stellar job, thats my review. you made a well thought out military plot and a compelling MC, without the idiocies of wasted pawer or unrealistic flaws
ok, this is without a doubt the best writing i have found on this site....dear god thank you
brilliant effort, i know that its almost all new writing and that you changed some truly horrid and repetitive stuff, so thx for that
love the story so far i hope you can continue it
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love the story so far, the MC is chill and logical. i hope and am eager to see more of this
good story, love the shadow approach. make a patreon and stick to the story please, all the good earning writers try to finish 1 in 2 stories at least to keep an audience.
too much content, too much description without story advancement, you risk making a good character an edge lord, and there you will loose the story and your audience
love the story so far, i hope you stick to it. will you reveal the year where the story take place or are you hoping to divorce the story from reality ?
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my man ! thats the best gift you could have given us heathens and lurkers of the dark corners of this wretched site
Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
Book&Literature · JManM