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Emi is a fierce and spirited young woman, standing at 5'10" with a unique blend of Japanese and Hispanic features. She leads a life as a member of a female Sukeban gang in Japan, where her unyielding passion for combat has earned her the respect and fear of her fellow gang members.
Despite her tough exterior, Emi secretly harbors a deep love for anime, particularly Dragon Ball Z. Her life takes a drastic turn when she meets Aya, the Divine Guardian of Battle, who offers her three wishes to be made within a universe centered around fighting. Emi chooses the Dragon Ball universe, her favorite anime world. ((please be aware this is a series that will head to different universes. Not just the dragon ball one))
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author-San when doing dbz fanfic it is best to not give system or anything over powered the the power system in dbz is very powerful already you only need saiyan bloodline and ur mc good dbz is a martial arts manga/anime so it needs to be weak to strong with a slow burn otherwise if you just make ur mc insta op strong right off the bat what is the point of reading no stuggle,hardship and all that jazz
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Grammar is good and word count per-chapter is great. The plot is good and isn't just an insert with no changes. There's canon divergence and extra original characters. Overall, it's an interesting read. With it's originality and number of chapters + word count, it's one of the handful of upper tier SI/transmigration DB fics I've read. And I've read a lot of them. Though I've found the four star Dragon ball as a button, seemingly as some sort of medium to open portals to other universes (omniverse) to be kind of odd, instead of just opening the portal as an inherent ability. But it's the DB universe, so it's not that out of place. The Toriko universe also plays a huge role in this story, but not the main role. I, however, never watched/read Toriko, so there's nothing I can comment on in that area. There were some hiccups in terms of canononical knowledge, but the author has shown a willingness to fix such mistakes once pointed out. That's a lot more than I can say about most other authors that don't even bother fixing grammar mistakes when pointed out, yet have the time to thumbs up and or comment. [Ctrl]+[F] people, it's quick and easy. Don't let them pile up with the excuse for a rewrite which rarely ever comes about. Consider the experience of your future readers.
I thought this was a pretty interesting for a dbz story. She does travel to different universes and the 2 main ones in this story are dbz and the second one is toriko but it stays mostly in dbz.
Hello, shameless author here. You're probably wondering why I decided to write this. Well, you could thank saiyan of the cosmos for that one. They had such an interesting story but suddenly stopped updating, which sucks. However, I plan to use some of what they wrote as a guideline while expanding on it. So any feed back and comments would be like giving a flower some water, in a sense I would really love them. Let's hope they come back at some point but never the less, I hope you can at least enjoy the story, even if the updates are not weekly.