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Roberts now having avenged his daughter's death finds peace in the embrace of death, but finds himself in a tricky situation as a R.O.B presents him with a deal he couldn't deny. watch as he navigated through thee dangerous world and bring his clan to the top
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Also i will saying it now for those who want to write a review here, please leave an actual valuable and real reason why you like this Book, I am saying this because some just wrote a review that was just him basically hating on the MC, If you hate the Mc then just drop the book, but i will be turning a blind eye to those who drop a five star rating *Wink*. This is a screenshot of the review for those who didn't see it before I deleted it :
It's alright. Not bad, but not great either. The dialogue felt a bit stiff and didn't flow quite as smoothly as it should have. A few points made me wonder if they made sense or not. Like the MC being told there was iron near his new territory. By itself it's not a big deal but he from the context in the story it seems like there was hardly any time for anyone to go prospecting for ores or minerals. Another was when everyone was seemingly confused by the Naras genius plan. It literally only consisted of having a frontline battle with a group targeting the enemies rear. Nothing complex at all.
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The story is alright but the R.O.B. stuff goes on for 4 chapters and you just hope the God will shut up as soon as possible but he doesn't. the author tries to inject emotional situations into the story but they are horrbily forced, from the no-option, option about his family to Yamamoto and his adopted son; comes out of no where, no build up, and in scenarios they don't fit. Grammar isn't great. lots of missing words or unfinished sentences. spacing errors. if you get past all that there is an intriguing plot and characters that havent been applied in this manner. it has potential if the authors writing gets better but at this point its just average.
This story has so much potential, but all I can say is please get an editor for this. The grammar can sometimes be bad. I'm only giving it 3 stars for now. It currently has 25 chapters, and it may become good later on, at which point I will change my rating. However, if it becomes worse, I will leave my current rating.
Its a unique story different from other naruto fanfics. I loved the story. Please update moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....[img=update]
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I'm going to give a 5 star review because I love the world of naruto, I also love the clan boss or kingdom building theme, the only flaw was the clan's powers, which are good but without the potential to face an otsutsuki, another thing, no You can write a Naruto fanfic and the protagonist doesn't have doujutsu
Best Naruto fanfic Iโve read so far & I read hella of them, and they usually all have they same type of reincarnated story were they grow up in the Leaf Village. But this story brings something new & better. ๐ฏ๐ฅ thatโs my opinion ๐คท๐พโโ๏ธ
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Hey Author here. Don't mind me just shamelessly giving myself a five star review for my hard work. Although there are and will be some mistakes, I advise you look past those and just enjoy the book. Don't forget to leave your reviews after you read the first Arc