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Wow, author! You did well writing this story! I learned alot about these gods! The story had a lot of information, but there were primarily needed for us, readers, to progress in the story. Kudos for the author! [img=recommend]
Great book! Well done author. I will keep in library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long. Hehehehe. I had a great time reading this. If you're thinking of reading it, go ahead. You will not regret it at all.
7 chapters down and all I keep saying is more! More! More! Lol. I loved it. Not too cheeky, not too soggy. It’s just right. You did a very good job with the characters development and the story background. I felt drawn to their world and it was like I could feel and relate with them. Great job, author.👍👍
OMG! I'm in love with your writing style! The way you described the background, it's really interesting and praise-worthy! I like it a lot! Keep it up, author.
Author's review: Little to no grammatical errors. Mix of different mythologies, kudos if you can guess them. Strange mix of romance, still to come and jaw breaking writing. The author knows how to mix things up and give us what we are not expecting. Nuala's commentary: Hi everyone, my name is Nuala and I'm so glad you're all reading my story. Please continue to enjoy and comment. I helps give me the strength I need to fight the battle for all humans.
Magnificent cover page! Interesting story. You put your heart in your story and the reader can feel it from the beginning. You don't struggle with grammar, tenses, or style, so that's your advantage of most of the authors on WB, so use it well!
Well done! There is no serious critique here. I mean the usual grammar mistakes and that's about it. Great job using 3rd person for the intro and switching to first. Really sets the tone of the story and portrays a beautiful world before letting the reader connect closely with the MC. I definitely see an interesting story premise here that has a lot of potential. My only knock is how a minor god of calamity knew about her, but the others did not. But I guess that would be explained later ;). Amazing story, wish you the best author!
I love the writing style of this book. It's detail and the bg info is well-introduced. The problem in historical or mythological stories often times lie in the information. It's either lacking or too much. But, author did a nice job in balancing between the history and retelling the story itself so it doesn't look like an info dump. My only issue is the long paragraph, but ya'll only need to take the time in reading it. Don't worry, the writing is easy to understand! It's not too heavy! ^^ The book is interesting in its own way. Author does hv special way of narrating. All in all, you've got a good work, Author! Keep up the good job <3
First of all, let me just say I don't read much novels of this genre, so my review may not be fully accurate. Overall, this novel is a fantastic read. I found little to none grammatical errors, the plot development was good, characters were well-made (Nuala especially), and the world background was good. Good job, author.
It's a very interesting fantasy novel with great world background and character design. The author is very creative with the gods' background stories and the flow kept me engaged all the time. The protagonist is quite cheeky, I like it. I also enjoyed the story development - good pacing. Not many chapters yet, but the story is intriguing and I like where it's going. More exciting adventures are awaiting Arthy and Nuala. I can feel it - it's gonna be good. Well done and looking forward to reading more! PS - I love Arthy's hair colour! It's so cool!
Wow! I really, really love your writing style and descriptions. I was really amazed at the character design of the gods and goddess in the first chapter. Some of their personalities were really unique and refreshing, like the fire goddess for example. As for the writing itself, wonderfully done! It's very beautiful, smooth, and easy to read with no major grammatical errors. Personally, I'm not really one for intense world building and description right off the bat, but I think you did well in not info dumping as much as other novels do in the first few chapters which is amazing! Overall, it was highly enjoyable. I really recommend it to anyone looking to read a high quality book! Awesome job author!!!
I love what I have read so far! Here's hoping the author keeps churning out this cracking yarn! This fictional world the author has created is truly something to behold and my words can't do it enough justice. The sheer scope and detail the author has gone into creating the world, characters and the numerous gods is amazing. Added to all this is the intriguing dilemma the protagonist is faced with. As a chosen one of humanity, she must discover why the gods have suddenly forsaken her world. The prose in this story flows flawlessly and is a pleasure to read, and each chapter develops the story nicely. I can't fault this one so far. Looking forward to seeing it develop further.
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Narration was beautiful it really gives you're imagination a privilege to see throught the author's mind and the mythology depicted in story really gives a strong vibe that makes you feel connected overall a must read novel good job looking forward to another chapter.
