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5 Stars for the Promo photo, that’s what got me to read this book wink wink nod nod
I have now read through all three! Thanks for the great creative work! I can advise varying the sentence structure to make it less of an imperative statement. I can also advise creating beginning and ending paragraphs for different scenes. Other than that, this is a great work. I would not have mentioned this much otherwise :)
Read up until here (max level for limited free reading.) Book was well-written, albeit having a bit of a convoluted nature between cultivation and awakeners. I also read that Undead Revival had nine chances, and about two chapters later it was written as three. As the only true error I found, this novel rates in the top 2% as far as good grammar and a correct nature are found.
Definitely well-written so far.
Off to a great start! Intrigue is well-placed.
Looking great so far!! Both Sniper Mage and this one are worth the effort!
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"Shadow slave... really?" He muttered, "I mean that's cool, especially since it's quite sunless here."
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