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i think it was nice novel worth reading.i hope you can keep writting in future.would be nicer if you show or explain how pathfinder system works
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I like evething about this Story. I hope the author can ceep the upload stady again, 'couse i literaly crave what happens next. Not a day goes by that I am not thinking how the World around the Protagonist will develop.
Una kk no me gustó al pingo y hagance ql💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
I disliked it initially because of the weird split personalities, but this novel is excellent and definitely worth a try. Good stuff
Very good reading material I look forward to reading more fits my interests and has a very good reference towards several good games integrates aspects of them into the world in ways that are subtle but still noticeable
The story so far is great. Much better then all “game” type of novels, but still using some of the cliches (which I personally dislike). Stability of updates is a bit lacking, but if you read it after a serious number is out that won’t be a problem. Quality can be increased a bit, but is much higher then the average. World is not yet completed but sound realistic and interesting, complex as well. Characters have their personalities and while a bit shallow in comparison to famous books are better then most light novels, where only MC get screen time. They can at least say ‘no’ to him.
A good story, better than many works on this site. Are there any other races in this world, or only humans? I don't remember any other intelligent species being mentioned.
Very good, I'm looking forward to the next chapters 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit
I rarely find stories that interest me that way and hope that each chapter will be published. I still hope to see where Jacob goes and how they will build the world outside the city they are in.
Es una buena historia pero le vendría mejor un poco más de crueldad medieval. Recomiendo que a pesar de desarrollar los secundarios no dudes en sacrificarlos si se da la necesidad para desarrollar al principal no caigas en el romance demasiado pronto eso por lo general le quita chispa a la historia. Por lo demás buen trabajo y recuerda es tú historia así que tú criterio primero.
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I really love the authors wordmanship. What I mean to say is that the writing is so good that the author can fluently express what the characters truly feel on the inside. TBHbi suck at that.
I'm lazy to write a full review thisis good stuff, get into it, you won't be disapointed, and nice update rate, just hope writer won't burn himself.
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There aren’t many chapters so far and the story is just truly beginning and I’m not sure which direction it will take. So far this story has been very interesting and a somewhat different perspective. It is a fresh story and doesn’t have some of the annoying cliches similar books often have like seemingly no need to train.
Very interesting. What I like the most about this novel is the fact that everyone has character and his/her own agenda. Plots everywhere, and it never felt out of place. Setting has also been pretty realistic so far. Although I was a bit annoyed when the body's coinhabitant took the wheel, I quickly changed my mindset to "I'm reading a novel where MC has a multiple personality disorder, written from a perspective of one personality, which is kinda cool I guess?". But MC has been in control for the most part, which is nice. And it looks like stuff is about to change for the better, since those personalities started to interact with each other.
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Reveal Spoiler Early in the development yet much better then 99,9% of the novels in here. Would recommend to anyone who likes the related tags of ‘game world’, ‘adventure’ and the others. Characters are individuals and not lifeless bag of filling. Writing quality is great and the story is far from the cliches past the first two chapters.
Alright so imo this novel is worth a 4.6 even though its got good pacing and update stability. My problems for this novel are the story development and world background. Now don't get me wrong the story develops at a nice steady pace but all the traing could be sped up. Now my problem with the world background is that not much is known, like for example the MC doesn't know what the knights Academy is called this is just lazy writing in my opinion. Author could've said something along the lines of 'my "friend" Carl was supposed to be working on its story' or 'That "bastard" Carl was always slow in his work while goofing off' this is a way to slowly hint at the otherworld whilst also giving off slight info as a reason instead of resorting to the previously sloppy story background. Don't get me wrong I don't hate this novel I just have high expectations for it so forgive me if I'm hard on you Author I just love your novel and don't want it to fail.
Alright here is the first review. I like the book as a whole, but the lack of background of the mc before reincarnate is bugging me. The concept of having 2 person in a body is quite interesting and new for me. I think pace of the story will be quite slow, and it is fine, just hoping the release rate of the chapter will be high hahaha. I wrote this review om chapter 8.
This is a great book, just wish the updates would not be erratic. However, it is very well written.
i think it was nice novel worth reading.i hope you can keep writting in future.would be nicer if you show or explain how pathfinder system works
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I like evething about this Story. I hope the author can ceep the upload stady again, 'couse i literaly crave what happens next. Not a day goes by that I am not thinking how the World around the Protagonist will develop.
