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Great story sadly seems like it was dropped before it could get any where
I need more! it's a good story with a slow pace where gg doesn't get stupidly strong through the system in a few days. well done interactions between characters. your improvements to the dxd magic system are also quite good. I hope you don't quit
So I am around chapter 22, and I have seen that the author loves info dump too much, like I get it if he has power-up or something but ever chapter is 90% info dump. The MC also has 27 thought processes and sometimes is still "slow". The MCs mother is also a bit crazy so their relationship feels like stolkholme syndrome. So here is a summary of what happened till now: 1. MC reincarnated and is suffering in elementary school in Kuoh 2. MC spots his mother and sister doing magic -> activates the achievement system -> discovers they are witches 3. MC realizes his eccentric mom is dangerous but still asks to be taught, his sister takes pity and starts teaching him magic + world background. 4. MC meets Akeno and to "socialize" has to play with her and through her unnatural physical strength, discovers she may be supernatural. 5. Learns martial arts from his sister as well + uses thought partitioning to become the best chess player. 6. Guesses who Baraquil is, by his name in Christianity, and has a "Playdate" at Akeno's house 7. Unlocks discount auto cultivation and supernatural seeing "Pure eye". 8. Goes to Kyoto for a tour with family (father is forgotten entirely), sees Yokai roaming Kyoto (he knows about Yokai Faction) and all 27 thought processes could not figure out that he sees them due to "Pure eye". 9. Stays with a loli baba fox girl who is sweet and is a friend of mothers which is surprising considering how she acts
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Very well written with quite the vocabulary being used. On the other hand.... Exposition for days, and days, and days. Toooooo much exposition. Looking forward to what comes next!
Can you save Issei from the pervert old man in the park and his own grandfather, who corrupted him? Issei used to be an innocent kid, until those two corrupted him. Seriously, the corruption scene is so cringe-worthy, especially in Issei's grandfather's case. While I don't hate perverts and sometimes find them funny, corrupting your own grandson like that is just horrible.
its an interesting concept and seems promising though the writing style and world background are ugh... not bad perse its just very long and tedious we have gotten a single power explained 8 times in the first 20ish chapters an entire chapter dedicated to the fact mc needs 25%less sleep the mc constantly goes of on monologues that give info dumps sometimes multiple times per chapter 80% of the first 20 chapters is info long story short its interesting but feels like mandatory reading material the author needs to work on his pacing and consider what needs to be explained and what doesn't
Great Fanfic in my humble opinion. 1. MC doesn't know Dxd but know other Anime 2. His memories regarding DxD were erased by entity who isekaied him 3. Because his mind acceleration there's so many words in one paragraph. But i like it, thank you
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the story is good, but my only turn-off here is the amount of info dumps included on the story
Okay, I'm going to give my honest opinion of the story up to the 19 chapters it has so far. It's good; I'm not going to deny it. I like the relationships and ties that have been maintained so far with the family, although I’m much more into stories that focus on the protagonist's point of view and all that. The secondary characters in this story, to me, feel like they have life. I would say that is the most notable positive point, in my opinion. As for the negative... the walls of text! So much information passes in such a short time in the first chapters that it becomes indigestible most of the time. There were times when I skipped parts simply because I found the information being explained to me irrelevant. Beyond that, I can't think of anything concrete to complain about. Without making this too long, I will continue this story, and maybe if they don’t abandon it and get to chapter 60 or 70, I will write another review.
I didn’t think this would be so good, I was use to shity dxd fanfic the people writing with their third leg so this was fresh air and I hope you don’t make him overpowered in beginning
It's not for me. The story isn't bad, and I don't have any problems with the grammar or anything, but the massive info dumps in every chapter for the last eleven chapters were killing me. I know you said it would be scientific because he uses human magic, but he hasn't even started learning it, and the wall of text is tiring. As I said, it's not for me, but I wish you luck with the story.
Probably the most comprehensive and well put together dxd story on here it honestly just needs more chapters to truly shine on. Long chapters with extensive information on how everything works without it feeling like an info dump. Really good story so far
What about romance? Is it going to be a harem, or does the author have the one and the true waifu? I’m genuinely curious to see how the author will handle the MC’s love story/stories.
A question, why not go the female issei route, train him to be loyal and let his perversion continue to be there to give him some motivation and turn him into a semi yandere, what do you think?
