Rebirth in Mushoku Tensei

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Zenkaiboost

Yeah! Characters are lacking! Girls fall in love like they are hypnotized. Bland parents compare to originals! Not sure about mc as i don't see him struggling against 7 powers! Fighting scenes will be like " i am holding back to make enemies underestimate me or i can't use these powers bs crap". MT world is filled with adventures and struggle against omniscient god. I like op characters and fights that end with one puch! I just dont like those novels where author gives mc too much op powers and doing a crap job at using them. Mc thnking like i am Rudeus and his wives will be mine is a major no no.plot changes you twerp. A child using haki is rare but not impossible but ordinary otaku with zero to no will power using king haki? Possible due to plot. Might Duy train his whole life to open eight gates! Might Guy trains his ass off to become strongest taijutsu user. Rock lee trains months to open first gate. A child with not even 5 years old body open the first gate? In one day?Laughable. Characters and their growth needs a lot of work. As of now? This is just another fanfic for wish fillfulling. I like MT. I also want MT fanfics! Your idea is fresh! Don't waste it . Sorry, if it is being rude! Just an honest opinion.

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Stronda

Please don't................ drop........................ this.............................. Fan-Fic...................... ............................................. .................................. ........................................ ...............................

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GGMissFortune

1/5 for picking lame powers......................................................... ......................... ...if you wanted lame powers for the MC then you shouldn't have given him a choice in the first place.... it just makes him look stupid. If MC just wants a nice peaceful and safe life he should have just chosen Saitama powers...

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LiroyJeckins

I didnt even read this yet, but dude... it is fucking MUSHOKU TENSEI!!! JUST DO IT AND DONT DROP IT. Please, the original is an amazing work of art, make the fanfic be even more dazzling.

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FrostFire

Read first chapter -> saw bad grammar -> not gonna continue. Bad grammar = Bad novel Go to school and study English first before you write a novel. Go read some real novels as reference for your grammar (please don't read shakespeare).

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Cubbe

Okay so I have read only 6ch. but this is just too ridiculous for my taste. I like the idea behind how the mc gets his rebirth and love the original story. BUT, I can't help but feel that my expectations were, well not for nothing, but still quite let down. The mc makes choices that NO ONE would do and the people around the mc are made to be more stupid than a headless chicken after coming out of a washing machine. FOR THE AUTHOR: I really like your idea behind the story but please, PLEASE focus more on the characters and common logic and not in trying to make everything go flash bing BOOOM

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1LiQiYe1

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SongOfSilenceee

What is there to say, it is very exaggerated the author dropped, there is almost nothing good to say, other than, improve. .. . .... ... ..

LV 7

Melshan

Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎

LV 13

LNreader9999

Good story. Hope to see more good plot twists. Hope you don't drop this as it is the only fanfic and the powers Rudy has are cool and complementary.

LV 4

SleepyGuy12

Can you please continue updating this story? It is literally the longest mushoku tensei fic and the only one who could do decent SI story for this setting.

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gman12567

Its a good novel so far and as long as the author drops it, it'll probably do well and I hope he does changes some stuff from the original like maybe he gets with more girls than the original 3 (Not asking for super harem but I think it would be better if there were more girls than the original 3 it'd feel bland to just do the same thing) ALSO I REALLY hope you change how the sisters end up in the orginal SPOLIERS one sister ends up getting with a character that is multple hundreds of years old and already had a family and kid and he acts as a father figure for when the mc and her were young like she was less than ten when she met him and fell in love with him AND the other sister ended up getting with the MC's kid when he was like 8 and she was like 26 and they were having *** and everything I have no problem with ****** in stories but it feels wrong with it being the MC's kid

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Kid_Speech

Damnn nice Idea there hehe i have already read that mashuku tensei the plot is so twisted to think you will make it into fanfic hahahahaha!!!

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Kaseo001

Please........... don't drop this novel..... i like................. your....novels....................XD........................................................

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GwapoJer

Please don't................ drop........................ this.............................. Fan-Fic...................... ............................................. .................................. ........................................ ...............................

LV 5

IOnlyEatDinner

A good read, one of the decent fanfics in the site right now. The way the elements from other series are integrated is very good and doesn't feel too out of place. Though it's still far from perfect and have a lot more room for improvements. One of them is the character interactions that looks unnatural or stiff at times which makes it cringey, although that can be dealt with. Another problem is the minor grammar and spelling errors which could easily be fixed with proper editing as it is not that bad, you can still understand what the author means.

LV 3

l_Yahiko_l

hello good author I would like to ask you to please continue the story this 10/10 your FanFiction and for what the anime came out will have more reviews and a lot of support so please do not abandon it.

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Slowbat

It's harem what else do i have to say? 01001000 01000001 01010010 01000101 01001101 00100000 01001001 01010011 00100000 01010011 01001000 01001001 01010100 00101100 00100000 01001000 01000001 01010010 01000101 01001101 00100000 01001001 01010011 00100000 01010011 01001000 01001001 01010100 00101100 00100000 01001000 01000001 01010010 01000101 01001101 00100000 01001001 01010011 00100000 01010011 01001000 01001001 01010100 00101100 00100000 01001000 01000001 01010010 01000101 01001101 00100000 01001001 01010011 00100000 01010011 01001000 01001001 01010100 00100001 0001010

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Hekyo

Fuck you, the vary premise of you novel betrays the original intent of the novel "mushoku tensei". The whole point of that novel was the mc's attempt to escape his own depravity and you have turned it into another wish fulfillment novel where the mc is an otaku.