Reviews of Naruto The Big boss in front the scenes by Ashborn_57 - Webnovel

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FinaLb0ss

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Sad_Vip

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Vridragor

Great Work. But have you stopped writing. please update......,..................................................,............ please update

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starking

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Asura_Sword

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V_Greed

The author doesn't know how to write in proper English sentences, making it hard to understand what the author is trying to get across. What's really annoying is how the author adds in words they didn't have to in a sentence. also it feels like the story was just randomly putting plot points together in beginning

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LoverOfGula

bro is he gonna end up with your random civilian oc just because tsunades his cousin which doesnt matter since hes reincarnated and didnt grow up with her? plus hes seven so why force fate energy to magically make him like people. everything else is good tho

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Stifa_Hexananda

Yah ini sangat bagus tapi menurut saya hanako sgt menggangu kehidupan dan juga energi takdir terlalu mengada ngada tidak relevan terhadap ceritanya jadi ceritanya sedikit kacau

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DaoistGsSe3J

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TheVersalStudios

The story is good but nothing to write home about. He suffers from the syndrome that the MC is a super genius but behaves like someone average throughout the novel. It often happens a lot because very few people can make a genius correctly because the authors are totally average people, in intelligence at least. For the rest, the plot is entertaining but that the improvement of the mc depends so much on the AI ​​is a bit annoying. Otherwise it is fine. Keep up the fanfic.

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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DaoistgD2KUM

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Might_Cho

if you love 1. Cold MC 2. Researcher MC 3. Chip System 4. OP MC Then this novel is for you ....................................................

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zither_immortal

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skysiam

good one i love it Keep up the good work❤️❤️❤️gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

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LordLukas

Fanfic Very promising, I hope it doesn't fall............................................. . Do not fall......................do not fall............................. ................................

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The_Fallen_Eroge

The development of the story is good if you ignore some minor things. The only missing in the story is the 'emotion', it feels rathe empty like reading a monologue with robotic intonation. But i am pretty sure that this is fixable. -kudos

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Xenodia

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Vasiliy

interesting

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Poseidon_1_

Honestly, I slightly doubted it at the begining but I like the way its going with him taking a science route similar to the one naruto fanfic which had 92 chapters as of making this. Liking the interactions between characters as well as his bloodline. System is helpful tool for research and improvement but he’s not too relaint on it! Overal I’m loving it and want more chapters :)

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VEYN

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Philip_Junhi

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ManSpider11

It's a great naruto fanfic with a lot of potential since this era is rarely used, and you can even experiment with it a little bit. Now I have a recommendation for the Love Interest.Since he's a Senju and he is gonna be the Third Hokage, I recommend Tsunade so for "bloodline purity" and so they can keep the power of the Hokage to themselves(The Senju) since no one know he is a senju, and with that, the child could be the 4th or 5th Hokage without the people knowing it's another pure blooded senju. , An Uzumaki for tightening the alliance between Uzio and Konoha. It will definitely provide a strong heir whether be it chakra, kenjutsu, vitality, fuinjutsu, or ninjutsu. An Uchiha to strengthen the loyalty of the Uchiha to konoha, and providing a strong heir with senju vitality, uchiha sharingan, and kenjutsu. Last Option is a leading clan from other villages(least likely) for an alliance.

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Ashborn_57

Hello! there Author here! , I am a senior highschool student average family but when I watch Naruto and anime it makes me feel happy. So I wrote a fanfic during my time in 2 day break hope you enjoy I would try to post at least a chapter a day. Peace out✌️

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mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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Gd_Sys

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