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“We are imperfectly perfect for each other. As the sky is for the clouds. And the moon is for the stars ” Question marks can be commas. An essential imbalance. But, chance can sometimes be sweet and smooth, showing how life has unusual ways of flowering the misfortunes and encounters of everyday life. Hinata is a dreamy, fun and docile painter and art curator. You have a fetish for getting in trouble. Not very adept at rules and conventions, hates cycles, loves sunflowers and is deliciously fickle. Just like the waves of the sea. After an outbreak, with your beliefs and emotions destabilized. She is faced with a big dilemma and decides to drive aimlessly and ends up in an unknown village, but a paradise hidden on the map. She just didn't count that in the middle of this uncalculated escape, she would end up meeting Naruto Uzumaki: a redneck, mysterious, extremely debauched and individualistic botanist. The previously obscured truths, flowering the same melody of feelings kept at the core of the soul. With inner demons, clandestine wounds, insanity hidden by the naked eye and an intriguing mystery, they can find themselves, without even waiting, at their side. Being love, the driving force to heal all the stigmas of the past and present.
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Just read a few chapters but here I some points maybe the author can consider. This may be slightly harsh but the story is not gaining much recognition for now and perhaps this may be due to several reasons. 1. The summary is slightly too long and complicated. Make it simpler and try to get straight to the point within the first few sentences in order to draw attention. 2. The dialouges are abit inconsistent. For eg, sometimes, normal " " is used while at times, - - is used. Try to stick to one format. 3. As for grammer tenses and sentence construction, I think its ok. Most webnovel readers would be able to accept it as there is any major flaws. 4. The story is kind of confusing and at times I m not really sure what exactly am I reading about. 5. Now, from the way your write, your chapter lengths are good, grammer and tenses are ok and as a flow, it is not that hard to read. My suggestion? Maybe you could just write a fanfic on something much more simply, like an OC reincarnate into Naruto or some other verse or maybe a Naruto character in another verse. Yes, there are many such novels but thats the thing webnovel readers go to. Its good to be different but the readers are the facts. The only difference is, you gain an edge most of these authors as your english is much better. Now this is just my suggestion, you dont have to follow it. I wish you the best of luck.