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RWBY: The Mystical Merchant

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Author: Shouxian

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Deus, had gotten a mysterious text from 'The Almighty', and customised a game character for himself. Unfortunately, he was than inserted into a world he knew with hot girls, creatures of darkness, anchient evil, and mystical energy.

Now the only problem is.....why did he choose to be a merchant as his sub - class?
*Gender-Bending Warning*

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Student0

Please stabilize your update rates ,.......................,........... ..................,...........................,.......,...,..................,,............... ... ........., . , .................

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gamer31
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I like you book it is original just continue writing what you like you got my support.Just please don’t quite.👍👍!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WindCrest

The story has AMAZING potential. The writing is good, just a bit of typos but understandable, relaxing and fun to read. The updates seem to be daily, so that's good. If possible, can 2 per day be good? The MC starts with a good foundation, even as a merchant but I feel more like he's a blacksmith considering his skill choice;but it's still new so the class might and should be developed considering the story IS about a merchant. The world's starting point should be fine considering this is a fan-fiction. But still needs a bit of development on the shop's location and environmental characteristics.

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Li_Cangtian

Dont bother. It was abandoned.

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Geometrical

Good story over all. Just want a scudule of when the author posts plz. ...................................................................................................................

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0PandaFox

The one thing I’m mad about is the fact that you copied skills from “THE GAMER” and anther thing is that your updates are to slow other than that this book has potential

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Samuel76

There has been no update for a long time are you going to continue or drop this please don't drop it as it it's really good novel update on whether you are going to continue

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Ellendria

I'm going to dive in and take a look at your story already like what I see in the synopsis. After I finish catching up to your latest chapter I will do a review again and I'm pretty sure it's going to be 5 stars. Just kidding it definitely will be. Don't give up writing no matter what. I have my days where I have a hard time writing myself even though I've got a decent number of views I don't know how many people actually read my story. Nowhere near as many as you only like 28 to 29 thousand people have read mine or viewed it. Anyway my point is you will still have people out there hungry for your next chapter, so no matter what keep going it will all be okay in the end. 👍😁

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Dragonia_101

Thanks for The Novel And Please keep writing and complete this novel.Your other novels were interesting and good too .

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AgainstTheOdds

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Vastoking

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ConradPat

The story is really good so far. There's a few grammar mistakes here and there, but the overall story definitely helps with pushing them out of mind and keeps it from breaking the immersion.

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Heavenly_Rain

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HeavenlySun

That was really good novel well except for Blondie turning into a girl. You could make up character and use her well what ever that not what I want to ask you. What I want to ask you is which class is he going to teach, I think combat class should be in the list.

5yr
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HeavenlySun

Good novel but are you gonna make that Blondie girl forever, cause I feel like it's gay even thought he turn into a girl but his till a girl.

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Virtuous_Vanity

Umu! this is a really good novel! hope there's no late updates. and please if you're gonna add harem please make it limit to 4 or 5 having too much is really not good if you logically think about it... unlike some certain fanfic with like more than 10 girls? tf was it even possible?

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Time71
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Hope that there wouldnt be any other late chapter and thank for the chapter today i can't wait to see what happens next. C. N.

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Snake551g

So far I'm loving this novel this review is s bit premature but I'm doing so because of the unique route the author has done with the mc so far the basic setting as has been completely set up and the characters introduced have been done well. I hope to see you go more in depth with what you've chosen for the mcs main job. The one thing I have to say I'm unsure of is the update stability. Author do you have any answer for that not expecting an every day update or anything just curious of your schedule for it

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floper

story has a potential to be something great ...........................................................................................................................................................

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