Beautiful! The language here is great. This is easily one of the best written works I've seen on this website. Give it a try, and see for yourself what I mean!
I love the plot, I really do. I like how you describe each of the Gods and Goddesses traits, what do they do etc. The chapters were long so kudos to you Author for the effort. But There were all very long paragraphs which I recommend to you that you should cut them in half to make it much more better to read but overall it's good, deserves a five star. I'll definitely add this to my library!
A story about a girl who is prophesied to save humankind from the gods who turn their backs on them. Even though the true cause of the abandonment is still unknown now, it's engaging enough to keep us reading Aside from minor errors in using the tenses and words, everything else is good. The author vividly portrays the situation. The way the people live reminds me of the tribes in Africa as I've seen on TV Keep up the good work!
It feels like I was in different world when I read this story. The author beautifully describe the background, it feels like watching a movie. Keep it up the good work![img=recommend]
I like the writing style it's not something I would expect. There are only two chapters so far so I am not sure what to put for the updating stability. So far I am loving the story and the world background!
This is a nice historical story. The synopsis is very interesting so it attracted my eyes. I came to take a look but I lost in it because of the plot. Well done writer! Keep it up! I appreciate you!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE This novel has good world-building and concept! Good execution of the genre! With more fluidity, this novel will become superb! Nice grammar and has large amounts of vocabulary! I am jealous here! hehe ADVICE Fluidity, Sometimes it was stuttery when being read. I advise you to read the sentences aloud and see if to it if you are stuttering yourself. Well, I have the same problem! Hehe, Improve more and your future is assured!
The background of the story is interesting. I am writing this review at the beginning but I can tell that the story will be quite interesting. If you love historical myth, then this novel is for you.
it feels like a more African Greek Judeo-Christian mythological story. if you have any interest in any form of ancient Greek story I recommend this.
It's only a beggining but a very promising one. You have very descriptive writing style and rich language. I like how in the narration you paid attention to every detail. I really hope this book will only get more popular as you update new chapters
I love the way that you setup the story with the first chapter describing the background of the town, as well as the nature of the God's the people worship. Overall, great writing style, and excellent world building.
Wow, author! You did well writing this story! I learned alot about these gods! The story had a lot of information, but there were primarily needed for us, readers, to progress in the story. Kudos for the author! [img=recommend]
Great book! Well done author. I will keep in library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long. Hehehehe. I had a great time reading this. If you're thinking of reading it, go ahead. You will not regret it at all.
7 chapters down and all I keep saying is more! More! More! Lol. I loved it. Not too cheeky, not too soggy. It’s just right. You did a very good job with the characters development and the story background. I felt drawn to their world and it was like I could feel and relate with them. Great job, author.👍👍
OMG! I'm in love with your writing style! The way you described the background, it's really interesting and praise-worthy! I like it a lot! Keep it up, author.
Author's review: Little to no grammatical errors. Mix of different mythologies, kudos if you can guess them. Strange mix of romance, still to come and jaw breaking writing. The author knows how to mix things up and give us what we are not expecting. Nuala's commentary: Hi everyone, my name is Nuala and I'm so glad you're all reading my story. Please continue to enjoy and comment. I helps give me the strength I need to fight the battle for all humans.
Magnificent cover page! Interesting story. You put your heart in your story and the reader can feel it from the beginning. You don't struggle with grammar, tenses, or style, so that's your advantage of most of the authors on WB, so use it well!
Well done! There is no serious critique here. I mean the usual grammar mistakes and that's about it. Great job using 3rd person for the intro and switching to first. Really sets the tone of the story and portrays a beautiful world before letting the reader connect closely with the MC. I definitely see an interesting story premise here that has a lot of potential. My only knock is how a minor god of calamity knew about her, but the others did not. But I guess that would be explained later ;). Amazing story, wish you the best author!
I love the writing style of this book. It's detail and the bg info is well-introduced. The problem in historical or mythological stories often times lie in the information. It's either lacking or too much. But, author did a nice job in balancing between the history and retelling the story itself so it doesn't look like an info dump. My only issue is the long paragraph, but ya'll only need to take the time in reading it. Don't worry, the writing is easy to understand! It's not too heavy! ^^ The book is interesting in its own way. Author does hv special way of narrating. All in all, you've got a good work, Author! Keep up the good job <3
First of all, let me just say I don't read much novels of this genre, so my review may not be fully accurate. Overall, this novel is a fantastic read. I found little to none grammatical errors, the plot development was good, characters were well-made (Nuala especially), and the world background was good. Good job, author.
