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The writing is alright. Punctuation could be better but aside for that it's fine. It does feel blunt, but that's expected if it's not a first language. The pacing is okay, but the information dumps and large paragraphs are jarring.
The writing is alright. Punctuation could be better but aside for that it's fine. It does feel blunt, but that's expected if it's not a first language. The pacing is okay, but the information dumps and large paragraphs are jarring.