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I was impressed by the new approach of synopsis . and I was impressed by the story as I opened it .Recommended to the people who like love stories with twists
The synopsis got me hooked. I love the story. I hate the fact that Bethany's own family hate her for a crime she didn't commit. The plot is linearly described. You've got a great thing going, author..
Read the first few chaps, and I got to say, Bethany sure is a feisty one! The first chap really makes ya want to read more, although I do see some grammatical errors, but that can be worked on, even I make grammar mistakes as well. All in all, a good intriguing novel. Waiting for more chaps! ☺️
HONEST REVIEW ….. Great story , characters are well developed, the flow is good but just few grammatical error to correct, just go through it once more
Just finished reading the chapters, I’m gonna give this a 5 star rating. The world-building is clear, the story is intriguing. Well, EVEN THE SYNOPSIS IS INTRIGUING. I dunno, i just need more chapters rn. Great work, Author!
Bethany is a trouble maker how can he kiss a stranger like that lol. Your story is so fun to read, I just read the first chapter and I'm already hooked. Keep going author!
Wow what a story line and plot. The way your write is spectacular. I'm really loving it. The characters are well developed. I'm gonna read this novel.
Great story I like the drama you’re going with. The characters already have life I like their personality and the out coming impact they have in your story. The writing quality could be better don’t let that stop you tho practice makes perfect. It would be cool to build more of that wow factor in your story since it’s a drama like 😱 no he didn’t ! 😂. It would build more excitement. This just a tip, also I am not anymore superior then you and my type of story writing is more fantasy type romance with mystery. But I hope I was helpful to you in some way.
Wow,I’m quite impressed I must confess. I strongly recommend this book for fantasy romance lovers.
Revenge/drama story, simple synopsis that tells it all. already quite intrigue by the first three chapters. quality of writing is ok but still worth to give a go.
I love this story so far especially the reactions and how you can actually visualize the situation and Maya and Bethany are so realistic to the way me and my siblings talk to eachother[img=update][img=recommend]
Wow just wowit's so good, you have to make more of this amazing masterpiece 😍😍
The storyline is good and catchy, making one want to know what will happen.It needs a bit of work to make it perfect which I am sure the author will learn and grow into. I will wait for that time and time back to give another review. Best of luck and, well done to you👍
The story is good, the synopsis is catchy and the character is fun, I'm just starting with it but so far I'm intrigued. . well done (◍•ᴗ•◍)
I really lovee this book, like its so Nice(no exaggerations[img=recommend]). keep it coming!
The story is good, the characters have charisma, and the world building is nice.But for me to get there, I had to endure the poor writing, and I'm not saying this to put you down.Practice, read, and write more.The more you do it, the better your writing gets.So, I'm looking forward to seeing your improvement, author.Good work!
She is funny, I like her. And he is ruthless, perfect combination. What more can I ask for?💃💃💃
Yay!!!This book is one of the best I've read! I can't drop it now...Read and you won't regret.
Wow. I'm loving this book, awesome characters by the way.You should check it out :)
Oh my gosh, so good. I'll shamelessly give this a five star review. I need more chap author. It's so thrilling, super intriguing, from the book cover, to the synopsis, to every single words in the chaps. Spectacular 💕👌
Nice writing style. Some problems with spacing after the dialogue. Otherwise, all good to read. 🤗👌
When all you want is to rent a boyfriend but in the end you will fall in love with him 🤭 the story is very interesting... ❤️❤️❤️ Keep up the good work
the book is attractive, the details about the life of the characters are exceptional, and it has good transitions, no confusion. the book is well structured based on the five first chapters that I've read. It's a good book, I hope the best for the author
Nice story keep the it up I'll love this already it's giving me this vibes so much in love with Bethany. Kudos author.added to library I mostly love the part when Bethany was trying to pay him for being her rented boyfriend
Already loving this! it's interesting and the characters are well made, fully fleshed out.