It's a very interesting fantasy novel with great world background and character design. The author is very creative with the gods' background stories and the flow kept me engaged all the time. The protagonist is quite cheeky, I like it. I also enjoyed the story development - good pacing. Not many chapters yet, but the story is intriguing and I like where it's going. More exciting adventures are awaiting Arthy and Nuala. I can feel it - it's gonna be good. Well done and looking forward to reading more! PS - I love Arthy's hair colour! It's so cool!
Wow! I really, really love your writing style and descriptions. I was really amazed at the character design of the gods and goddess in the first chapter. Some of their personalities were really unique and refreshing, like the fire goddess for example. As for the writing itself, wonderfully done! It's very beautiful, smooth, and easy to read with no major grammatical errors. Personally, I'm not really one for intense world building and description right off the bat, but I think you did well in not info dumping as much as other novels do in the first few chapters which is amazing! Overall, it was highly enjoyable. I really recommend it to anyone looking to read a high quality book! Awesome job author!!!
I love what I have read so far! Here's hoping the author keeps churning out this cracking yarn! This fictional world the author has created is truly something to behold and my words can't do it enough justice. The sheer scope and detail the author has gone into creating the world, characters and the numerous gods is amazing. Added to all this is the intriguing dilemma the protagonist is faced with. As a chosen one of humanity, she must discover why the gods have suddenly forsaken her world. The prose in this story flows flawlessly and is a pleasure to read, and each chapter develops the story nicely. I can't fault this one so far. Looking forward to seeing it develop further.
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Narration was beautiful it really gives you're imagination a privilege to see throught the author's mind and the mythology depicted in story really gives a strong vibe that makes you feel connected overall a must read novel good job looking forward to another chapter.
Beautiful! The language here is great. This is easily one of the best written works I've seen on this website. Give it a try, and see for yourself what I mean!
I love the plot, I really do. I like how you describe each of the Gods and Goddesses traits, what do they do etc. The chapters were long so kudos to you Author for the effort. But There were all very long paragraphs which I recommend to you that you should cut them in half to make it much more better to read but overall it's good, deserves a five star. I'll definitely add this to my library!
A story about a girl who is prophesied to save humankind from the gods who turn their backs on them. Even though the true cause of the abandonment is still unknown now, it's engaging enough to keep us reading Aside from minor errors in using the tenses and words, everything else is good. The author vividly portrays the situation. The way the people live reminds me of the tribes in Africa as I've seen on TV Keep up the good work!
It feels like I was in different world when I read this story. The author beautifully describe the background, it feels like watching a movie. Keep it up the good work![img=recommend]
I like the writing style it's not something I would expect. There are only two chapters so far so I am not sure what to put for the updating stability. So far I am loving the story and the world background!
This is a nice historical story. The synopsis is very interesting so it attracted my eyes. I came to take a look but I lost in it because of the plot. Well done writer! Keep it up! I appreciate you!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE This novel has good world-building and concept! Good execution of the genre! With more fluidity, this novel will become superb! Nice grammar and has large amounts of vocabulary! I am jealous here! hehe ADVICE Fluidity, Sometimes it was stuttery when being read. I advise you to read the sentences aloud and see if to it if you are stuttering yourself. Well, I have the same problem! Hehe, Improve more and your future is assured!
The background of the story is interesting. I am writing this review at the beginning but I can tell that the story will be quite interesting. If you love historical myth, then this novel is for you.
it feels like a more African Greek Judeo-Christian mythological story. if you have any interest in any form of ancient Greek story I recommend this.
It's only a beggining but a very promising one. You have very descriptive writing style and rich language. I like how in the narration you paid attention to every detail. I really hope this book will only get more popular as you update new chapters
I love the way that you setup the story with the first chapter describing the background of the town, as well as the nature of the God's the people worship. Overall, great writing style, and excellent world building.