Corazón

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Pearys

This is a good story with a slice of life. The main character is quite depressed since the beginning but he is somehow relatable! I look forward to see how the ML life goes on and his love life too😄😄

LV 1

Gaureeey

is this a biography? because if it is, I'm just stunned by the writing and experiences, the reader doesn't get a brief glimpse but an in depth exploration of the MC's struggle with mental health. I'm just stunned, This is metaphorical in a beautiful ways and painful to read too, i wanna see more though! post more !!!! keep me notified

LV 1

Daoistk9tHtO

What a story! You give us some wonderful story with excellent analogy. Your had grammatical error in the first chapter but the recent and newest chap is fine. Keep workin and good luck

LV 2

Xonstant

My first genuine review. I don't know why this story got me hooked up, just read a few chapters and I can't stop reading it maybe I got a thing for drama and stuff, anyways the story is pretty good and I'm loving the suspense it's giving me and its really really really really really great

LV 1

Ilham_Mazaya

Wonderful, the first chapter is drag me over to the others. This is just perfect, although there some grammatical error but you get better on the recent chap, the grammar was fine. Keep up! Good luck!

LV 1

Lexi_Roberson

AMAZING!!! I can't even begin to comprehend what I read just over the first chapter!!! It was very engaging and well thought out. It definitely keeps you entertained, and makes you keep your attention on it. You can't forget where you left off, even after reading a bunch of other novels!!! I thought the storyline was very well written and developed as well. I thought the beginning could've been a little more descriptive though, I just didn't understand who this character was at first. I also always recommend checking the grammar, us authors always struggle with this!!! Can't wait to read more, and see how the story develops more later on!!! I would like to mention I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!

LV 5

ILLYAchan

This is a heartbreaking story. The male character is filled with sadness in the starting chapters that makes one wonder how will he cope up with his problems while not affecting his work. Anyway, the plot is good but the story needs some editing in some paragraphs to make the story better. Overall, it's enjoyable to read. Keep it up author! :)

LV 13

cloudy8578

This is a great story. It's very relatable and I really connected personally with this one. It's realistic but also hopeful and inspiring. (5/5)

LV 11

pelzy

I haven't read many novels with slice of life, and so I am very interested. it's a good book. I love the character development and feel sorry that he's going through such hard times. Hope to see more.

LV 13

LordSputnik

The Good: Excellent story with a very strong attention to the emotions attached with loss. The author does a great job of helping the reader feel everything as intended! The paragraph structure is done well so the story flows smoothly without having long paragraphs or short stuttering ones. The Bad: As great as the structure is, the grammar is just... barely passable... Many times tenses get switched within the same sentence accidentally or the wrong verb tense is used period. Punctuation needs a bit of help but that should come with the grammar. While I feel this is a great story, I feel like it is hard to digest with how often I find myself double-backing to reread things due to the grammar mistakes. The Neutral: Overall, excellent work and great story. I feel like you are improving a little with each chapter, but I still think verb tenses are really giving you trouble. Keep at it though and give Grammarly a try if you are still struggling with verb tenses.

LV 2

miu_hozuki

It's good start to a story. dark, yet, compelling.. the author takes you through emotional downs of the main character through imagination.. Read it. It just might be your cup of tea!!!

LV 3

mozza_mello

Wow this is a good book :D The writing is amazing and smooth, me likey! Although there are a few grammatical errors, but it okie hehe <3 My favorite part about this book is how the author portrayed the characters' feelings and emotions. It's very immersive ayeee Great job, author! <3

LV 2

Glojade

Breakups are always a mess. Reading chp one, I got to know the writer.someone must have experienced that to write that scene. Keep up the good work, but still brush up your writing.

LV 11

The_Mad_Titan

This is an interesting story with an interesting MC, i admit its heart breaking sometimes and the MC is depressed in the first few chapters but that just shows you how much character development he's going to attain later. Edit some grammar and spelling errors though. Good work author

LV 10

CorwynGentry

This is an excellent story; I like the characters and how they grow. Also, I like how the writer pours his skeptical and unusual thought.

LV 15

goldenchild725

It's an interesting story. I find these types of stories depressing, but you did a really good job with the topic. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Good job.

LV 13

WinterQween

Like the other reviews the MC is quite relatable. The author does a solid job at explaining the MC's pain and his reactions are very realistic. There are some grammatical and spelling errors but nothing that would take away from the novel. Altogether has great potential, keep writing!

LV 1

Ilostmytwoears

Is this somecopy work because i feel i have read or seen this somewhere before. But good story with a lot of room for development. Keep on writing 😁😁😁😁😁