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Sin woke up in impel down with a bloodline, a devil fruit, and a weapon two years before the plot
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That's it, i might change the Synopsis later.
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Why Mc in fanfiction almost handsome?.. just make Mc that not handsome but have charisma or charm...dont aďd to many original character on his crew..it will make the story boring later ..just let the original story run... it will help ur story for a long run.
To be honest! This is a real masterpiece. If you're looking for a One Piece fanfiction then you just found one. Keep up your great work Author! Well that's all I had to say.
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Updateeeeeee pleaseeeeeee. Been waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting!! Your story is really very good man! Fast!! And please DO NOT drop this!!!
KAHUM* PERONA IS GAAAYYYYYYYYYY!!!! And I’m dead serious this **** ain’t funny, this is blatant betrayal and bull****. The mc is a egotistical fućk, and mind you, a useless FÛCK.
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Story is dropped, and new novel he started to rewrite this is also dropped. The writing style of the book was pretty bad, and world background unrealistic and has plot holes. Conversations switchbbetween : and ". Also scene switches with bunch of _ andtitle which ruined the flow. Was bland to, idk how this is above 4.2 at the very least Buf at least if u dont care and want naruto onepiece mix here ya go.
Good story, i recommend it ONE-PIECE FANS. ...................................,............................................................
Its actually a good fan-fiction I recommend it the story is pretty fast but its good lets see how it gets when he reaches the new world thats when everything starts.👍
don't drop pls...............................................................................................................................
A*** I wanted to read more ~.......... .... .... ...... Enjoyed the book very much ~ .. .. . . . Didn't know what to write, if I did it will be considered a spoiler ( and I didn't want to give any )
I like your story the only thing that I find irritating is the ghost gag and the Mc sometimes acting dense. I also think that you should improve his use of his powers and abilities : I think you are giving him many powers too soon and at the same time, without the Mc really knowing how to use /develop them in an efficient manners (or this is the vibe I get). Nevertheless thank you for your work... I am waiting for more chapters lol P. S. Could you add Robin as a pairing for the Mc?
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Hello, Greeting readers and author if you are there. This is my first review. *Gasp*... Yeah I know.... It's not that surprising. Anyways, I can't really put it to good words or something that can be perfectly explained. For a Fan-Fic... It's fucking amazing. The story, the progression, the characters and the excitement it all just.. I don't how to put it in words, it's beautiful, truly beautiful, magnifico. Since I am a big fan of One Piece, since it is the first anime but not the last I'll be watching. For a Fan-Fic of One Piece I didn't hate or despise it yet I enjoyed it with a smile. That is my review simple, easy, quick, understandable (unless you got issues... or maybe I do). Best Regards, No one really
I like the fact that the mc has the abilties of the sharingan so please make more amazing chapters that will make more people like the story
Author is on a break, but read this fanfic you won't regret it! It has everything a good fanfic need, the dynamic glow the reasonable characters, the fast pace. OP mc
This an amazing One piece fanfiction as the author is an amazing person! I see he dedicates a lot of time in doing this. And that's what I love about this author! Please everyone support me.
Shamless mode/ On: This is actually the fourth fan-fic I'm writing. I always liked the world of One Piece, but I forgot about so many things from the anime, and right now I'm struggling to remember the important characters, items, locations, and events. I'm using the One piece wiki to fill the gaps, so if you see any mistake or have a suggestion, please do tell.