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I couldn't get past the first chapter even though I would like to read this novel. My head hurts from reading it. You know, there are a lot of tools out there to help with writing if your English isn't good, like Grammarly if you want to write by yourself, or ChatGPT to fix errors, etc. And the systems are stupid. Why would anyone want a system? I'm starting to get annoyed with all these system novels. Some are good, but people don't have the imagination to create their own skills for their characters and just copy-paste skills from every anime, movie, etc. It's so boring.

Man, this story would have been good, but you just sped through everything, and the spelling is awful. Maybe use ChatGPT and copy-paste your words, and just say 'revised version with corrected grammar,' and tada, it will fix all your writing with no added things, just the way you wrote it but much better.

"OMG, this is AI-generated. I don't mind it, but man, when you know the AI writing style, you can't enjoy the story because it feels off and lacks a human touch. You just give the AI a rough idea and make it write the whole story. It feels so annoying to read.

Lol, I read the whole novel, 16 chapters, and so far, it's bad. The names on web novels are always different from what's expected. Even the R.O.B thought he was stupid for picking a god because he had too much responsibility. So far, all I see is an arrogant MC just because he became a god. Sorry for pissing you off because I criticized your new favorite novel. Lol.

Okay, the "Asian" thing—this kind of racism is what I hate about Chinese novels. They think they are above everyone. But what's funny is that race is not defined by color, but by nature. By nature, we are all human. We are not insects or animals who only follow their instincts.

Why would anyone choose to be a god in Marvel? It's so stupid. I don't mind it that much, but it's boring as hell. I will keep reading, but if I change my mind after a few more chapters, I will rewrite this review.

Okay, I'm not going to get into too much detail on this novel because I don't want to spoil it for people, but I'm on chapter 10. Man, does this guy love collecting female leads. There are about 20—I'm not sure, I lost count, maybe more, maybe less. Oh man, this story feels fun to read, but this kid is collecting women left and right, and he's only 9 years old so far. There is no time skip, and it's getting on my nerves now.

Dude, you’re deleting my valid review for no reason. I gave you a good review earlier, but you’re just mad because I told the truth.

This is annoying. Every sentence starts with "you said," "you did," "you made," "you sighed." Why don't you use the character's name instead of "you" in every sentence? It's annoying as hell. deleted it was 3 stars but i will give this 1 star now

Okay, I'm just saying people will not like this kind of writing style. Why delete my review? I'm stating a fact here, and I didn't give you a 1 star; I gave you 3 stars because I enjoyed it despite the "you" in every sentence. That is not immersive at all. You're trying to push your kind of immersion onto people. Immersion is someone imagining that they are the MC and using their imagination.

Well, it's quite good, but this is just the Harry Potter story with some extra elements like his mother and the magic they got, and his personality. Overall, the story is boring. I would rather read the original Harry Potter books because this novel is kind of boring. I'm on chapter 10 and I feel like I'm wasting my time. You said OP Harry, but I don't see him being OP. He seems quite weak from what I can see. I will keep reading up to chapter 30, but I hope to see some changes soon.

It's not immersive; it's annoying as hell. Immersive means imagining yourself as the MC, not the author trying to force it on you. You can rewrite it; it's not hard. I already know how Webnovel Create works. You just need to go through every chapter, edit it, and change it. It's super cringe seeing "you" in every sentence. It ruins any kind of immersion.

This is really disappointing. I don't know why this has a 4.9 rating. I think people just gave that because of the first few chapters. But this novel becomes just like all the other Japanese manga novels: a naive MC who is also weak. His childhood friend betrays him and puts him in real danger that could have killed him, yet he forgives her. This is super disappointing. I thought this was good at first, but now it's just a cliché JP novel and not worth wasting your time on.

Writing Quality: Good Stability of Updates: 11 months for 46 chapters Story Development: The MC follows the plot. Character Design: The MC doesn't know whether to act like a normal human or a psychopath. And don't get me started with that love destiny stuff from Twilight. Overall, his character is all over the place. World Background: It's just Earth. There is no world background, no exploring the mystery of where the vampires or werewolves come from, etc.