Why does everyone dislike the MC’s mother so much? Unlike other fanfics, the author here has actually made an effort to give even the supporting characters some emotional depth. Sure, the MC’s mom is annoying, headstrong, and doesn’t help him (oh no, how terrible!), but at least she’s well-developed as a character. That’s a lot better than what you usually see in fanfics, where the MC's family is just background noise and you don’t really care about them. But in this fanfic, even the MC’s mother stirs up emotions, even if it’s just irritation. And it’s only the first 14 chapters... yet people are already throwing around these ratings. All in all I really appreciate how this fanfic manages to make me feel such a wide range of emotions. That’s rare, and honestly, really awesome! Highly recommend.
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The first few chapters offer a nice, calm slice-of-life and character development. So far, I'm really enjoying it. I hope the author will keep up the same level of quality.
The title is a missed opportunity not gonna lie, but early impressions have been good.
A question, will you save Akeno and Shuri from the Himejima family because if so, it would help you to ally yourself with the fallen angels and obtain training with Akeno and make her become stronger than her canon version?
Where are the other reviews coming from? I’ve read a lot of DxD fanfics, and I know that 3 or 3.5 stars are given to something on the level of (DxD Fated), but this fanfic is clearly a step above that… Honestly, I don’t get what the issue is...
Great fanfic. Some people say the author is repetitive or drags things out, but I think he has done an excellent job with the character development, the MC's abilities, and the structure of the DxD world. I really like how the story is progressing, and I hope the author keeps up this level of quality!
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Hey everyone, Wakamezake here! Attention! Disclaimer! 1) This story steers clear of unnecessary grimdark themes. If you’re into reading about extreme suffering and misery, this isn't for you. Seriously, don’t bother starting it. 2) System elements are minimal and only used to explain the MC’s power and his “Hero's journey” rewards. 3) This is a DxD fanfic, not some serious multiverse thing. Expect just a few characters from other worlds to fill in the plot gaps. 4) Heads up — there’s going to be a lot of scientific terminology, since the MC’s main power is the “human magic” of the DxD, which works based on science. 5) The rewards from achievements let me get creative with the MC’s “Build”. If you’ve got any ideas, feel free to suggest them — either here or in the comments under the chapter. Enjoy!
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Great story sadly seems like it was dropped before it could get any where
I need more! it's a good story with a slow pace where gg doesn't get stupidly strong through the system in a few days. well done interactions between characters. your improvements to the dxd magic system are also quite good. I hope you don't quit
So I am around chapter 22, and I have seen that the author loves info dump too much, like I get it if he has power-up or something but ever chapter is 90% info dump. The MC also has 27 thought processes and sometimes is still "slow". The MCs mother is also a bit crazy so their relationship feels like stolkholme syndrome. So here is a summary of what happened till now: 1. MC reincarnated and is suffering in elementary school in Kuoh 2. MC spots his mother and sister doing magic -> activates the achievement system -> discovers they are witches 3. MC realizes his eccentric mom is dangerous but still asks to be taught, his sister takes pity and starts teaching him magic + world background. 4. MC meets Akeno and to "socialize" has to play with her and through her unnatural physical strength, discovers she may be supernatural. 5. Learns martial arts from his sister as well + uses thought partitioning to become the best chess player. 6. Guesses who Baraquil is, by his name in Christianity, and has a "Playdate" at Akeno's house 7. Unlocks discount auto cultivation and supernatural seeing "Pure eye". 8. Goes to Kyoto for a tour with family (father is forgotten entirely), sees Yokai roaming Kyoto (he knows about Yokai Faction) and all 27 thought processes could not figure out that he sees them due to "Pure eye". 9. Stays with a loli baba fox girl who is sweet and is a friend of mothers which is surprising considering how she acts
Reveal Spoiler Very well written with quite the vocabulary being used. On the other hand.... Exposition for days, and days, and days. Toooooo much exposition. Looking forward to what comes next!
