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A young girl suffers a tragic fate, but was given a second chance at life.. as one of the immortal Ajins.
This will be an Action and Romance oriented fanfic, The auxiliary chapter will explain the book in more detail.
This is the first fic i have written, i am open to criticisms as long as they are valid.
P.S english is not my first language :)
P.S again. This will be a slight AU.
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It's an interesting fic and I'm enjoying reading it, but it's clearly the work of a novice author so I wouldn't recommend it to readers who are looking for a read from a more experienced author. I'm giving it 5 stars but a more honest rating would be 3.5 but I can clearly see it's a fic by a rookie actor who really put a lot of effort into writing something good. The story is interesting, I like the power of the protagonist and although having the love interest be an OC is not my preference I have to admit that the author has created an interesting character. The flaw of this fic is that the author is not very good at writing expressive scenes which ends up making the story a little dry and the development of the characters seems superficial, despite the author having really worked on developing them. Another flaw is that some events were too forced, the situation of the protagonist's hand in the first chapter was too forced, the first attack of villains that the MC faced was a bit forced and could have been much better developed, finally the last attack involving the teeth villain was extremely random and far too forced given that the location was supposed to be well defended. These fic problems clearly come from lack of experience rather than effort so and because I'm enjoying the story I'm giving it 5 stars.
I love this book it's so hard to find good books that don't make their characters op at the very.
I got a trauma from the last mha fanfic with ajin power i hope it in not like that
10/10 tu historia autor-sama me gusto mucho de nuevo 10/10 me pregunto si la mc va a entrar a la UA o talvez sea policía como su padre aun que creo que lo mas seguro es que entre a la UA otra ves 10/10 ti historia me gusta bastante
I love reading the book the characters are well written and i love mha yuri fanfic I don’t find many good ones so I’m really excited to read the story[img=More pls]
Since it's author's first book I think the story is well written. This book will keep you captivating as the story gets interesting. Everyone should give it a go.
10/10 the author is underrated I really really really like how this mc is female mc and isn’t to op, Would recommend it to those who want actual good reads Felt like it:°
It's good! Jihye is lowkey overpowered with All-Might not being much of a use. Right now it could have many routes like development or further information about Jihye's reincarnation and more. Has potential to break off from MHA to make its own brand![img=In your face]
The book is a great find. Story is really interesting and gripping. Scenes are well thought out. Amazing work! 👌
we love it! have been wanting to read something like this for a long time. we reqlly find ourself adoring the characters. excited for more and thank you for writing this^^
It's a great story read it immediately ~ ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
Just straight up a fantasy. Bad guys are bad, good guys are good. No one in between. And some female Oc is in love with mc(Who is Also female) in middleschool(started way before) which is disgusting. They dont even know what love is in middle School. Overall this is just a perfect dream where you are sure even if mc has no idea whats happening, the world will take it easy and Let Her win. Dont even get me started on the School teacher Who has the ego of a chinese character that does everything he can to get mc kicked out from the School because "she has no quirk" He even hires 2 gunman to kidnap and sell her organs (which is just an excuse for mc to discover her powers and beat them)
It’s way to fast paced that you have no idea what’s even going on. It’s barely readable to me.
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Awesome book. Five star review. Would read again, and a lot of random words.I have to read them,and the best story ideas,and the best story of them now and you can listen 🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶I is going to be hard to explain later,and the best story ideas,but I don't have anything to be hard for the best and i love 💘too too!I'm.You are the best and i love 💘💘too miss my name and you can't have to be super bowl party is going because of them now i see 👀.
I must say, this is one interesting tale. I found myself engaged in it, The characters are interesting and the story progresses well. Overall, it is worth the read. I really liked the way you focus on those characters, although at points, I was somewhat not expecting sudden shifts in POV's. It was confusing in the beginning in telling who was speaking, but I have also seen the improvement in later chapters . Nonetheless, I am giving you a 5, your quality of writing is not impacted by the shifting . Keep up your story.
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