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This is a good Pokemon story, i just found it a bit too straighfoward, like he has no adventure to speak of. The fights are creative but no one stand a chance against him and his methods. You need to find a editor that fix your english.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Your story is nice, but i think you making it too fast pace. pls make the a story a slight slow pace one. And the mc seems to be too op from the start, i don't mind it but other may. Anyway this is my first time giving a review to someone other than my own.
Grammar and spelling is not the best but honestly this fic nicknames their pokemon so it is an immediate drop lol every pokemon fic that uses nicknames IS A TRASH FIC. Don’t waste your time.
*wrote this after just 2 chapters were posted* So far it has been pretty good. The only real complaint I have is the massive amount of misspellings(??). More like using the wrong word for the sentence. Like after you write it you just use autocorrect and don't go back to reread it. Smile instead of small, fore instead of fire, and self instead of shelf just to name a few. Honestly pretty good start so far just correct the spelling. Good luck with this story(I'm not dropping). Thought this meme was relevant.
I mean it's a fun light read u don't really need to use you're head to enjoy it so I aprove especially since I'm mentally drained from pulling all nighters to review for my finals this year
This is a good Pokemon story, i just found it a bit too straighfoward, like he has no adventure to speak of. The fights are creative but no one stand a chance against him and his methods. You need to find a editor that fix your english.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Your story is nice, but i think you making it too fast pace. pls make the a story a slight slow pace one. And the mc seems to be too op from the start, i don't mind it but other may. Anyway this is my first time giving a review to someone other than my own.
Grammar and spelling is not the best but honestly this fic nicknames their pokemon so it is an immediate drop lol every pokemon fic that uses nicknames IS A TRASH FIC. Don’t waste your time.
*wrote this after just 2 chapters were posted* So far it has been pretty good. The only real complaint I have is the massive amount of misspellings(??). More like using the wrong word for the sentence. Like after you write it you just use autocorrect and don't go back to reread it. Smile instead of small, fore instead of fire, and self instead of shelf just to name a few. Honestly pretty good start so far just correct the spelling. Good luck with this story(I'm not dropping). Thought this meme was relevant.
I mean it's a fun light read u don't really need to use you're head to enjoy it so I aprove especially since I'm mentally drained from pulling all nighters to review for my finals this year