Can you save Issei from the pervert old man in the park and his own grandfather, who corrupted him? Issei used to be an innocent kid, until those two corrupted him. Seriously, the corruption scene is so cringe-worthy, especially in Issei's grandfather's case. While I don't hate perverts and sometimes find them funny, corrupting your own grandson like that is just horrible.
its an interesting concept and seems promising though the writing style and world background are ugh... not bad perse its just very long and tedious we have gotten a single power explained 8 times in the first 20ish chapters an entire chapter dedicated to the fact mc needs 25%less sleep the mc constantly goes of on monologues that give info dumps sometimes multiple times per chapter 80% of the first 20 chapters is info long story short its interesting but feels like mandatory reading material the author needs to work on his pacing and consider what needs to be explained and what doesn't
Great Fanfic in my humble opinion. 1. MC doesn't know Dxd but know other Anime 2. His memories regarding DxD were erased by entity who isekaied him 3. Because his mind acceleration there's so many words in one paragraph. But i like it, thank you
Reveal Spoiler the story is good, but my only turn-off here is the amount of info dumps included on the story
Okay, I'm going to give my honest opinion of the story up to the 19 chapters it has so far. It's good; I'm not going to deny it. I like the relationships and ties that have been maintained so far with the family, although I’m much more into stories that focus on the protagonist's point of view and all that. The secondary characters in this story, to me, feel like they have life. I would say that is the most notable positive point, in my opinion. As for the negative... the walls of text! So much information passes in such a short time in the first chapters that it becomes indigestible most of the time. There were times when I skipped parts simply because I found the information being explained to me irrelevant. Beyond that, I can't think of anything concrete to complain about. Without making this too long, I will continue this story, and maybe if they don’t abandon it and get to chapter 60 or 70, I will write another review.
I didn’t think this would be so good, I was use to shity dxd fanfic the people writing with their third leg so this was fresh air and I hope you don’t make him overpowered in beginning
It's not for me. The story isn't bad, and I don't have any problems with the grammar or anything, but the massive info dumps in every chapter for the last eleven chapters were killing me. I know you said it would be scientific because he uses human magic, but he hasn't even started learning it, and the wall of text is tiring. As I said, it's not for me, but I wish you luck with the story.
Probably the most comprehensive and well put together dxd story on here it honestly just needs more chapters to truly shine on. Long chapters with extensive information on how everything works without it feeling like an info dump. Really good story so far
What about romance? Is it going to be a harem, or does the author have the one and the true waifu? I’m genuinely curious to see how the author will handle the MC’s love story/stories.
A question, why not go the female issei route, train him to be loyal and let his perversion continue to be there to give him some motivation and turn him into a semi yandere, what do you think?
Why does everyone dislike the MC’s mother so much? Unlike other fanfics, the author here has actually made an effort to give even the supporting characters some emotional depth. Sure, the MC’s mom is annoying, headstrong, and doesn’t help him (oh no, how terrible!), but at least she’s well-developed as a character. That’s a lot better than what you usually see in fanfics, where the MC's family is just background noise and you don’t really care about them. But in this fanfic, even the MC’s mother stirs up emotions, even if it’s just irritation. And it’s only the first 14 chapters... yet people are already throwing around these ratings. All in all I really appreciate how this fanfic manages to make me feel such a wide range of emotions. That’s rare, and honestly, really awesome! Highly recommend.
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The first few chapters offer a nice, calm slice-of-life and character development. So far, I'm really enjoying it. I hope the author will keep up the same level of quality.
The title is a missed opportunity not gonna lie, but early impressions have been good.
A question, will you save Akeno and Shuri from the Himejima family because if so, it would help you to ally yourself with the fallen angels and obtain training with Akeno and make her become stronger than her canon version?
Where are the other reviews coming from? I’ve read a lot of DxD fanfics, and I know that 3 or 3.5 stars are given to something on the level of (DxD Fated), but this fanfic is clearly a step above that… Honestly, I don’t get what the issue is...
Great fanfic. Some people say the author is repetitive or drags things out, but I think he has done an excellent job with the character development, the MC's abilities, and the structure of the DxD world. I really like how the story is progressing, and I hope the author keeps up this level of quality!
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Hey everyone, Wakamezake here! Attention! Disclaimer! 1) This story steers clear of unnecessary grimdark themes. If you’re into reading about extreme suffering and misery, this isn't for you. Seriously, don’t bother starting it. 2) System elements are minimal and only used to explain the MC’s power and his “Hero's journey” rewards. 3) This is a DxD fanfic, not some serious multiverse thing. Expect just a few characters from other worlds to fill in the plot gaps. 4) Heads up — there’s going to be a lot of scientific terminology, since the MC’s main power is the “human magic” of the DxD, which works based on science. 5) The rewards from achievements let me get creative with the MC’s “Build”. If you’ve got any ideas, feel free to suggest them — either here or in the comments under the chapter. Enjoy!