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Big_Ant

The story has a lot of potential, but there are some issues that really bother me. First, every chapter starts with “Location: X.” It feels like the author is against naturally setting up the scene. Instead, each chapter begins with a note about where the scene is happening, which gets annoying. Every time a new chapter starts or we switch to another characters POV, that location note appears again. Another issue is the POV choice, the author doesn’t seem to have settled on a perspective, some chapters are in third person, others from the protagonist's point of view or another character’s. In some chapters, the narration even switches from first to third person, this doesdn’t make sense, especially since this constant switching of POV doesn’t add anything meaningful. Third-person narration doesn’t reveal any relevant information that would justify the shift, it just seems like the author hasn’t decided on the best approach. The story is confusing and moves too quickly, with multiple battles starting without a clear reason, and the heroine is always on the front line, meanwhile, the protagonist feels like a secondary character because we see more of the heroine’s actions, it’s interesting that the protagonist is weaker, but I don’t understand what the author is trying to explore by focusing so much on the heroine's battles. To be honest, the heroine gets far too many battles for her own sake, after all, shes just a child. Okay, all these battles are because of future plot developments, and there’s a reason why it’s all happening, but there’s no need to force the plot like this. It makes it feel like this story revolves around this single significant event, with everything and everyone bending to it. There’s more to a story than just a good plot, develop the world, the characters, their quirks, relationships or anything beyond just the plot. We don’t know anything about the protagonist, what she likes to do, wear, her tastes, nothing, other than that there’s always another fight waiting for her.

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Deus_Da_Leitura

I thought this fic by Ajin was very good, mainly because the last one I saw by Bnh Ajin wasn't very good, the only thing that seriously needs to be added is a little more brutality in the protagonist but the series is 10\10 I hope the author comes back someday and keep writing.

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The_Puffer

Just straight up a fantasy. Bad guys are bad, good guys are good. No one in between. And some female Oc is in love with mc(Who is Also female) in middleschool(started way before) which is disgusting. They dont even know what love is in middle School. Overall this is just a perfect dream where you are sure even if mc has no idea whats happening, the world will take it easy and Let Her win. Dont even get me started on the School teacher Who has the ego of a chinese character that does everything he can to get mc kicked out from the School because "she has no quirk" He even hires 2 gunman to kidnap and sell her organs (which is just an excuse for mc to discover her powers and beat them)

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Sorouko
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It’s way to fast paced that you have no idea what’s even going on. It’s barely readable to me.

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Meki_Kid

Awesome book. Five star review. Would read again, and a lot of random words.I have to read them,and the best story ideas,and the best story of them now and you can listen 🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶I is going to be hard to explain later,and the best story ideas,but I don't have anything to be hard for the best and i love 💘too too!I'm.You are the best and i love 💘💘too miss my name and you can't have to be super bowl party is going because of them now i see 👀.

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DaoistDTW9tz

it's an amazing fanfic hope you continue uploading it

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Klonko21

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Galactic_Sun

1st time writing review don't take seriously but try making mc more brutal as in torture instead of clean cuts make it jagged and more painful it be more fun

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Artem_5195

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ArtbusterBeeze

I must say, this is one interesting tale. I found myself engaged in it, The characters are interesting and the story progresses well. Overall, it is worth the read. I really liked the way you focus on those characters, although at points, I was somewhat not expecting sudden shifts in POV's. It was confusing in the beginning in telling who was speaking, but I have also seen the improvement in later chapters . Nonetheless, I am giving you a 5, your quality of writing is not impacted by the shifting . Keep up your story.

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HappyJester

I give this novel 26 Battleships out of 18 vikings

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Spelloyal

It's an interesting fic and I'm enjoying reading it, but it's clearly the work of a novice author so I wouldn't recommend it to readers who are looking for a read from a more experienced author. I'm giving it 5 stars but a more honest rating would be 3.5 but I can clearly see it's a fic by a rookie actor who really put a lot of effort into writing something good. The story is interesting, I like the power of the protagonist and although having the love interest be an OC is not my preference I have to admit that the author has created an interesting character. The flaw of this fic is that the author is not very good at writing expressive scenes which ends up making the story a little dry and the development of the characters seems superficial, despite the author having really worked on developing them. Another flaw is that some events were too forced, the situation of the protagonist's hand in the first chapter was too forced, the first attack of villains that the MC faced was a bit forced and could have been much better developed, finally the last attack involving the teeth villain was extremely random and far too forced given that the location was supposed to be well defended. These fic problems clearly come from lack of experience rather than effort so and because I'm enjoying the story I'm giving it 5 stars.

