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the little cat form bailmore (remaking)
4.69 (13 ratings)
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This is the story of a cat who was born ill and was killed by its mother being too weak to exist. The life of Mau was short, but now with the opportunity to live again in a world of fantasy and advanced technology, he is determined not only to live but to never be weak again.
I'm working on more stuff so I'll be posting like 3 chapters of this every week
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The vivid world-building draws readers into a vibrant forest teeming with magical creatures and tiers of escalating challenges. Mau's journey from a weak black cat to a formidable shadow panther is a testament to his resilience and determination. The fusion of different races and magical elements lends depth to the story's fantasy world. Mau's internal monologues offer a glimpse into his developing consciousness, showcasing his confusion, curiosity, and growth. The enigmatic observer's intentions add an air of intrigue, keeping readers engaged with the unfolding mystery. While the story presents a unique premise and engaging world, the transition between events occasionally feels abrupt. A deeper exploration of character motivations and emotions could enhance the overall impact of the narrative. Additionally, the writing style could benefit from refinement, as some passages appear disjointed or could be clarified for smoother comprehension. "Whiskers of Destiny" is an imaginative and promising work that introduces readers to a captivating blend of fantasy, rebirth, and the struggle for survival. As Mau navigates his newfound existence and faces formidable challenges, readers are left eager to accompany him on his journey of self-discovery and growth.
Interesting read, I’m quite into the story, from what I can gather it has potential, and I never read a story like this so I expect a lot of creativity!
It will be too early to judge a new story with this less chapter but still I would to like to share what I observed from these two chapters.In these two chapters I didn't find any grammar mistakes ,for now world development is still going on so we can't review that but still story telling is really good ,for me this novel's story is unique so I am goona give it a try
If it's a story about cats, then I will definitely support it. Keep working on the book and release more chapters. I will wait for more updates.
Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out but need more depth and I'm sure they'll get more in the future as the story progresses. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!
These kinds of stories are quite interesting types. the plot of this book is unique as it shows a growth in character building. The world setting and the theme quite match as it has an interesting plot. Not to mention, the writing style has made it quite easy for us to flow. Keep it up, author!
The premise of the story is really interesting and different from most reincarnation stories I've read. The plot has a lot of potential. The daily updates is quite a feat.
Well, this is different... but different good and unique. I have never read anything like this before but it managed to pipe my interest. Keeping this in my library to see how the story unfolds. In short, i like it!
Very interesting story plot. Characters development design is very interesting. I’m exciting reading this book wondering what will happens next. Will recommend to everyone. Author keep up your good work. You are good 👍😊
Honestly, I've never read a story with a cat as the mc. It was a first for me and I was truly intrigued how the author will unfold his story. The writing is smooth and easy to visualize, although the narration is shifting from 1st pov to 3rd pov, it's still a good read^^ Keep up the updates coming, author!🙌🙌
The story is still in early development stage but it is very interesting and intriguing! The plot definitely has the potential. Keep up your good work!
This is an interesting concept, but I've never seen a cat story before. okay, so hes like... half human half cat? or full cat? also this reminds me (the beginning) of the ugly duckling lol.
This is kinda new to me i never read the story of a cat but it is also good well balanced and interesting plot you got there the grammars are easy to follow and well described i will look forward for the next chapters