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Luca, killed by the Demon God, woke up to find himself back on the day the "Eternal Game" launched.
At this time, the game has just started, and Earth hasn't turned into a monster's paradise; everything is back to the beginning.
Determined not to let the tragedies of his previous life repeat, Luca, armed with ten years of gaming experience, re-enters the world of Eternal, only to awaken the unique SSS-level talent!
Starting with maxed charm!
As he enters the game, pondering how to enhance his strength.
A cold voice suddenly calls out: "Adventurer, wait a moment..."
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Well it good it line of story in my first read so I hope you surprise me more in this story.
It’s a really well built world and story, and a pretty decent read. However disclosed to future readers the trope of MC saving the world by himself is incredibly relevant. As such there’s almost 0 character development of the MC or those around him. No meaningful relationships are formed as Mc does everything by himself and hides all his plans from everyone around him. I say that because lots of people like the loner Mc vibe. I’m personally not a fan so I dropped after 150 chapters. I prefer meaningfully relationships. Also the tags harem or romance are incredibly misleading, over halfway through and there’s 0 romance, and the harem makes sense as every girl he runs into falls in love with him. Not a bad work, honestly well written and an absolutely great world and story though.
Big Plot Hole Duke Lyon's son Finn works together with mora family in SouthWind City using a blood sacrifice array along with the evil witch pandora to gain power and the sun divine spear in the secret academy realm they don't succeed They only partially succeed because of the protagonists interference, tens of thousands saw this and the city in the process got destroyed and after all this happens Finn the main instigator and villan is not even punished everyone including the author act like it did not happen at all despite the Academy Head Master, City Lord, Academy Guardian Elder, Multiple Teachers City Officials powerful family's of South wind City and tens of thousands of people and after all this everyone including the author act like it did not happen
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This novel is so captivating! Every book by the author is this interesting. I really enjoy it, and I will keep an eye on the follow-up plots of these novels. I hope you can maintain this level of writing.
Writing quality the words are incomplete at the end of sentences it is irritating can't get past few lines improve it.
It’s a great story and progresses quickly but still does enough world building to keep you enjoying the book. My biggest gripe with the story though is how often names, genders and numbers are mixed up or just plain wrong like the author isn’t paying attention to what is written in previous chapters as he writes the next. Still recommend to read but would be great if this issue would stop going forward.
Up to chapter 162 and it is by far my favorite VRMMORPG novel. Only downside is the author very often gets names and genders mixed up.
To be honest the quality of this novel is higher than the previous one. Author presented mc as an overpowered they have done a wonderful job in it but the aspect of romance in this novel rather than liking it is that I find it more annoying. Other than that this novel will be pretty much worth the read.
the story is really good and captivating, the only problem I have is that the chapters don't come out fast enough
This is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will be any yuri in the harem not a fan. That also means light yuri with the mc in threesome etc?
A very good novel, MC's grasp of the pace of growth is very good. The storyline of this novel is also very creative. It looks very satisfying!I want to recommend this book to my friends around me!
Though it's clear that the author still uses a translator, it's not a bad thing, it can be seen that this works has much higher quality than his previous "Awakening: The infinite evolution..." and the translator isn't used as often. The plot is very interesting and doesn't force an unnecessary "Butterfly effect" (At least for now MC just becomes aware that the situation was always bad but simply overlooked by everyone). Just like any book it has its own villains who are blinded by hate or simply lapdogs of someone "evil", but at least other characters have brain, different personalities and show normal human interaction skills. The whole world situation is clearly explained though MC becomes aware that he pretty much didn't know a lot about the world during the transition phase. Overall it's an enjoyable read.
4.6 stars it has a good story with massive amounts of Chapters being being released (18 a week). The mc gets op for his rank fast imo like in the first week of the game but also goes a dangerous way by taking quite a lot of risks and downplays them to his teachers and family. His interactions with his own family and teachers is good but he's degrading himself by allowing his neighbors daughter to command him around like nothing even though he already gets feedback from the game world. He also seems to be protective (I think it's the most appropriate) over her and his family. The world itself is inside the game good structured we also get a glimpse at the higher levels in a good amount. Another thing I wanted to point out is that this is either a translation or the author is no native English speaker and doesn't have an editor.
okay I'm at chapter 170 it actually does have a good storyline for the very few chapters that there is a storyline you will go sometimes one sometimes 12 chapters with overexplaining and nonsense I also don't agree with the insinuated rape and the forced marriage that seems to be what the story revolves around lately I understand this is somebody's story what pisses me off is I spend money on this story like everybody else unlock 50 chapters 25 of which are nothing but nonsense over explaining that is an immediate one star for me I'm not trying to knock down the author they have a good storyline they just need to concentrate more on the storyline and less unexplaining every little detail and backtracking to in my last life or having to listen to everybody in the city's thoughts on everything I agree a good story does have a lot of detail explaining but there is a such thing as over explaining that detail and this story has a lot of it but as far as the storyline goes the very little that has happened I'd give it five stars but for everything else it's one star
Starts of good but there is no character development either for the mc or side caharacters, what's worse is there are terrible plot holes, enough to make you drop the novel instantly like the issue with the Finn
Very good novel, I have read every one of your novels and will recommend them to others! that 's great! Can we update faster? I need more chapters!