/ Fantasy / Modern "Fake": Requiem
Synopsis
An ace student, Mark Foiler, graduated as a STEM student with the course "Bachelor of Computer Science". Whilst in the middle of an online presentation, he sees an ominous light coming near his neighbor's house. His curiosity got the better of him, trying to discover what it is before recklessly entering it. Thanks to the internet and a couple of virtual friends, he manages to leak out the information to the public, but is stopped by police officers, having tracked his true IP address, he escapes the only path he knows how, he goes through the portal and ends up in a fantasy world of swords and magic. Now entering one of the three portals laid throughout Earth, he tries his best to live his new life, with the remaining knowledge he has to get out of this world and to clear his name, not knowing an outside force has already manipulated him into doing so and had placed a bounty on him; giving him more of a reason to get out.........
A failure reborn facing against the world who simply wanted to escape their harsh reality. He who wants to get out is hunted over all dimensions and every narrative. Question is, will he succeed? Will it be worth it all? Will he find new allies? Or will they simply refuse as they're simply helping the man who brought chaos upon their grand reverie?
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First and foremost, congratulations on your debut. The novel's pilot appears to be intriguing. The plot has promise. Okay, here's my critique of the story; I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, so I hope you use this feedback to improve. The dialogue of the characters should be highlighted: quote it in the next paragraph or type it in italics. And for the following scenes, be generous with "spaces" so that the readers are more curious and can feel the excitement of what will happen in the next scene. "Cliff hanger" is the best way to end the chapter. These minor details are necessary because they give the story soul and emotion.