White Snake

LV 14

Jacksmith

Just showing support.......... .............................................. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😎

LV 4

Cronos97

I like this novel a lot continue like thisss pliss👍👌👌👌 ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️

LV 5

Precheur

okay im putin ths score cause i wil read more after, but ive got an issue here, he said he didnt want vampire because well how would he do if he end up alone wwithout any blood. But it can also be said for all the others races with food or water.... only lich wouldn't have to worry about that

LV 11

Chenglei

1) Writing Quality is Poor. 2) The Reasons for choosing his Race as a Snake is... I don't even know... I didn't get it at ALL. 3) His reasons for not choosing another Race are just as confusing. 4) His personality seems a bit weird. 5) His 'tragic' past is incredibly short and doesn't make much sense.

LV 15

Jack_N_Mikhail

The concept is kinda fun to read. But im not sure how it will be executed. I will need to wait till there's 100+ chapters to decide. My real rating would be around 3 to 3.5stars, but I rated higher to motivate author and bring up the ratings for this novel. Good luck!

LV 4

PAB2377

seems to be doing a good job. but MC seems like dumbo. make it so that he grows to be a little cunning and smart. the SYSTEM is OP. explanation seems to repeat again.

LV 6

InHisName

Dozens of chapters with an extremely annoying MC arguing with a somehow more annoying A.I. If that wasn't enough the writing quality was terrible. How can something go so wrong...? Read and find out...

LV 3

tune50

Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks it’s funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but it’s annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldn’t stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesn’t change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mc’s personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why it’s so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.

LV 6

MegaMacho

Dude, the toxicity of this novel is unparalleled. why the heck did you have to do that way? It had potential but now is just a waste. I hope you reboot this novel in a better way, bye.

LV 3

_UwU_OWO_UwU_

I really liked the story and how things were progressing, there also aren't many stories like this out there, so it's really a shame that this got dropped(i assume it was dropped cos its been like a year sine the last update).

LV 12

mluna9116

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LV 4

ShadowFlux1909

This story is trash the grammar is bad, it took 4 chapters for the story to even start, the dialog is dumb, the system is stupid the mc is trash overall the story and characters are trash wouldn't read waste of time..

I don’t want you to drop this story. Pls, don’t. Everything is ok, you have some mistakes, but as far as I’ve seen, you listen to your auditory and correct them. With the snake choice, I don’t see any problems. It’s your right to choose it anyway.

LV 4

XlIl

I'm waiting for the continuation please I just go to this page to see if you post Please don't let this novel You are fresh and the history is perfect Pls

LV 14

Sage_Honos

Please comeback soon! im really enjoying this series! cant wait until he enters his ***** stage and gets the armour from the cover art. right now all i can imagining is kirito / sephiroth look. while the higher art had helped my imagination run wild. this is a beautiful and unique story. worth the reward and votes!

LV 4

PAB2377

i don't know what to write. hope you're having a nice day. wishing you all the best. keep writing good novels like this which makes our day.