HP: The Guardian

Book&Literature 108 Kapitel 2.3M Ansichten

Autor: BrownAmerican

4.42 (54 Bewertungen)

Lesen In der Bibliothek Zur Bibliothek hinzufügen

Über Inhaltsverzeichnis

Zusammenfassung

Magic. Thou are forsooth profound. None could comprehend thou. By thy grace, none shall.
Magic is a fickle being. In the hands of a scholar, it usher development. In the hands of a madman, it brings destruction. To master magic in it's essence, however, would be impossible. If one did, however, he would be able to contend with death itself.
Charlus Potter has a gift. Having a gift, however, is often not enough. Can Charlus Potter use this gift for the betterment of the society, as well as his friends and family? Or will he succumb to the power like many before him?

Story is slow at first but picks up speed quickly. Recommendation to people who want to skip to the plot - read till chapter 15 and then skip to chapter 60.

You can add characters if you are my patron

DISCLAIMER:
Cover Page does not belong to me.
Harry Potter belongs to J K Rowling

Support me on Patreon for extra chapters.
www.patreon.com/BrownAmerican

General Audiences

Fans

Alle anzeigen

tadashi Beigetragen 27
Daoist681905 Beigetragen 12
Jluisvh Beigetragen 9

Wöchentlicher Energiestatus

-- Power- Rangliste

-- Power- Stein

Abstimmen

Das könnte Ihnen auch gefallen

Witcher: The Half Elf

4.5
HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic

3.1
Douluo: The Way Of Martial Arts

4.3
GOT: The Golden Lion

4.6
Return of Salazar Slytherin

4.9
Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

4.7

54Rezensionen

4.42

Qualität des Schreibens
Veröffentlichungsstabilität
Geschichtenentwicklung
Charakter-Design
Welthintergrund

Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen

Schreiben Sie eine Rezension

liked neuest

LV 3

dysplex

Yes. Another non-harem. I've been finding gold mines of non-harems. Finally, people know what's right for them. Praise the no-harem Gods. I've found about 6 no harems so far, I'm still looking.

3yr 221

35 Antworten anzeigen

LV 2

AzureFlame0

LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT

3yr 15

1 Antworten anzeigen

LV 14

SnowRose

This is a very interesting fanfiction centered in the Harry Potter world. Its not your typical ‘Hogwarts’ ‘Harry Potter’ centered story and instead heads down a new path which i respect the author for. Pros: -Unique when compared to other HP fanfics. -Still holds true to the HP world. -Interesting backstory for the main character and he was introduced pretty well. -Author is intentive to the readers feelings and while he makes mistakes, its clear he cares about the story’s progress going foward. Now the negative aspects arent game changing but they can be annoying at times. Thankfully its clear the author is trying to improve and is taking the readers thoughts into account. Cons: -Grammar can sometimes take a quality hit. An editor who went through the chapters and fixed them up could improve the story drastically. The word count could be increased per chapter and it would make the overall story more captivating. -The author tends to forget what he wrote sometimes which can lead to confusion. -Situations tend to jump out from seemingly no where. Characters and character backstorys seem to be interjected into the story at random points and dont really have any ‘sticking power’ they arent captivating and readers honestly dont really care about side characters they dont find interesting. Lucas and Lucifer are examples. The only characters i care about at this point are the MC, the original cast (Fleur), and the Magic Theory teacher is starting to get interesting. Hopefully the author will spend some more time trying to flesh out characters before moving the plot too far ahead where they become irrelevant. I personally would recommend slowing down updates, extending chapter length by about double its current length, and not worry about rushing things. I would pref the first 100 chapters be dedicated to character development so a firm base is established. Final thoughts: Read it. Its worth the read and it has potential to be a great HP story so long as the author continues to take readers suggestions while holding true to their own vision. It may be challenging but the end product would be something great.

Spoiler enthüllen