ahmad_wahid

ahmad_wahid

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2023-01-18 Joined Global
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ahmad_wahid
20 hours ago
Commented

Will it be a world that is only visited once and only revisited at the end of the series? Or even forgotten? Damn there are so many such mulitivers works where the mc ends up forgetting the first girlfriend

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ahmad_wahid
20 hours ago
Commented

thanks for this chapter

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ahmad_wahid
1 days ago
Commented

what really happened I think something was missed because katara suddenly got cranky, damn you should have made a scenario of katara wanting to judge, not when she came out of the investigation, and was blocked by soldiers

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ahmad_wahid
4 days ago
Commented

I reread this series, although I had already read until mc awakened onoki's martial soul, but the point is that after I reread from the journey of reading a lot of soul land fanfiction and fandoms, I realized that mc really cheated, this reminded me that it was your series that attracted me to read soul land fanfiction.[img=recommend]

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ahmad_wahid
5 days ago
Commented

hey, you're serious about time travel, fun concept and at the same time annoying

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ahmad_wahid
8 days ago
Posted

I give you 5 stars, although there is no special reason, but the world mc lives in is very extraordinary, the world that was previously semi-supernatural has completely changed to supernatural, increasing the danger level of the world.

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ahmad_wahid
8 days ago
Posted

good story and I enjoyed it, maybe the drawback is that it is too ua and too many oc characters so that the characters in the original work story don't really have a role, you can say that the original characters who can be said to be additional characters turn into low-level npc characters who don't need their presence, and this makes the characters who have an important role in the original story turn into supporting characters who pass by because they don't really affect the plat in general.

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ahmad_wahid
8 days ago
Posted

I don't know whether this is your work or not, and it seems like your mother tongue is not English, the English here is very messy, what is meant by elder or senior in Mandarin or Chinese culture has instead turned into an adult, but this story can still be read, even though the English writing is messed up

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