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Kingelano1

I got a trauma from the last mha fanfic with ajin power i hope it in not like that

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_fall_

Since it's author's first book I think the story is well written. This book will keep you captivating as the story gets interesting. Everyone should give it a go.

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gaurav_gaag

The book is a great find. Story is really interesting and gripping. Scenes are well thought out. Amazing work! 👌

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Prince_charming57

Interesting, I enjoyed reading. This book deserve more readers.

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tbhuh
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10/10 the author is underrated I really really really like how this mc is female mc and isn’t to op, Would recommend it to those who want actual good reads Felt like it:°

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Asheel_Gadour

It's a great story read it immediately ~ ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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UnknownTrash

we love it! have been wanting to read something like this for a long time. we reqlly find ourself adoring the characters. excited for more and thank you for writing this^^

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Farah_ageeli

I love reading the book the characters are well written and i love mha yuri fanfic I don’t find many good ones so I’m really excited to read the story[img=More pls]

1yr
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galaxy_dragon_3540

I love this book it's so hard to find good books that don't make their characters op at the very.

1yr
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Karunezune

It's good! Jihye is lowkey overpowered with All-Might not being much of a use. Right now it could have many routes like development or further information about Jihye's reincarnation and more. Has potential to break off from MHA to make its own brand![img=In your face]

1yr
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Visionario

10/10 tu historia autor-sama me gusto mucho de nuevo 10/10 me pregunto si la mc va a entrar a la UA o talvez sea policía como su padre aun que creo que lo mas seguro es que entre a la UA otra ves 10/10 ti historia me gusta bastante

1yr
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cheesekaik

Don't mind this review~! ======================================================= This is just a terrible shameless author review, please don't mind it huhuhu.

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Big_Ant

The story has a lot of potential, but there are some issues that really bother me. First, every chapter starts with “Location: X.” It feels like the author is against naturally setting up the scene. Instead, each chapter begins with a note about where the scene is happening, which gets annoying. Every time a new chapter starts or we switch to another characters POV, that location note appears again. Another issue is the POV choice, the author doesn’t seem to have settled on a perspective, some chapters are in third person, others from the protagonist's point of view or another character’s. In some chapters, the narration even switches from first to third person, this doesdn’t make sense, especially since this constant switching of POV doesn’t add anything meaningful. Third-person narration doesn’t reveal any relevant information that would justify the shift, it just seems like the author hasn’t decided on the best approach. The story is confusing and moves too quickly, with multiple battles starting without a clear reason, and the heroine is always on the front line, meanwhile, the protagonist feels like a secondary character because we see more of the heroine’s actions, it’s interesting that the protagonist is weaker, but I don’t understand what the author is trying to explore by focusing so much on the heroine's battles. To be honest, the heroine gets far too many battles for her own sake, after all, shes just a child. Okay, all these battles are because of future plot developments, and there’s a reason why it’s all happening, but there’s no need to force the plot like this. It makes it feel like this story revolves around this single significant event, with everything and everyone bending to it. There’s more to a story than just a good plot, develop the world, the characters, their quirks, relationships or anything beyond just the plot. We don’t know anything about the protagonist, what she likes to do, wear, her tastes, nothing, other than that there’s always another fight waiting for her.

2mth
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Deus_Da_Leitura

I thought this fic by Ajin was very good, mainly because the last one I saw by Bnh Ajin wasn't very good, the only thing that seriously needs to be added is a little more brutality in the protagonist but the series is 10\10 I hope the author comes back someday and keep writing.

11mth
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The_Puffer

Just straight up a fantasy. Bad guys are bad, good guys are good. No one in between. And some female Oc is in love with mc(Who is Also female) in middleschool(started way before) which is disgusting. They dont even know what love is in middle School. Overall this is just a perfect dream where you are sure even if mc has no idea whats happening, the world will take it easy and Let Her win. Dont even get me started on the School teacher Who has the ego of a chinese character that does everything he can to get mc kicked out from the School because "she has no quirk" He even hires 2 gunman to kidnap and sell her organs (which is just an excuse for mc to discover her powers and beat them)

1yr
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Sorouko
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It’s way to fast paced that you have no idea what’s even going on. It’s barely readable to me.

