correctly).Its good.Keep it up. I caught up GC's latest chapters and left it there to pile up more chapters. And later when i came back i saw the notice about rewrite version. Just caught up latest chapters again. And I hope not to see rewrite notice again lol.
Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
bro who is the one on the cover...tell me the sauce...shes just so... :O or did you draw her yourself? she seems like azula though if m not wrong
Good novel Good plot good autor good MC Good good good good good good Good novel Good plot good autor good MC Good good good good good good Good novel Good plot good autor good MC Good good good good good good
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Spaghet Ingredients 1 CUP EDEN ORGINAL CHEESE 1KG SPAGHETTI NOODLES 1 BOTTLE BANANA KETCHUP 560G SPAGHETTI SAUCE 1TSP GARLIC, MINCED ¾ KG GROUND BEEF 5 HOTDOGS, SLICED 2 BOUILLON BEEF CUBES, DISSOLVED IN WATER 1 MEDIUM ONION, CHOPPED 7 TBSP BUTTER 2 TBSP SALT 4 TBSP COOKING OIL Method Cook pasta according to instructions on the packaging. Drain and set aside. Saute garlic & onion in butter until onions turn translucent. Add ground beef and cook for 5 mins. Add hotdog and cook for 2 mins. Add the sauce, cubes, ketchup, and water. Simmer for 20 mins. Stir occasionally. Pour spaghetti sauce over pasta. Top with grated Eden Cheese and serve.
This version starts way to slow with a useless prolog world that will be forgotten because the worlds he will go will take hundreds of chapters. just skip until he goes to avatar. Nothing useful until then. After the first 2 chapters.