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1 days ago
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Okay, I'm going to give my honest opinion of the story up to the 19 chapters it has so far. It's good; I'm not going to deny it. I like the relationships and ties that have been maintained so far with the family, although I’m much more into stories that focus on the protagonist's point of view and all that. The secondary characters in this story, to me, feel like they have life. I would say that is the most notable positive point, in my opinion. As for the negative... the walls of text! So much information passes in such a short time in the first chapters that it becomes indigestible most of the time. There were times when I skipped parts simply because I found the information being explained to me irrelevant. Beyond that, I can't think of anything concrete to complain about. Without making this too long, I will continue this story, and maybe if they don’t abandon it and get to chapter 60 or 70, I will write another review.

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1 months ago
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And this? I guess at some point a comment like this should appear...

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On Earth, some people believed that forks and knives were violent and barbaric, while chopsticks were gentle and elegant.

Starting Today I'll Work As A City Lord

Starting Today I'll Work As A City Lord

Anime & Comics · GreenBlue17

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Dantalien_728
1 months ago
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Is this a made up world or is it from somewhere?

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1 months ago
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This is the second time I’ve gone through this reading. I’m still fascinated by the cruel and delirious vision the author has of Snape’s obsession with Lily. It’s repulsive, unpleasant, pitiful, and horrible, but at the same time, it’s so fascinating and morbid that I can’t stop reading it.

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I stand up quickly gathering my things in a hurry. I don't even notice the noise I make as I try to flee. That is until I look up. She is looking at me. Everyone but Bins is but only she matters. Maybe she turned around in curiosity, probably forgetting exactly who was behind her. As her gaze locks with mine I feel my knees go weak but it's irrelevant. My heart feels like it might rip through my chest and my guts feel like they're spilling but it's irrelevant. As her emerald eyes match mine I can feel the vicelock I have on my emotions slip for just a moment. 

Just Another Chat Group

Just Another Chat Group

Anime & Comics · IHaveHidden

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Dantalien_728
1 months ago
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2 months ago
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Mmm, I wouldn't really agree with them making him good. Although Maul's past is unfortunate, we must not forget that he is still someone who committed horrible acts and who fell too deeply into the worst of the dark side. I think it would be best if they left him locked up in some prison or something

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3 months ago
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"What a troublesome girl… don't give me more headaches…"

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

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Dantalien_728
3 months ago
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I feel like I've read a story very similar to this somewhere, does anyone know? only without the skill of minecraft, with magic I think it was

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Dantalien_728
3 months ago
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Was it good? I think so, but the ending felt rushed and unsatisfactory. There's not much to say; it's a good story if you want to turn off your brain for a while. Like any fanfic, there are some blatant inaccuracies and prejudices regarding certain characters. There's not much characterization, or at least it isn't explored very deeply. Everything feels rushed in general, but otherwise, it's a story slightly above average.

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3 months ago
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Bro, it's too bad I don't carry power stones, if I hadn't given you all the ones I have about how good the story is