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HaremPLS

PERFECT

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Gilgamesh9669

Of Course i gave my own novel a 5 stars XD but srx if you pass reviews do give me a fair chance and a fair rating Thank you i hope you enjoy you're Day

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Sage_HiddenBear

Overall the quality is quite subpar. The grammar takes the cake being almost as bad as some machine translations I have had the misfortune to read. I suggest takng some time to run your story through Grammarly to repair the terrible grammar. You have some potential when it comes to imaginative backgrounds and character design. It will all the better when it can be read easily as well. Good Luck.

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ahmed_waleed_1200

Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters

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jeanpierregerardo

good and interesing. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Kirin554

Story is a bit too chuni but it has potential. ............................................... . .

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Daoist250419

A very good story. Interesting plot and I hope you finish it. ______&_&__________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________

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DaoistdVMJeW

The story is good so far and really liked it i will wait until the series has a lot of chapter so i can read it for a ling time i be waiting for the story also i wanna say the characters here are really cool just saying

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Dekxz

Good story, give us more chaps 😄 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Dao_of_Melancholy

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UrizenVergil

nice story development, different from others which go with an anime with fate system but this is a different world created by the author and maybe kingdom building in the future

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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LethanAlexander

good, i just need 1 word to describe this story heh... soo yeah. Translation Quality 5 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 4 Character Design 3 World Background 4 ---------------------- The total score 4.2

LV 12

TheMist122

Great story . It's hard to find good story nowadays and even if they have great stories, they won't update after a very long time for almost 1 or 2 yrs. So this story deserves to get a high rating from me.

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Lazy_Asshole

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Alusec_BR1

Good, Continue and i recommended reading ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████

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Dfransginola

nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

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tigrevalentine

This is really good! please continue to make more chapters and I'm sure it would be popular!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Zraiks

please continue with this work man. hahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahaha

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valerio_malgarini

Great story .