ten shadows in Percy Jackson

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SAURON_

Honestly would be much better if the author wasn't lazy and decided to go back and fix the story since there are incorrect naming of characters and missing pieces of information also dialog is also missing some paragraphs every now and again and alot of plot holes like first chapter he is using all his shikigami and not even a explanation of how he even got them and also being physically strong enough to take out a minotaur but then the next few chapters he cant even lift a shield or doesn't use his experience that he has from "years" of being alone fighting against monsters all this doesn't bother me as much as how he came to be or even a little of his backstory like i can understand a major time skip

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Helia_King

This explains it much better than I could.

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PokemonJoker

It’s good but it seems that it is most likely dropped so sad

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Dead00

I really like this story it’s really unique and a good story hope you update it though I feel like the mc will be a son of Poseidon and I feel like that won’t make much sense

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Drimy

This is actually rlly good. Hope he becomes slightly more like his namesake. Tho not to the point where he doesn’t care about anyone. Hope you don’t drop this author! Also, will he get any of his powers or just the name?

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Indra_

More chapters please......................

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AZI_Khan

hshshehehehehhehehehehhehehehehheheheheheh what happened

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Celebron

It's one of the best ideas for a Percy Jackson story I've ever seen, it has a lot of potential ✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔

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swordknight_slept

overall premise and original character is quite excellent. the quality of paragraph can get an improvement though.

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Darkiling

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George_Brandish

Keep up great work first of its kind great to see

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Majeh7

great work keep it up ......................................................................................................................................................................................

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Darkiling

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