Omni-Dimensional Chat Group

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DaoistOfeOTA

If author fixes the oc character attitude and doesn’t make his mc a gay like the last one I’ll give higher score

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Yuri_is_Ntr

Doesn't remember certainly, which author you are... The one who write about annoying female oc that was a total beach, that gains a lot of cheats and main character undying simpness? Well, don't do it again. Simple, right?

LV 4

jinmorifan_2

This is my review as of Chapter 17 for those desktop users. Anyways this has every problem that most cliche chat groups have; the MCs with one brain cell revealing every valuable information or futures about the Chat Group members. Let's give an example: If you or I were to wake up today and were presented with a virtual interference in which it was revealed that you were just a fictional character and that you never 'existed' in the real world, how would you feel? Someone who was solely created just to entertain a higher dimensional being which could be especially humiliating if you had a tragic backstory.... Ignoring the absurdity, let's focus on why it was a dumb move: the future information may just be a story to the MC but to the actual Group Chat members it's like an accurate prophecy that's subject to change and instead of the MC using it as a bargaining stick; you instead simply leak it for free.... without getting any compensation in advance......... A dumb MC is a no-go for me; I can handle weak-willed MC's if they eventually get their resolve but a MC who can't think about the ramifications of his actions unless their consequences reach him is not one I can bother with.

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Raviel

Question is the brother of Ryuu is still going to reincarnate?

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ANelite

As long as this isn't like your previous fanfic It's all good and I will give you a higher rating , alright 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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DaoistOfeOTA

Ladies and gents one and all it is with great happiness I can now say author has finally found his way back to the good side and gotten rid of the feminization thing AND is also changing the fl to not be so annoying anymore. Now for those are still on the fence about reading this I’ll try to summarize, mc is a poor kid from phillipines and gets the chat group through a phone his dad gets him in the group he has rias from dxd, gojo from jjk, shinobu from demon slayer, and negima from uq holder so far not really a lot has happened but from what has is mc get power mc goes to train meet thugs then fight boss of thugs where he learns his og world is supernatural. Id rate this story about a three cause the writing feels how u say sorta immature? Like makes the bad people extremely bad so u hate them and has random pov of mc fighting them in a mobs eye to seem cool but come across kinda cringe hopefully author can grow from here because this looks to be a great multiversal fic in the making so long as some changes are made

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BoTMaster

I even only kept reading until chapter 3🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Multiverse chat. Mc Asian. Mc femboy. Mc very stupid. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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ThreshGasm

My only hope is that you won't go the disease corruption ..type of powers again, we've already read your story rewritten twice with the same powerset . Please at least change them !!!

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The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]

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DaoistFQhUey

Ay que buenos recuerdos me trai esto sigue como vas espero con ansias los próximos caps nos vemos sayonara viejo ( ¿Que prefieres gatos o perros? )

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Asura69s

I honestly think that this novel has huge potential just plz don't ruin it. A good story with better background and op skills just that and it will be op

LV 1

Vayuthep

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Maycon_Henrique_10

Mano ignora os comentários negativos muitas pessoas tentam escrever histórias ou desisto em delas por causa de comentários idiotas de pessoas com inveja continue com a história eu sei que você consegue 😁😁😁👍👍👍

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MissRias

My afternoon novel full of fetishes is back... I love it :D... to accumulate up to 100 chapters

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Raviel

Question is this novel going to have the same arc like the second version or it's change?

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omnioutergod

this you're 3rd one the secound one was better then the original but will drop it once you get to dxd arc beacuse i'm won't read this if so

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DaoistzHD2nM

Me gustó mucho me parece una buena perspectiva de como cambiar la historias Esperó no la abandones 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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Rex_Salamander

Just wanna say I Have High Hopes for this Rewrite.

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89Mouraai98

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