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Plz update I need more it’s an awesome writing 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
Dude u ok? ?? U havent uploaded anything for a while. Other than great fic with potential, no grammar mistkaes iirc.
Good quality of the story. Great progress in the flow, and great details. I wish I have more. Better be more story, my friend. having a blast reading it.
Are you still doing something with this? I haven’t started yet but I know it going to be fire that’s why Im waiting to binge read it ya know more chaps less wait
I'm gonna rate this 5 stars just because you added All Of Us Are Dead. I'm gonna rate this 5 stars just because you added All Of Us Are Dead. I'm gonna rate this 5 stars just because you added All Of Us Are Dead. Important things need to be said 3 times.
Aswome..................................................................................................................................................
I used to read HOTD stories when I was younger so finding this one was a serious treat. The main character is likeable and romance between the characters (though early) is fluid. Looking forwards to reading more of this!
hey author, can you post this fanfic on scribble hub? with this new webnovel policy to force you to use the app i will have to stop reading here
I like this novel, it's not just a story about mc who is op. But also how mc form an organization/force to fight his enemy. 🥰❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Great story so far ,been immediately hooked up, 👌 just hoping for updates and more daily releases..........................................
The beginning was really enjoyable to read, and it doesn't just get insanely strong out of nowhere, it grows to an acceptable extent, reasonable decisions that make sense. I'm really looking forward to this work❤️
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all though there is only 4 chapter but I really like this story. ...................................................................................................
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I like everything so far. Its good start and i love the humor and comedy scene in it. Never thought of such a thing can be OP really. This story got potential. I just really hope that you will not abandon the other story. Your writing style are dope. Wish the best for you n your stories.
i like this author's other story ,and it's looking good so far but can't say much about it ...this review is for the encouragement of Author will edit again after reading more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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A bit biased since I've read his other fic but I really like Mr. ashes writing so even though its only two chaps right now I'll give it a 5. Read his 1st fic if you haven't its really good
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Great start so far. Decent writing and foundation for the story. Based on the author other stories, i bet this one will be as good or even better. My only wish is for more ubdates or possibly daily releases.
Great start I pray it is as good as Parker fanfiction so good on you Yea yea yup yea yea I yea yea yup yup yea yea yup yea I agree yea yea yup yea yea I agree yea yea yup yea
I love your spiderman ff and I also love HOTD so I have high expectations for this. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Brothers cunado hay otro capítulo tu historia es muy buena creo que uno de mis favoritos pero entiendo si te demoras es difícil hacer este tipo de historia
Plz update I need more it’s an awesome writing 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
Dude u ok? ?? U havent uploaded anything for a while. Other than great fic with potential, no grammar mistkaes iirc.
Good quality of the story. Great progress in the flow, and great details. I wish I have more. Better be more story, my friend. having a blast reading it.
Are you still doing something with this? I haven’t started yet but I know it going to be fire that’s why Im waiting to binge read it ya know more chaps less wait
I'm gonna rate this 5 stars just because you added All Of Us Are Dead. I'm gonna rate this 5 stars just because you added All Of Us Are Dead. I'm gonna rate this 5 stars just because you added All Of Us Are Dead. Important things need to be said 3 times.
Aswome..................................................................................................................................................
I used to read HOTD stories when I was younger so finding this one was a serious treat. The main character is likeable and romance between the characters (though early) is fluid. Looking forwards to reading more of this!
hey author, can you post this fanfic on scribble hub? with this new webnovel policy to force you to use the app i will have to stop reading here
I like this novel, it's not just a story about mc who is op. But also how mc form an organization/force to fight his enemy. 🥰❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Great story so far ,been immediately hooked up, 👌 just hoping for updates and more daily releases..........................................
The beginning was really enjoyable to read, and it doesn't just get insanely strong out of nowhere, it grows to an acceptable extent, reasonable decisions that make sense. I'm really looking forward to this work❤️
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all though there is only 4 chapter but I really like this story. ...................................................................................................
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I like everything so far. Its good start and i love the humor and comedy scene in it. Never thought of such a thing can be OP really. This story got potential. I just really hope that you will not abandon the other story. Your writing style are dope. Wish the best for you n your stories.
i like this author's other story ,and it's looking good so far but can't say much about it ...this review is for the encouragement of Author will edit again after reading more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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A bit biased since I've read his other fic but I really like Mr. ashes writing so even though its only two chaps right now I'll give it a 5. Read his 1st fic if you haven't its really good
Reveal Spoiler Great start so far. Decent writing and foundation for the story. Based on the author other stories, i bet this one will be as good or even better. My only wish is for more ubdates or possibly daily releases.
Great start I pray it is as good as Parker fanfiction so good on you Yea yea yup yea yea I yea yea yup yup yea yea yup yea I agree yea yea yup yea yea I agree yea yea yup yea
I love your spiderman ff and I also love HOTD so I have high expectations for this. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Brothers cunado hay otro capítulo tu historia es muy buena creo que uno de mis favoritos pero entiendo si te demoras es difícil hacer este tipo de historia