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Só vim fazer avaliação dizer que os primeiros capítulos foram editados e se tornaram legíveis, que foi o motivo que eu parei de ler essa história quando ela tinha apenas 20 capítulos.
es una mierda la historia, se tardan tantos capítulos en una sola acción y lo peor son los capítulos después de los 200, mas adelante digamos que kara viola a nuestro protagonista y a el simplemente no le importa o no se que tiene en la cabeza.
Sinceramente apaga isso e começa denovo, porque tá ruim, os personagem não tem mente e bla bla bla bla bla bla bla de novo em um momento que ele vai ficar com a cabeça inteira dele no momento e o cara ganha um pouquinho de conforto com a gente tá tentado fazer o mesmo que ele fez no seu pé no meio da chuva que vai dar um jeito e que vai dar um jeito mole de ser o que mais importa é a única coisa boa do Brasil e que ele não tem força nenhuma contra a gente vai se arrepender de ter sido o primeiro gol que o Vasco perdeu na copa do Bahia no final do ano vc o cara jogou contra o Vasco na última rodada
horrible dialog okay story promise, but god awful mash up of so many different worlds and really bad plotlines. This story is such a mess that thier is no saving it unless it has a full rewrite/edit. From having clark a child of 10 takr care of a baby. to a stupid eating contest that takes up way too much plot. To him conveniently wanting to leave school. cause author didnt want to make any stories involving the school i guess? its just a mess of bad plotlines and bad dialog.
Trash novel, the author used a pathetic reason to make the protagonist weaker than he should be, he also does not understand the power of a sayajin, Goku was capable of resisting bullets with only 40 power and was capable of moving at 4970 m /s with 5000 power, it would have been more interesting if he had been reincarnated at the time when he was a baby and not a teenager, like I said before, just an excuse to nerf him.
..............................................me está[img=recomendar] gustando espero que lo sigan actualizando ....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Muy buena historia, para ser traducida, es un poco orgánica, no tan forzada, como el resto de este tipo de novelas chinas traducidas..................…..…..........…..........…..........…........
It started off good but I slowly noticed the translation errors that get worse and worse the farther you read into this story. Maybe if he had an editor to fix those noticeable slip ups that ruin this story then maybe there would be something decent to read here. that doesn't seem likely tho.
Well... This is a translation, Likely from chinese, so there is no point in commenting or trying to tell things to the translator [img=faceslap]
Starts off fairly all right but the cracks are clearly showing by chapter 25-26; idioms clearly being out of place and goku being referred to as Wukong. Clear signs (in my opinion) that it's a translated novel... Maybe even machine translated. Nothing is wrong with that inherently but at the same time it leads to some very nonsensical plot contrivances for those of us who know the common logic of the western world. If it's not translated then... Well, then there is no excuse for some of the silliness that happens.
Ótima história bom demais espero que não pare mais 😊😃😊😃😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤭🫣😋😘🥰😘🥰😊😍🥰😘🥰😍😊🤭🫣😋😘🥰😘
Interesting Story. It keeps you engage while reading, hope The Book/Story reaches it's grand completion without being dropped.
Qual o link da obra original?? . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
the novel should be called the mentally challenged brother of superman. I mean come on what is this the person who wrote this doesn't know any one, doesn't have any friends so he is writing some idiotic reasons to get him out of school this guy hasn't even gone past he's ally and trying to create a world of fiction 😹😹😹😹 dude should leave his d##k and touch some grass sometimes the most disappointing
Só vim fazer avaliação dizer que os primeiros capítulos foram editados e se tornaram legíveis, que foi o motivo que eu parei de ler essa história quando ela tinha apenas 20 capítulos.
es una mierda la historia, se tardan tantos capítulos en una sola acción y lo peor son los capítulos después de los 200, mas adelante digamos que kara viola a nuestro protagonista y a el simplemente no le importa o no se que tiene en la cabeza.
Sinceramente apaga isso e começa denovo, porque tá ruim, os personagem não tem mente e bla bla bla bla bla bla bla de novo em um momento que ele vai ficar com a cabeça inteira dele no momento e o cara ganha um pouquinho de conforto com a gente tá tentado fazer o mesmo que ele fez no seu pé no meio da chuva que vai dar um jeito e que vai dar um jeito mole de ser o que mais importa é a única coisa boa do Brasil e que ele não tem força nenhuma contra a gente vai se arrepender de ter sido o primeiro gol que o Vasco perdeu na copa do Bahia no final do ano vc o cara jogou contra o Vasco na última rodada
horrible dialog okay story promise, but god awful mash up of so many different worlds and really bad plotlines. This story is such a mess that thier is no saving it unless it has a full rewrite/edit. From having clark a child of 10 takr care of a baby. to a stupid eating contest that takes up way too much plot. To him conveniently wanting to leave school. cause author didnt want to make any stories involving the school i guess? its just a mess of bad plotlines and bad dialog.
Trash novel, the author used a pathetic reason to make the protagonist weaker than he should be, he also does not understand the power of a sayajin, Goku was capable of resisting bullets with only 40 power and was capable of moving at 4970 m /s with 5000 power, it would have been more interesting if he had been reincarnated at the time when he was a baby and not a teenager, like I said before, just an excuse to nerf him.
..............................................me está[img=recomendar] gustando espero que lo sigan actualizando ....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Muy buena historia, para ser traducida, es un poco orgánica, no tan forzada, como el resto de este tipo de novelas chinas traducidas..................…..…..........…..........…..........…........
It started off good but I slowly noticed the translation errors that get worse and worse the farther you read into this story. Maybe if he had an editor to fix those noticeable slip ups that ruin this story then maybe there would be something decent to read here. that doesn't seem likely tho.
Well... This is a translation, Likely from chinese, so there is no point in commenting or trying to tell things to the translator [img=faceslap]
Starts off fairly all right but the cracks are clearly showing by chapter 25-26; idioms clearly being out of place and goku being referred to as Wukong. Clear signs (in my opinion) that it's a translated novel... Maybe even machine translated. Nothing is wrong with that inherently but at the same time it leads to some very nonsensical plot contrivances for those of us who know the common logic of the western world. If it's not translated then... Well, then there is no excuse for some of the silliness that happens.
Ótima história bom demais espero que não pare mais 😊😃😊😃😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤭🫣😋😘🥰😘🥰😊😍🥰😘🥰😍😊🤭🫣😋😘🥰😘
Interesting Story. It keeps you engage while reading, hope The Book/Story reaches it's grand completion without being dropped.
Qual o link da obra original?? . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
the novel should be called the mentally challenged brother of superman. I mean come on what is this the person who wrote this doesn't know any one, doesn't have any friends so he is writing some idiotic reasons to get him out of school this guy hasn't even gone past he's ally and trying to create a world of fiction 😹😹😹😹 dude should leave his d##k and touch some grass sometimes the most disappointing