Una kk no me gustó al pingo y hagance ql💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
I disliked it initially because of the weird split personalities, but this novel is excellent and definitely worth a try. Good stuff
Very good reading material I look forward to reading more fits my interests and has a very good reference towards several good games integrates aspects of them into the world in ways that are subtle but still noticeable
The story so far is great. Much better then all “game” type of novels, but still using some of the cliches (which I personally dislike). Stability of updates is a bit lacking, but if you read it after a serious number is out that won’t be a problem. Quality can be increased a bit, but is much higher then the average. World is not yet completed but sound realistic and interesting, complex as well. Characters have their personalities and while a bit shallow in comparison to famous books are better then most light novels, where only MC get screen time. They can at least say ‘no’ to him.
A good story, better than many works on this site. Are there any other races in this world, or only humans? I don't remember any other intelligent species being mentioned.
Very good, I'm looking forward to the next chapters 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit
I rarely find stories that interest me that way and hope that each chapter will be published. I still hope to see where Jacob goes and how they will build the world outside the city they are in.
Es una buena historia pero le vendría mejor un poco más de crueldad medieval. Recomiendo que a pesar de desarrollar los secundarios no dudes en sacrificarlos si se da la necesidad para desarrollar al principal no caigas en el romance demasiado pronto eso por lo general le quita chispa a la historia. Por lo demás buen trabajo y recuerda es tú historia así que tú criterio primero.
Reveal Spoiler I really love the authors wordmanship. What I mean to say is that the writing is so good that the author can fluently express what the characters truly feel on the inside. TBHbi suck at that.
I'm lazy to write a full review thisis good stuff, get into it, you won't be disapointed, and nice update rate, just hope writer won't burn himself.
This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf This is good stuf
There aren’t many chapters so far and the story is just truly beginning and I’m not sure which direction it will take. So far this story has been very interesting and a somewhat different perspective. It is a fresh story and doesn’t have some of the annoying cliches similar books often have like seemingly no need to train.
Very interesting. What I like the most about this novel is the fact that everyone has character and his/her own agenda. Plots everywhere, and it never felt out of place. Setting has also been pretty realistic so far. Although I was a bit annoyed when the body's coinhabitant took the wheel, I quickly changed my mindset to "I'm reading a novel where MC has a multiple personality disorder, written from a perspective of one personality, which is kinda cool I guess?". But MC has been in control for the most part, which is nice. And it looks like stuff is about to change for the better, since those personalities started to interact with each other.
❤️❤️❤️💞💞🎉🎉❤️💞🎉❤️💋💗💓💓💓💖🎁🎁🎁😍💖💝❣️💝💙💙😙❣️💛💛💛💞💞🍾🍾🍻🍻💐💚💚🎁🎁💕😘💋💟💟💟💜💝💝💋💋💋😘😘💋💋💝💖🎂🎁💖💝💜💟💗💘💟💜💝💝
Reveal Spoiler Early in the development yet much better then 99,9% of the novels in here. Would recommend to anyone who likes the related tags of ‘game world’, ‘adventure’ and the others. Characters are individuals and not lifeless bag of filling. Writing quality is great and the story is far from the cliches past the first two chapters.
Alright so imo this novel is worth a 4.6 even though its got good pacing and update stability. My problems for this novel are the story development and world background. Now don't get me wrong the story develops at a nice steady pace but all the traing could be sped up. Now my problem with the world background is that not much is known, like for example the MC doesn't know what the knights Academy is called this is just lazy writing in my opinion. Author could've said something along the lines of 'my "friend" Carl was supposed to be working on its story' or 'That "bastard" Carl was always slow in his work while goofing off' this is a way to slowly hint at the otherworld whilst also giving off slight info as a reason instead of resorting to the previously sloppy story background. Don't get me wrong I don't hate this novel I just have high expectations for it so forgive me if I'm hard on you Author I just love your novel and don't want it to fail.
Alright here is the first review. I like the book as a whole, but the lack of background of the mc before reincarnate is bugging me. The concept of having 2 person in a body is quite interesting and new for me. I think pace of the story will be quite slow, and it is fine, just hoping the release rate of the chapter will be high hahaha. I wrote this review om chapter 8.
This is a great book, just wish the updates would not be erratic. However, it is very well written.