The Tyrant Gentle Husband

To whomever who reads this, from what you can gather from all the reviews, two things stand out. Writing quality and plot. Writing Quality: 4* Well, can't deny it. The writing quality leaves a lot to be desired. The grammar needs a lot of work, the way the POV changes from one to another abruptly leaves a lot to be desired, and the chunks of text in a paragraph are just a few things wrong with it. So why the 4* you may ask? Because you can SEE the improvement. English can't be the Author's main language and the amount of effort Author has put in to pour her heart out is admirable. Author soldiers on, has improved and I am sure, will continue to improve. For that perseverance in the face of adversity, Author gets the stars. Stability of Updates (5*): Constant, steady and Author tells if will be late. Story Development (4*): It can be abrupt at times and plot twists are dropped here and there which makes your head spin sometimes. The smooth transition isn't there but it's not too bad so not lower than 4*. Reading pleasure is disrupted a bit. Character Design (5*): Okay, so some of the things the ML does is a bit weird like suddenly being hopelessly in love with the FL after being in a coma while in the original, he was hopelessly in love with the moonlight. It would have been easier to accept if it was also shown how the ML gets disillusioned by the moonlight during his coma and not just have it one-sided "I now see how good my wife is" because let's face it. Just because another person is good doesn't mean you stop loving the one you have been loving for years. Then, worse, just because the moonlight wasn't a virgin, he disdains her? Was his 'love' so shallow? Urgh. And the FL. Don't get me started on this Saint. Despite how she was brought up, she could raise her twin brothers at the tender age of 8? Be aware at 3 that her parents don't love her but instead of being depressed, she grows more mature? And still be hopelessly in love with her husband who was cold and neglected her for 3 years? The thing is, no matter how much I disdain these characters, the fact that I can dislike them means Author has done a good job in creating them. So, 5*. World Background: by default, 5* because there's nothing really wrong with it. It's based on the current world so can't put low stars because of it now, can I? So at the end of the day, if you can switch off your mind from the language and get used to the weird, mixing way without smooth transition of one arc to another, you'll enjoy this novel. The idea of the story itself is good. All the best, Author.

This is for through chapter 15. Maybe it gets better later but with the writing and holes I could not read more. This is too bad since the plot sounded interesting. (I had to read a review to figure out what the story was about since the summary didn’t explain much of anything.) The writing was difficult to follow in parts. There are many problems with grammar which does improves a slightly as it goes on. Often times a sentence will just rephrase what the sentence prior to it said. Often the story contradicts itself. Examples ~ mc is sick and unable to wake for 3 days but the maid confused how mc forgot her husband is in a coma for ALMOST three days. ~ in ML’s POV mc has been taking care of him for quite some time already and later she apologizes for being gone because she was sick ~ it’s said repeatedly mc doesn’t like to be a leader and the original Elena wanted a normal life. However, she manages and owns many successful restaurants and businesses. She is even the secretive CEO of the top entertainment industry called Frost Entertainment, that she started herself. ~ before coma, ML never looked at MC, avoided her, and even turns around the moment their paths cross. He calls her ugly then turns around and claims she is beautiful and lamenting over never seeing her beautiful smile & ect again even though they had basically no interaction before he is in a coma. Thing I just didn’t like ML instantly recognizes how he wronged MC and loves her completely. It went from “She is ugly and only after my money to “she is gorgeous, gentle, and kind” in just paragraphs apart. Also he suddenly sees all the shortcomings and “evilness” of the lady her was madly and irrational in love with that he was going to leave MC for.

The premise sounded interesting so i tried reading it, but from the get-go the author referred to the female lead as a “he,” if that gives any idea of what the grammar is like in this book. There are small mistakes that make it seem like the chapters were written and posted without another read-through, so sometimes there are two consecutive punctuations (like a sentence is ended with a period and a comma) or there are commas or slashes in the middle of words (ex. I,s—> Is, or co/ame —> came). The characters also seem kind of shallow and when the ML is in a coma and the FL doesn’t leave him, he just happens to suddenly fall in love with her. The relationship needed more development than just him listening to her when he was in a coma and suddenly “falling in love” with her. Also, the point of view randomly switches from first person (FL’s POV) to something like third person omniscient (to see ML’s POV) for two paragaphs and then back, which is kind of confusing and it would have felt much less random if it was just kept in third person the whole time. Also the tenses in this constantly change. ....Saying all that, I think this story would have been more readable if the author had a decent editor/proofreader and I wish the author/translator good luck (bc I’m not sure whether this is an original or translated). While I probably was pretty blunt in my opinion of the grammar/lack of story and character development, this story is still better than some other ones I’ve seen out there.

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