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LV 12

ZeroX0666

What an amazing read! The author did a great job with this and I can tell he really loves and cares for the story, I can feel the emotions leaking from the words, I can tell the characters are people and not just characters. Lovely.

LV 2

NotBeatrix

The emotions are on high with this one! The begining of it pulls you in from the first page. The author does a really good job of setting the mood and the feel. You can tell that the mc feels like his whole life is really a tragedy and you really get that vibe with every chapter that makes it make sense. While slow at first, it does start to pick up in the later chapters. I will say there are a few grammatical errors here and there and sometimes the settings are really described, but besides that this story is pretty interesting so far. It seems different than other stories dealing with topics like this so I commened the author. Readers check this story out!

LV 3

Rubindeepkaur

The word choice of the author is perfect! No one can deny that the beginning of the story is so interesting that it leaves readers going in-depth reading the tale. The author has a higher chance of taking off his book, provided he writes more engaging chapters.

LV 1

Alucard1111

A friend recommended this. Emotion is really strong here, like a novelised anime. Exactly my thing. It's tragic what happened in the later chapters but i guess it's meant for the greater good of the plot. Hoping for more

LV 4

inflict

Hmmm... written in first POV. Interesting plot. There's a lot of emotions poured down in the available chapters. Keep it up, author!

LV 4

DaoistvODbDR

Good wordbuilding, the characters are well immersed in the storyline, I like your interesting opening, good work author, waiting for more chapters, I recommend the novel.

LV 2

_jessitayylor

The beginning already won me as a loyal reader. As someone who enjoys dark themes, I enjoyed the ride. The MC isn't OP, has proper development and the grammar is perfect! I look forward to where the story goes from here. Great work dear author!

LV 3

Drava_Don

Though it's just a few chapters updated so far, it nonetheless was an amazing intriguing story, honestly didn't find any fault in it, proper Grammer and punctuations, would urge readers to definitely give it a try, trust me it's worth the read, just wish the author would update more frequently 😄

LV 2

GODOFCAT

the plot was amazing really the writing quality was definitely great I can visualize what I read and the updating stability... 2 chap a week was... 4 star

LV 1

Scorpious_star

amazing writing skills from the Author. The book itself has a way to drae the reader in. I was impressed by the Mc's development and adaptation is very well written makinf it easier to understand the plot setting. A good read 👏🏼

LV 15

William_Pendragon

An interesting concept and certainly original idea by the author, I recommend giving it the book a try, especially if readers enjoy very dark themes!

LV 2

Jihyoyo747

A fantasy novel worth reading. The premise, characters, plot, and Worldbuilding are good. The author still got a lot of potential to improve. I recommend this novel to all fantasy readers out there.

LV 14

Light_ray

The title in itself somewhat mysterious and intriguing. The synopsis showed a quick character of MC and then the chapters depicted about his mysterious behavior. The chapters ended at cliffhanger especially the 4th one, where he recalled what he did in past. Bring more chapters, author😊. Don't hesitate to read this story and support the author😍

LV 13

Pinkyprincess

All I could say after reading the story is wow! So good! The first chapter was min blowing. I just feel bad for the main character. Why him? I want him to feel happy! Sigh, let's read the story and find out what happens next!

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

Splendid! Just splendid! The narration was a flowing waters and imagery was vivid. From regression to transmigration! The plot is mysterious yet alluring. I am impressed with the story and it captivated my curiosity. Good luck and hope you improve more...the best is yet to come [img=recommend]

LV 1

DaoistSword1

As a fan of dark themes and stories filled with emotions, I am totally up for this one. The first chapter totally hit me... the darkness in it... i fricking love it... keep it up author.

LV 1

Nefariousnesscity

Weak to strong. Hmm. The phasing is good and not insta-"MC OP" in a few chapters and giving backstories in return. This was carefully crafted. Well done 👌

LV 2

SmilesS

Stands out amongst alot of generic and dis-interesting tower or fantasy web-novels due to it's beginning and focus on being "dark". Most of the story flows well is neatly spaced and is easy to read. Avoids "rushing" the introduction. Only issues in between sentences are words that don't need to be there, or are unnecessarily "bulking" it and minor grammatical errors. World is relatively fresh given how early at the time this review is (Chapter 7) but hoping it will not devolve into generic tower replica. Novel has alot of potential to do well, just needs more frequent updates besides what was already said.