1yr
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Meki_Kid

Awesome book. Five star review. Would read again, and a lot of random words.I have to read them,and the best story ideas,and the best story of them now and you can listen 🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶I is going to be hard to explain later,and the best story ideas,but I don't have anything to be hard for the best and i love 💘too too!I'm.You are the best and i love 💘💘too miss my name and you can't have to be super bowl party is going because of them now i see 👀.

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DaoistDTW9tz

it's an amazing fanfic hope you continue uploading it

1yr
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Klonko21

👌.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,

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Galactic_Sun

1st time writing review don't take seriously but try making mc more brutal as in torture instead of clean cuts make it jagged and more painful it be more fun

1yr
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Artem_5195

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ArtbusterBeeze

I must say, this is one interesting tale. I found myself engaged in it, The characters are interesting and the story progresses well. Overall, it is worth the read. I really liked the way you focus on those characters, although at points, I was somewhat not expecting sudden shifts in POV's. It was confusing in the beginning in telling who was speaking, but I have also seen the improvement in later chapters . Nonetheless, I am giving you a 5, your quality of writing is not impacted by the shifting . Keep up your story.

1yr
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HappyJester

I give this novel 26 Battleships out of 18 vikings

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Spelloyal

It's an interesting fic and I'm enjoying reading it, but it's clearly the work of a novice author so I wouldn't recommend it to readers who are looking for a read from a more experienced author. I'm giving it 5 stars but a more honest rating would be 3.5 but I can clearly see it's a fic by a rookie actor who really put a lot of effort into writing something good. The story is interesting, I like the power of the protagonist and although having the love interest be an OC is not my preference I have to admit that the author has created an interesting character. The flaw of this fic is that the author is not very good at writing expressive scenes which ends up making the story a little dry and the development of the characters seems superficial, despite the author having really worked on developing them. Another flaw is that some events were too forced, the situation of the protagonist's hand in the first chapter was too forced, the first attack of villains that the MC faced was a bit forced and could have been much better developed, finally the last attack involving the teeth villain was extremely random and far too forced given that the location was supposed to be well defended. These fic problems clearly come from lack of experience rather than effort so and because I'm enjoying the story I'm giving it 5 stars.

1yr
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Kingelano1

I got a trauma from the last mha fanfic with ajin power i hope it in not like that

1yr
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_fall_

Since it's author's first book I think the story is well written. This book will keep you captivating as the story gets interesting. Everyone should give it a go.

1yr
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gaurav_gaag

The book is a great find. Story is really interesting and gripping. Scenes are well thought out. Amazing work! 👌

1yr
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Prince_charming57

Interesting, I enjoyed reading. This book deserve more readers.

1yr
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tbhuh
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10/10 the author is underrated I really really really like how this mc is female mc and isn’t to op, Would recommend it to those who want actual good reads Felt like it:°

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Asheel_Gadour

It's a great story read it immediately ~ ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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UnknownTrash

we love it! have been wanting to read something like this for a long time. we reqlly find ourself adoring the characters. excited for more and thank you for writing this^^

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Farah_ageeli

I love reading the book the characters are well written and i love mha yuri fanfic I don’t find many good ones so I’m really excited to read the story[img=More pls]

1yr
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galaxy_dragon_3540

I love this book it's so hard to find good books that don't make their characters op at the very.

1yr
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Karunezune

It's good! Jihye is lowkey overpowered with All-Might not being much of a use. Right now it could have many routes like development or further information about Jihye's reincarnation and more. Has potential to break off from MHA to make its own brand![img=In your face]

1yr
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Visionario

10/10 tu historia autor-sama me gusto mucho de nuevo 10/10 me pregunto si la mc va a entrar a la UA o talvez sea policía como su padre aun que creo que lo mas seguro es que entre a la UA otra ves 10/10 ti historia me gusta bastante

1yr
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cheesekaik

Don't mind this review~! ======================================================= This is just a terrible shameless author review, please don't mind it huhuhu.

1yr
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