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Secret That Lies In The Heart

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Author: Favi_gold

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Synopsis

There's a secret no one wants to hear.

There's a secret no one knows.

There's a secret that is kept in hidden inside of you.

There's a secret that only you know.

There's a secret that the world doesn't believe in.

There's always a second chance,a second start, a second beginning.Bethany who was rumored to be dead was very much alive and well.Her family hated her for a crime she didn't commit.She swore she would avenge them.

Given the opportunity to prove she had moved on from her past relationship she unexpectedly meet an stranger who she knew nothing about.And the worst part is,she's stuck with him,she didn't let him go.

What do she do when he doesn't want to let her go?will she stay with him and fight till the end? Despite the warning signs,she failed to listen and now she's stuck with the devil.

There's always something waiting at the other side of the wall.She knew this and yet she wouldn't give up she was determined.The devil stared at her longer than she expected, what did he want from her.

He calls her different sweet names like sweet,butter, cherry.But he kept it away from her, there's always something that's waiting for you.A secret of the past, a pain of the past you left hidden.
When you suddenly think everything is going well for you but suddenly it's gets revealed.

Yet to come.Yet to fulfill.Yet to see.
He was her devil.He was her lust.He was her desire.

She hated him
She wanted him
She loved him
...

Bound with him!
Leave him!
Destroy him!

"How could you do this to your own brother?,"Bethany asked feeling all hopes crushed.
"Because to get you of course...I mean why else do I have to do this,"
"No! I have no business with you...infact I hate you!!!"Bethany yelled.
"Hehehe if I were you I'll shut my mouth,"
"Where is he? please take me and not him he has suffer enough,"She pleaded.
"I see your blind with that brother of mine,"
"He helped you...so why doing all this to him?for payback?"She asked.
"I like it when you get fierce,"
What did that mean?

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My first book here please support me and give it a try! And you won't regret it.
Xoxo

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ImDove
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I love this story so far especially the reactions and how you can actually visualize the situation and Maya and Bethany are so realistic to the way me and my siblings talk to eachother[img=update][img=recommend]

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Goodness_OG

Oh my gosh, so good. I'll shamelessly give this a five star review. I need more chap author. It's so thrilling, super intriguing, from the book cover, to the synopsis, to every single words in the chaps. Spectacular 💕👌

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Unam98

Bethany is a trouble maker how can he kiss a stranger like that lol. Your story is so fun to read, I just read the first chapter and I'm already hooked. Keep going author!

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MARYAMjk

Wow what a story line and plot. The way your write is spectacular. I'm really loving it. The characters are well developed. I'm gonna read this novel.

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Kari_Chan

Great story I like the drama you’re going with. The characters already have life I like their personality and the out coming impact they have in your story. The writing quality could be better don’t let that stop you tho practice makes perfect. It would be cool to build more of that wow factor in your story since it’s a drama like 😱 no he didn’t ! 😂. It would build more excitement. This just a tip, also I am not anymore superior then you and my type of story writing is more fantasy type romance with mystery. But I hope I was helpful to you in some way.

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Arip_Purnomo

Wow, this story is amazing. I like that Maya has a strong character. good

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Ike_AJ

The author has a sense of humor and good in character design well done keep it up

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Seaquin

Wow,I’m quite impressed I must confess. I strongly recommend this book for fantasy romance lovers.

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Chloethebarbarian

This is a good read, keep it up[img=recommend]

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Peacejacob

The story is good, the synopsis is catchy and the character is fun, I'm just starting with it but so far I'm intrigued. . well done (◍•ᴗ•◍)

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Joshua_Cruiz

the book is attractive, the details about the life of the characters are exceptional, and it has good transitions, no confusion. the book is well structured based on the five first chapters that I've read. It's a good book, I hope the best for the author

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DukeWriter

Already loving this! it's interesting and the characters are well made, fully fleshed out.

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Kang_Minrin

I was impressed by the new approach of synopsis . and I was impressed by the story as I opened it .Recommended to the people who like love stories with twists

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BaconPanCakes

I love the story! I hope it will release more chapters!

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Adira_hikari

The synopsis got me hooked. I love the story. I hate the fact that Bethany's own family hate her for a crime she didn't commit. The plot is linearly described. You've got a great thing going, author..

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Pyuntariii

Read the first few chaps, and I got to say, Bethany sure is a feisty one! The first chap really makes ya want to read more, although I do see some grammatical errors, but that can be worked on, even I make grammar mistakes as well. All in all, a good intriguing novel. Waiting for more chaps! ☺️

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Godwin_Michael_Lee

HONEST REVIEW ….. Great story , characters are well developed, the flow is good but just few grammatical error to correct, just go through it once more

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littlemaomao_

Just finished reading the chapters, I’m gonna give this a 5 star rating. The world-building is clear, the story is intriguing. Well, EVEN THE SYNOPSIS IS INTRIGUING. I dunno, i just need more chapters rn. Great work, Author!

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Jaxiel
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Revenge/drama story, simple synopsis that tells it all. already quite intrigue by the first three chapters. quality of writing is ok but still worth to give a go.

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Roxanne_Writes

Wow just wowit's so good, you have to make more of this amazing masterpiece 😍😍

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