I was impressed by the new approach of synopsis . and I was impressed by the story as I opened it .Recommended to the people who like love stories with twists
The synopsis got me hooked. I love the story. I hate the fact that Bethany's own family hate her for a crime she didn't commit. The plot is linearly described. You've got a great thing going, author..
Read the first few chaps, and I got to say, Bethany sure is a feisty one! The first chap really makes ya want to read more, although I do see some grammatical errors, but that can be worked on, even I make grammar mistakes as well. All in all, a good intriguing novel. Waiting for more chaps! ☺️
HONEST REVIEW ….. Great story , characters are well developed, the flow is good but just few grammatical error to correct, just go through it once more
Just finished reading the chapters, I’m gonna give this a 5 star rating. The world-building is clear, the story is intriguing. Well, EVEN THE SYNOPSIS IS INTRIGUING. I dunno, i just need more chapters rn. Great work, Author!
Bethany is a trouble maker how can he kiss a stranger like that lol. Your story is so fun to read, I just read the first chapter and I'm already hooked. Keep going author!
Wow what a story line and plot. The way your write is spectacular. I'm really loving it. The characters are well developed. I'm gonna read this novel.
Great story I like the drama you’re going with. The characters already have life I like their personality and the out coming impact they have in your story. The writing quality could be better don’t let that stop you tho practice makes perfect. It would be cool to build more of that wow factor in your story since it’s a drama like 😱 no he didn’t ! 😂. It would build more excitement. This just a tip, also I am not anymore superior then you and my type of story writing is more fantasy type romance with mystery. But I hope I was helpful to you in some way.
Wow,I’m quite impressed I must confess. I strongly recommend this book for fantasy romance lovers.
Revenge/drama story, simple synopsis that tells it all. already quite intrigue by the first three chapters. quality of writing is ok but still worth to give a go.
I love this story so far especially the reactions and how you can actually visualize the situation and Maya and Bethany are so realistic to the way me and my siblings talk to eachother[img=update][img=recommend]
Wow just wowit's so good, you have to make more of this amazing masterpiece 😍😍
The storyline is good and catchy, making one want to know what will happen.It needs a bit of work to make it perfect which I am sure the author will learn and grow into. I will wait for that time and time back to give another review. Best of luck and, well done to you👍
The story is good, the synopsis is catchy and the character is fun, I'm just starting with it but so far I'm intrigued. . well done (◍•ᴗ•◍)
I really lovee this book, like its so Nice(no exaggerations[img=recommend]). keep it coming!
The story is good, the characters have charisma, and the world building is nice.But for me to get there, I had to endure the poor writing, and I'm not saying this to put you down.Practice, read, and write more.The more you do it, the better your writing gets.So, I'm looking forward to seeing your improvement, author.Good work!
She is funny, I like her. And he is ruthless, perfect combination. What more can I ask for?💃💃💃
Yay!!!This book is one of the best I've read! I can't drop it now...Read and you won't regret.
Wow. I'm loving this book, awesome characters by the way.You should check it out :)
Oh my gosh, so good. I'll shamelessly give this a five star review. I need more chap author. It's so thrilling, super intriguing, from the book cover, to the synopsis, to every single words in the chaps. Spectacular 💕👌
Nice writing style. Some problems with spacing after the dialogue. Otherwise, all good to read. 🤗👌
When all you want is to rent a boyfriend but in the end you will fall in love with him 🤭 the story is very interesting... ❤️❤️❤️ Keep up the good work
the book is attractive, the details about the life of the characters are exceptional, and it has good transitions, no confusion. the book is well structured based on the five first chapters that I've read. It's a good book, I hope the best for the author
Nice story keep the it up I'll love this already it's giving me this vibes so much in love with Bethany. Kudos author.added to library I mostly love the part when Bethany was trying to pay him for being her rented boyfriend
Already loving this! it's interesting and the characters are well made, fully fleshed out.