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One in a billion/Uno en mil millones [English/Español]

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Author: Finlegost

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My name is Xelean, since I can remember I always saw strange shapes floating in my field of vision. When I asked my parents about it, they looked at me concerned, perhaps thinking that I had a vision problem. Seeing his reaction I quickly said that it was all a joke. However, when I learned to read, I understood a little better what those images with letters were thanks to the following message:
'Congratulations soul of the multiversal soul flow!!! You are the soul number 1 Billion that will be born in the world to which you were destined, in consideration and because the current situation of the world, certain benefits will be granted:
[User interface]
[Inspection]
[Accelerated balanced growth]

Sincerely, The Hive.'

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Author Note/Warning:
English is not my first language. One of the reasons why I started writing this is to improve my writing skills, so if you see any errors, please leave a comment.

In this work there may be similar things/references to different novels (from webnovel and outside of it), role-playing campaigns, movies, anime and manga; since they shaped the idea that I have of the stories and I think that, in part, many of the ideas that I have in mind are consciously or unconsciously inspired by them.

Character concepts:
https://www.insta gram.com/finlergost/

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Mi nombre es Xelean. Desde que tengo memoria siempre vi formas extrañas flotando en mi campo de visión. Cuando les pregunté a mis padres sobre el tema, estos me miraron preocupados, pensando tal vez que tenía algún problema de visión. Al ver su reacción me apresuré a decir que todo era una broma. Sin embargo, cuando aprendí a leer, pude entender un poco mejor que eran esas imágenes con letras gracias al siguiente mensaje:
'¡¡¡Felicidades alma del flujo de almas multiversal!!! Eres el alma numero 1000 millones que nacerá en el mundo al que fue destinada, en consideración a esto y a la situación actual del mundo se le concederán ciertos beneficios:
[Interfaz de usuario]
[Inspeccionar]
[Crecimiento equilibrado acelerado]

Atentamente, La Colmena.'

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Nota/Advertencia del autor:
A pesar de que el español es mi lengua materna, nunca antes había escrito una novela, por lo que puede haber errores gramaticales. Acepto comentarios y sugerencias.

En esta obra puede haber cosas similares/referencias a diferentes novelas (de webnovel y de fuera de ella), campañas de rol, películas, anime y manga; ya que dieron forma a la idea que tengo de las historias y creo que, en parte, muchas de las ideas que tengo pensadas están inspiradas consciente o inconscientemente en ellas.

Conceptos de personajes:
https://www.insta gram.com/finlergost/

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Stormzz
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The writing is alright. Punctuation could be better but aside for that it's fine. It does feel blunt, but that's expected if it's not a first language. The pacing is okay, but the information dumps and large paragraphs are jarring.

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